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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #345 on: August 15, 2010, 04:50:32 PM »
Chronin's hair was all the way up, but he just sat there, waiting to go off. He slowly got out of his seat, and punched a a hole through the wall that jaSON fixed after he pulled his fist back. He went up to his room and closed the door before pulling out his comm, not expecting her to pick up at all, but leaving a delayed message for when her frustration is hopefully gone. "My parents made their relationship work, what makes me any different?" He ended the call and went back downstairs with his armor on, and his hair went down when he said his good-bye to Granny Vix and walked out with Tabby. "I think I liked it better when nobody cared what I did as long as I got results..."
"From suffering I was born, From misery I was conceived. From the plight of Mortals I thrive, From the pits of Hell I rise, beware...... For I live.........."

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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #346 on: August 15, 2010, 05:53:16 PM »
Once again Leo wrapped his arms around her, and tried to remember some officers who may know her, that he's met at the lab "Dohitri, Jack, Nohrman, Jacob, Newman," he recited before looking up thoughtfully trying to to remember the other one. "I do belive, there was a dragon that's real close to her... that I heard of, his name excapes me"
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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #347 on: August 15, 2010, 07:10:25 PM »
"Why is it everyone either wants to kill me or arrest me. There was no law on that planet, murderers and rapists kept getting away with what they did. So i did what i needed to do, i saved as many people as i could. Also i dont much like the idea of being arrested for helping people. Let me talk to your commanding officer, i know my rights." Yu-Razul was about to lose it, they were going to arrest him, not they had the wronge man. All he'd ever done is help people, someone was setting him up. The fire within him was reaching its peaking point he'd have to decide what to do with it soon.
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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #348 on: August 15, 2010, 08:38:56 PM »
Tess raised her eyebrows, looking from David to the still cracked ICU window "I'm guessin' that was your guy then..." She shook her head, frowning "The guys screwed... Justice system? There is no justice here...." Her frown disappeared as she nodded to Annie, winking "But so long as you got friends in high places here... You just about safe bro... Saved me from a couple o' nicks didn' ya Miss Yantova..."

Annie sighed "Yes, but that was for you stealing a spare central processor for RUST-E... Not quite the same as damaging Mechanicus property..."She turned to David, shrugging "But she's right... You get the money in the right hands, and from the right people, and anything goes... As for parts, well Tess here can probably find you the best prices... She knows people, or at least knows who to scam..."
Tess waved to David at her mention, looking rather smug with herself. Beside her RUST-E gave a whistle of exasperation, and if he had them, he would have rolled his eyes...




As Reggie slammed his head into the glass, the officer jumped to his feet, muffled shouting hear through the thick pane. Suddenly, with a sharp crack and smell of Ozone, the glass electrified. Reggie was hurled back across the cell, as the door slid open again.
 A single security guard raised his rifle, and fired a metalic dart into Reggie's neck. As his eyes fluttered closed, the officer walked closer to the glass, talking out of the corner of his mouth to a guard standing beside him "Find out who this scavenger he told us about is... Though i have a suspicion I know her name already..." The guard beside him nodded hurriedly, walking quickly away as the officer continued to watch as Reggie was cuffed....
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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #349 on: August 15, 2010, 10:31:47 PM »
Tabby slipped her small hand into his, and looked up at his solid and serious face.
"So where we going?" She was smiling.





"Find him, get him, we need him." Leia looked up into his eyes, showing her tears flowing without constraint. "What rank is he? Where's his house, his station, where?" She kept pulling at his clothes, gripping and releasing.





"Calm down, Yu-Razul," said the left gunman. "Your rights do not affect the fact that you are under arrest, and that you should put your hands out in front of you and move towards us so we can restrain you." The other man sighed.
"These guns aren't for show, mister."






David folded his arms.
"Well maybe he needs a little time in prison, unless you're gonna buy him out. I can barely afford the engine parts." He thought for a moment, and looked back at Jaack's covered body. "To be honest, I dont think I would take even if you did get him. He can rot here if he has to. I'm not gonna deal with his issues, and fly a ship." He turned and followed Tess with a jog, catching up to her, before looking back at Annie. "If you really want him, he's your responsibiliy, not mine!" He almost had a spring in his step; a weight lifted from him, as he walked in step with the young girl. He looked down to her and talked about his ship; the rattling engine, the whines and the whispers during jumps, the occasional cut outs.



Reggie opened his eyes, and found himself in the same room, or what he thought was that room. Now, however, the window was gone, covered in more padded wall. He tried to get up, and felt his arms stuck, bound to his body. His feet too, were stuck together. Looking down he saw his straight jacket, that spread down his legs, tying himself up like a caterpillar in a cacoon. The only thing free was his head, and his breathing was getting harsh.
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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #350 on: August 15, 2010, 10:42:49 PM »
He looked up at the sky and thought about it for a moment. "To be honest, I am a bit pent up, but I really don't want to knock you up until at least a year into the relationship. Its your call when we get to my place..."

As they walked down the street, one could notice there were a few muggers hiding in the alleys, but none of them dared make a move until Chronin passed by and kept going for two further blocks. He was unaware of the small fry however, since he was contemplating the kind of situation he got himself into. He contemplated telling her to come by the port tomorrow, but she might not even have her own place since shes a mercenary of questionable origin.
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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #351 on: August 16, 2010, 12:23:23 AM »
Looking back into her eyes he began to think for a bit trying to recall the answers for the questions she was asking with no luck. Shakeing his head a bit leo could only respond with a simple and regretful"His station is another two, three blocks from here, but he could be off-duty at this time, other than that, I dont know..."
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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #352 on: August 16, 2010, 12:56:12 AM »
She frowned at him, and felt his frustration in his walk, forceful and restless. Her frown deepened, and she took a breath, before pulling him to stop, to face her.
"Okay, okay, date's over. You've had a bad day, and I guess I should leave you alone to deal with it." She let go of his hand, and scratched her nose. "I'll see you at the port tomorrow, and I'll join you on this adventure, but the way you're acting now? I'm having doubts about us as a couple." She reached forward and patted his chest. "I only date men, and you're pouting like a teenager." With a swish of her tail, she turned and walked off into an alley.






Leia got a spark of light in her eyes, and beamed a smile. "Good, take me there!" She grabbed his hand and pulled him along in the direction he had pointed, not knowing where to turn, just knowing the answer might be somewhere there. She needed to be free from the song, faster than anything else in the world.
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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #353 on: August 16, 2010, 01:45:23 AM »
Nearly falling over, surprised that she began walking so soon "Theres a smile!" Leo said, he moved his feet a bit quicker untill he was next to her and matched her pace. He began humming along the walk to pass the time seeing how long it might take to get there.
"While we walk could..." he began to think about it and shook the thought off before saying "Nevermind" not wanting her to spontainiously cry once again.
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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #354 on: August 16, 2010, 03:13:17 AM »
"I see, well then it seems you win." Yu-Razul put his hands in front of him, as the man came to place the restraints on him he released his inner flame. The blast engulfed the entire maintenence passage, after the blast Yu-Razul dropped and tumbled behind the flaming guards and pulled his blaster pistol firing at them. He quickly calmed himself and continued to move thorugh the ship. He would gain control of whatever ship they were using to escape. Yu-Razul was now dead, he had to become someone knew.
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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #355 on: August 16, 2010, 03:27:44 AM »
Chronin stood there for a moment, and three options stood before him. His first one would be to follow Tabby and see where she lives, which probably wouldn't go over well. The second would be to head home and just put the frustration behind him like before. Then there was the third option his mother presented of finding out more about what he was, which might improve his mood before he went home.

He made a right at the next block and started following the directions to his mother's hideaway. In only a few minutes he was at the door and he knocked on it lightly, then nutted up and made his knock louder. He was then yanked back a few inches by his hair while his mother stood behind him. "I thought I said tomorrow..." "No, you said 'later'..." she shrugged and let go as they both went inside and Chronin sat down on a chair, only to be pulled back up and pushed against a wall. "You don't get to sit down until you forget about what happened during dinner..." she said firmly to a rather confused Chronin.

"I'll assume you came over to find more about your heritage and not just as a reason to **** around." she stated before sitting down on a recliner in front of him. "We're a loose coalation of powerful beings that reside in a dimension where emotion has a physical presence, like the Everflame but we have more where that one rock came from. We all have our own individual powers, but most of us have the ability to either read the minds, or the motives of those around us. Some of us change form depending on our emotions, you inherited that through your rising and falling hair. However, we all have the ability to take more than one form, and so do you but what is more important is finding your unique power." Her eyes flashed and Chronin felt his mind being pried open as she tried to force him to change to his 'light' form.

"You'll be done changing long before tomorrow, but you won't be leaving this house until you finish resting your new body..."
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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #356 on: August 16, 2010, 05:33:17 AM »
"Due process?"  Nero raised his eyebrow at the word.  "I don't know what that is but it sounds like it may take a while.  I'm willing to wait but if it takes too long I may decide to take it myself.  You see...I'm not like my 'friends', as you call them.  Of course you already know that."  Sighing, he leaned his head in his hand and looked up at the officer tiredly.  "I have a feeling that 'due process' will not be a factor in all of this, thankfully."



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« Reply #357 on: August 16, 2010, 01:21:22 PM »
Leia pulled his hand along to grab his arm and hold it to her. "Tell me, tell me now. Anything you have to say, I don't have time for half sentences." Her voice was stronger, calmer, now she was on the right track, until she stopped at a T-junction. "Which way?" She tugged on his arm.




The female voice yelled out somewhere down the ship. "He's making a run for it! Plan B!" There was a beep, a click, then the wall beside Yu-Razul burst open. The flames of the blast sucked out and fading into deep space, dragging all the air out, and pulling the dragon too.





"Why wouldn't it be a factor?" said the officer, hands firmly behind his back, standing tall. "You're waiting until you get the Everflame, and honestly I think you should get it, and so do a lot of important people. You'll get it when we've gone through the procedures for you to have it. So sit tight. It'll only take a couple of weeks."
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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #358 on: August 16, 2010, 03:13:14 PM »
Annie nodded dumbly, watching as David walked away with Tess... "Yeah, i guess your right... wait, what?" She shook her head, taking a double-take at what David had just said. She stood up hurriedly, tail flicking "What kinda friend are you!?" She sighed, realising that neither of them could actually hear her. She sighed, looking back at the sleeping form of Blaze...

The same Dark-furred guard who had restrained her earlier walked into the ICU, quickly walking up to Annie he drew his pistol and magno-cuffs "Miss Yantova? I need you to come with me, if you struggle i will be forced to restrain you... sir..."




Tess walked alongside David, grinning as the conversation turned to ship engineering "Ah, sounds like you gotta problem with the velocity compensator.... Me and Rusty could take a look at it for ya... That might not even need replacin'.... We can take a look over everythin' else while we're at it... Free of charge of course bro.." RUST-E whirred up alongside them, only just keeping up as he zigzagged between peoples legs....
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« Reply #359 on: August 16, 2010, 03:20:50 PM »
Leo nods to the left a bit "We need to take a left" leading her in the direction he just pointed." Looking over to her he decided to repeat the question he was going to ask earlier "What got you so scared? I've never really seen anyone... scared to the point of tears." as they were walking another road came up makeing a turn there then said "The station is just ahead"
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