jeeze guys, i had like almost two pages worth reading how do you expect me to keep up if you don't take a break
. Ok so will's mom killed to send a message to will to stay away, and to make Alex think its her fault, making her stop talking to him. The other two where beaten up, not kidnapped, for me some lolz >w>, and like the calm before the storm, I threw in ho'en's name to see if that would be taken any where.
Also alex's dad was there when he killed her, so it would be ok if he now is having second thoughts, just saying, and lol ma papy where's the pants. I don't see the point of leaving alex isn't in danger, and if anything you could work at the angle that her father was starting to resent my father.
And why are there two normal people (other then the fact that will may be a little bi polar
), two political people, a prince, and now a gansta? ((idk where kitt would fall))
By the way muscular bear, Idk about you, but after getting beat within an inch of there life most people wouldn't be so smooth. And also please don't control my minions, cutting the tires would be to much for them, and dosent make sense with the plot.
Also emrelda god modding?? I just had some goons beat people up, and kill a hospitalized women, nothing extreme.