Becoming Alive

[Nrein]

So, as some of you may know, I've been working on a story for quite some time. Well, I'm pleased to say that my first part, The Rebirth of Hope, is finally complete! As the whole first part is rather large, I'll just add it as an attachment, and you can get one of two copies, either a copy with or a copy without the opening prologues, which are separate from the actual first part. Hope you all enjoy, and can't wait to hear some feedback! =3         

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[icy wolf]

i downloaded it , ill give you some feed back once i read it