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I'm actually starting a furry story and I have done my first chapter today. I wanted to post it so you guys could read it and comment on things I could ameliorate (it can be gramaticly or upon the story line) ... Ideas are accepted, but please make constructive comments if you want to ameliorate some stuff... Thanks guys and here ish may story ( I have not found a title yet) :
Chapter 1I looked at the time on my watch. I had been waiting here for fifteen minutes now but I didn’t care as they were minutes I had in advance. I crossed one leg over the other while unfolding my arms to extend them on the park bench, letting the wind float around me, playing in my short spiked hair. I closed my eyes for a moment, letting the time slow down around me, then reopened them, looked up in the sky and blinked a bit as my eyes were getting used again to this bright morning light. As I inhaled deeply the clean air around me, I could already feel the air warm up even though it was only nine in the morning. Even though I’m actually in a city, the air is fresh and does not smell like those big industrialised cities that make my nose twitch like hell. But I did have my jacket on me as today’s wind was coming from the north, making me look even sexier than most of the people would say about me. It was actually my lucky jacket: it has the logo of my favourite band on this earth which is Iron Maiden and it was given to me as I was among the front V.I.P’s of the show where the signer had worn that vest. Since that day, it follows me everywhere.
I looked up straight in front of me and saw a couple pass while holding each other’s hands. As I looked up, I could see in both of their eyes that they had taken a peek at me. Not one of those big stares where you almost feel guilty to have been in the string person’s vision. It was one of those little curious look where you briefly look at someone and make a fast conclusion on what we saw and I could clearly say that they had been a little troubled about what they saw about me. They knew I saw their troubled looks and they looked in front of them, accelerating their pace and never looking back to see if I was still looking at them. The fact was that I was still looking at them walking faster. I was clearly smirking at this situation and as they were beginning to be out of my vision, I looked on the right side of me, took my coffee thermos and drank some. I peeked back on my watch and only ten minutes had passed since I last checked. I knew that he was going to arrive at any moment now.
I half closed my eyes and began to think. I find that funny that people seem to be afraid of differences. What is wrong with being different when we are all different without even knowing it? Different potentials, different styles, different everything is what makes all of us unique and special. It is by those differences that we can actually be who we want to be and we have to accept the path that destiny chose for us. I always said to myself that life is like a game of chess: the opponent is your life and to which we can never anticipate nor control his movements but we surely can defend ourselves by those attacks. In a simpler way, I only mean that we can’t choose what we will face in our life, but we can truly control how we will live and stand up towards these events occurring in our lives.
As the sun was getting higher in the sky, I decided to stand up and as I looked around, I saw a huge tree making shade towards the west. I smiled, took my coffee and walked to the tree to finally sit on the warm morning ground, laying my back and thinking to myself that this tree had probably a couple of centuries, leading to the fact that it was big and strong. I think no hurricanes in this world could actually tear this tree down. I let out a small happy sigh as I bring the fact that I often let my mind drift off like this because I simply enjoy the fact that it can come up to any thought and then let it vanish slowly to quietly bring up another one. It helps me keep my sanity and it also lets my imagination stands up so that I can continue to have some joy in this “way too serious” world.
I then came back to the couple I saw a bit earlier. I smiled back and took a deep breath in from the clean air surrounding me. I came back to their shocked looks and I knew exactly what made them look me like that. It wasn’t because I had this passion for metal music or the crazy look I had with all those band shirts and those scars I had on my body. It was because I was not human. I laughed and looked at my paws, thinking that I was one of the few of my kind in my city, but over the world though, we are a lot. We live among the human population and humans call us “furries”, but the real terminology is “anthropomorph”. What I am basically? I’m an animal that grew up like humans. I walk, talk, think and wear clothes like them. I am a pure artic husky and I’m actually 18 years old. I basically got humans characteristics… But I am an animal. I can’t say I don’t love myself up to now; I always had this facility to accept my form and to incorporate myself in human’s society without too much difficulties. I don’t care much about what people can think of myself because it’s my life and I’m proud to be a “two walking leg husky”.
I didn’t notice it, but these thoughts were mainly drifting my mind off to sleep. I didn’t even remember of closing my eyes, but I was off to sleep, not aware of what would come in my dreams.
***
I could see it approach behind him. He was white as the snow under my paws. There was a blizzard that day, but I could clearly see that a white mass was moving towards him. I wanted to protect him but my feet refused to cooperate. I was petrified and I clearly knew what was going to happen and I could feel tears starting to roll down as I knew I would not be able to prevent what was going to happen. I felt so miserable towards the situation that my ears folded down and I now had my tail between my legs. At 7 years old, what can you do to prevent such a big animal from attacking him?
I could now see him attack the only one left in my life… I could already feel his blood on the white snow, tearing my world into two pieces that could never be pulled together again. I think I never cried that much in my life and I could not stand the fact that I was going to lose him, but I was so scared to act as I was scared for my life. I heard him scream my name in pain, his howling getting quieter each time, blown away by the blizzard’s wind. I felt rage going through my veins and I finally decided to act and hurt that white animal. I started running towards it to help him.
But the image wasn’t getting closer… I started running as fast as I could but it always seemed at the same distance from where I was before running. I was so scared and I even tried to howl his name and say I was coming to help him, but my voice was only getting lost in the powerful wind. I could not feel my paws anymore and I dropped on the snow. It was an endless run and as more tears rolled down on my cheeks, I knew I could do nothing… ***
I woke up as I felt sweat dripping slowly from my forehead to the bottom of my chin and I looked around me nervously. I touched my chest where my heart is and could feel it beating extremely fast and I almost felt he had skipped some beat. My first reaction was to check the time on my watch. I could not see much anything as the daylight was making my vision confused, but I managed to see eleven ‘o clock. I was shocked that I could have had slept so much. I then felt something on my left leg. I could feel another paw but this one; I could recognize it among many others. This paw was actually the one from the wolf I was sharing with for three years now. I looked up straight in front of me and I saw him. He was sitting in the grass, looking at me while his tail was wagging slowly from left to right. My pale blue-gray eyes met up with his clear ocean blue eyes and suddenly, my heart gradually took its normal beat and I smiled at him. He returned my smile and moved towards me and sat against me, on the left side. He kissed my cheek and said to me:
“So… You had a great sleep babe?”
“Not too bad”, I answered back as I stretched my paws.
He wrapped his arms around me and I felt a warmness going through my body as I relaxed. I then asked for how long I have been asleep. He laughed and said I had been asleep for almost two hours. I looked at him shocked and he gave me this smirk he gives me each time I’m either shocked or angry and this smirk always make me smile. My lover took one of his paws and swiped away the sweat on my forehead and then gave me this worried look and asked:
“You had this dream again, right?”
I nodded and I hugged him the hardest I could, reaching his muzzle to lick it gently. I took one of his paws on mine and asked him if we could move up to our home and we both stood up and started to walk slowly towards our home. I felt chills pass through my body as I remembered the dream I had. As we walked and as I thought about this, my boyfriend looked at me and he said:
“Scar, cheer up. You lived so many things and managed to get up from all those things.”
“I know, but this dream reflects my past and I always break down in tears when I have this dream and you know that”, I said quietly.
“Yes I have seen that Scar, but you always pulled through. It was only a dream”, he answered back as quietly as I was.
“I guess so”, I said while looking at the grass.
He gave me another hug and we arrived at home. I took the key from my pocket and I unlocked the door. We both entered the house and he kissed me on my muzzle and then he smiled at me.
“Should we order pizza tonight?” he asked with his smile.
“Yes, but not now. I want to do another thing more wonderful than pizza”, I answered back while giving him a playful wink.
He nodded and he kissed me back on the muzzle. I took back his kiss and I closed my eyes as we kissed for a long time. I then broke the kiss and looked in his eyes and I took off his shirt to look at his beautiful well-made body. I smiled and pointed our room with my muzzle. He nodded again and I took his left paw to bring him to our room. He closed the door after we were in and I kissed him on the cheek, ready for the upcoming action.
This was going to be another great night for the both of us.
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