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Re: Everflame: The Shard
« Reply #120 on: August 20, 2011, 10:54:32 PM »
Aria rolled her eyes as Dim as she signed Just talk she then showed her arm to the chosen and peered at him with her green eyes, not trusting him. though she needed her arm fixed before they decided it would be best to chop it off due to infection.
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Re: Everflame: The Shard
« Reply #121 on: August 21, 2011, 02:22:21 AM »
The man didn't know what to say, and Listy felt him turn to look at her. "Well, she is blind...and I've seen her limping...she holds her leg wrong. She's been wandering about without any parents."


But the child couldn't care less about what was wrong with her. There was something much more seriously wrong with her than an unhealed broken leg and unseeing eyes. Her physical abnormalities were something she lived with in relative acceptance. What was mentally disturbing her was a different matter entirely.


Her ears went back and she chuffed as she tried to turn her 'gaze' to the guard.  She wrenched her wrist free of the man's grasp and stepped in front of him. "Sir...The Queen. Wh-a-where is she? I have to speak to her. Puh-le-ease."
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Re: Everflame: The Shard
« Reply #122 on: August 21, 2011, 03:03:06 AM »
Talin's eyes looked as if he was thinking about it, then he looked back at her.
"The feeling of not having ropes bind every usable limb was nice, as was having Fang back in my hands." He shot a look at her, but it was lacking in any real hostility. In fact, he seemed to be in pain the moment he looked down and away.
"I need to know the truth Tiz. Why is 'Fang', a weapon I made under Master Akela's tutelage, reforged of such better material? After I almost got this young girl out of the city, Master herself came to stop me, then told me that the only way I could legally leave my imprisonment is to become a load bearer." He sighed as he leaned on the door with his forehead resting on the top of the slit. His eyes seemed to analyze her appearance, then a slight amount of curiosity showed in his gaze.
"You hit your head against the wall again, didn't you?" He knew he was just the tip of her issues if his escape caused her to physically harm herself.

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Re: Everflame: The Shard
« Reply #123 on: August 21, 2011, 06:37:32 AM »
Entaru's snarl formed into a grin at his master's reassurance.  "Of course my lord.  You have been too kind to these people, even if it has been all an act for the nation's sake.  The wrath of Nero is too good for them."  Entaru straightned himself out, standing tall and proud beside Aman.  "Do we have any idea what the craft is?  Where it came from?"



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Re: Everflame: The Shard
« Reply #124 on: August 22, 2011, 12:03:41 AM »
Little-Hands gave a faint smile and took his arm. She pulled the sleeve of his blouse up and exposed the wound, then placed a hand upon it.
"Bejzo va garra. Fetka? ka  baronla. Kova kova." After the words, a warmth swam through the wound and the air fazed and waved, distorting the details of the cave in the low light. The warmth oozed through Leo's arm, seeping into his muscles, and weaving through his skin, pulling it together, healing.  She looked up at him with a proud little smirk




"Well atleast I'm practicing signing," said Dim Lane. He look around her cell and shook his head at it all. "And you still haven't answered my question. What on earth where you doing?" The Chosen knelt down to the girl and took her arm. She pressed her hand to Aria's shoulder and a cool aura smothered onto it as the wound was pulled to close. The blood stained down the front of Aria's clothes, but the wound was healed, leaving a numb coldness behind. The Chosen patted her on the head and turned back away, leaving the room. It was locked behind her, leaving only the slit to peer through once more.


Queen Tizzarath her head away slightly, obscuring her face.
"You're a dangerous man. I can't allow you weapons. Considering the people you've harmed in the past, you're lucky you weren't executed." She folded her arms and sighed, glancing from one cell to the other. "And now you've got some young girl involved. She'll be jailed for this, just as you are." Once she spoke, the officer who had led Aria to the cells leaned in.
"Actually," she said. "Chosen Akela Nakka promised that she would support the girl's banishment, rather than imprisonment." She gave a hopeful little smile while the Queen furrowed her brow in thought.
"She did?" The other guys nodded in response. "Well then, I guess I'll take that into consideration." Tizzarath stepped to Talin's door and looked through the slit, right into his eyes and thoughts raced through her. "What do you think I should do with you Talin? What would you like me to do?"





The guard knelt down to Listy's level and looked her over.
"Well I can probably talk to somebody about meeting the Queen, but if you dont get help, your injuries will get worse." He took her hand in his, and spoke in his softest soothing tone. "Let's get you to a healer, okay? And then we can go get the Queen. She's not going anywhere."




The gates reopened after the Talin's escape attempt, and Aman and Entaru strolled out, heading back to the town of the Shard.
"Not yet," said Aman. "We know it came from the sky and that is all. Some suggest that it may be from wherever the shard fell." He put his arm around Entaru's shoulder. "It's quite close to the town, and once we get it it'll be childs play to get to the next step." Along the path, Aman stopped and pulled Entaru to face him, staring into his eyes, nose to nose. "I'll need you Entaru. You're more important than you can imagine. Due to this, I need you to spend a lot more time with the shard. Be there whenever you can. Meditate beside, breathe in its mist."
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Re: Everflame: The Shard
« Reply #125 on: August 22, 2011, 12:54:05 AM »
Aria didn't answer the question, rather she peered at the Queen. before she looked at Dim I want freedom, I only wanted freedom to run and be with nature, not stuck here in this damned city, I will glad accept exile and never return to Tia or Shard. Corruption is brewing and I sense it... she looked at the guard and said tell the Queen that...Talin over there can suffer exile, and dont lie because I can hear you, I am not deaf.
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Re: Everflame: The Shard
« Reply #126 on: August 22, 2011, 02:13:06 AM »
Listy grumbled unhappily deep in her throat, but it was a low and quiet sound and finally she gripped the guard's hand in return. She smiled. "If you promise to bring me to her soon after the Healer then I will go with you." It was the clearest sentence she had spoken in quite some time.
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Re: Everflame: The Shard
« Reply #127 on: August 22, 2011, 03:04:18 AM »
Talin regarded her carefully, not knowing if it was one or two questions that were asked.
"You ask me of your duties, and what I desire? Very well then, I will answer the second one first. I wish for you to not only banish Aria from Tina city, but also give our relationship a chance outside of prison walls." He didn't break the stare, but he unfocused his eyes while thinking. When they refocused, they were almost piercing.
"Before I answer your first question, let me put forth my own question: what am I to you?"
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Re: Everflame: The Shard
« Reply #128 on: August 22, 2011, 03:10:08 AM »
Aria stared at Talin's direction what relationship? Aria became curious at that statement so she became quiet and listened in
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Re: Everflame: The Shard
« Reply #129 on: August 22, 2011, 03:52:09 AM »
    The feline's eyes widen as he watched the spectacle. He was a dumb founded as he watched his wounds close together. His eyes flicked to each bit of flesh that repaired it's self and quickly healed without any apparent scars. “How did...” he started, but trailed off as he looked up from his arm, studying the girl. He remember the words she said, and exactly how she said them. He remembered hearing a questioning tone in the girl's voice as he lowered his arm.

 
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Re: Everflame: The Shard
« Reply #130 on: August 22, 2011, 04:33:46 AM »
Entaru was taken aback by his master's actions.  At first the words that registered into his mind were, 'I need you' and Entaru's brain froze for a moment at the strange words and intimate position they were in.  However, Entaru quickly regained his composure as his brain put together the rest of the words.  He attempted not to blush at his own foolish thoughts and nodded hastily, saluting in the process. "Y-yes sir!  Whatever you say, sir!"  Entaru began thinking as to why his master would make such a request.  He was in tune with the Shard, sure enough, but there was something his master wasn't telling him.  "I-I'm sorry to ask this sir and please forgive me for it...but how am I so important?"



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Re: Everflame: The Shard
« Reply #131 on: August 22, 2011, 01:37:28 PM »
"I am Meredith," she pulled her view to the ground even though she wasn't normally this shy, ", this is my brother he is also my care giver. May I ask who you are?"
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Re: Everflame: The Shard
« Reply #132 on: August 22, 2011, 05:39:33 PM »
Dim Lane gave a sigh of resignation at the girl. He looked into her cell with almost pleading eyes before gave up and turned to the Queen. She frowned and turned away from Talin to look around the room. The guards shuffled about uncomfortable as her personal life spilled out. She scowled at everything.
"Everyone leave, now," she said. Her voice low and ridged with threat.
"Oh um," Dim Lane fluttered about as the guards, the Chosen and the officer filed out. "Oh but, your majesty, my assistant things it best that you exile the gentleman here, along with her."
"Why?" the Queen snapped at him and the guards hurried away even faster. "So the two can rampage everywhere doing who knows what?" The turned and glared at Talin through the door. "In the dead of night, you and her?" She froze. Her eyes flicking about as her mind raced. "That's not what I meant." She leant against the opposite wall of the corridor and slowed her breathing. Dim Lane twiddled his fingers and toyed with his feathers while he looked to the floor.
"Your majesty," he began. Tizzarath stopped him with a raise of her hand.
"A lot has gone on today. If only it could all be solved." Her voice went quiet, almost to a whisper that none could hear. "I wonder if I could solve it all. I can." She looked over at the raven who gave a quick fake smile. "You're interested in the shard right, and a woman of - sorry, man of knowledge, correct?" Dim Lane nodded.
"Yes your majesty, arguably the best outside of the Shard town." Energy wriggled through him as he rolled out the spiel on his ability. The Queen nodded gave a weak smile, while the rest of her face reflected thought. Deep thought. Soon the smile became genuine and she turned to Talin.
"Talin, you are what you are and I am what I am. Queens do not end up with violent criminals. But that doesn't mean that I abandon you here." She glanced back at Dim Lane and thought her words over, then stepped up to the door and peered through the slit at Talin. "The town are very suspicious and possibly dangerous. I cant let them just act without any knowledge of what they're doing. So I will exile you and your friend, and along with her master, you will find out what's going on. Do not stop them unless you absolutely have to. Freedom and autonomy are vital for our towns, so if I hear of any wrongdoing by you, it will not be under my name." She stepped back and looked over to Aria. "Both of you must know that this is not official in any capacity and you must not tell anyone that I allowed this. Do you understand me?" She looked at Dim Lane who nodded. He was shivering with anticipation at the idea of discovery. His wings almost lifted him from the ground.





The guard grinned.
"My name's Alex by the way," he said and scooped Listy up. "Here, let me carry you. You'll be just fine," he said and headed off through the city. A three storey, roofless building stood among all the single storey huts. Animal bones and ivy laced across its face, a beacon of life and death. When they reached the door a small red panda looked up at them in greeting.
"Good morning," he said. "What's the trouble?"
"This girl seems pretty banged up. She's trying to see the Queen, so haste would be nice," said the guard. The panda hummed and hawed, looking the girl over and prodding her; his expression turning more concerned.
"You're right. Traditional medicine wont be enough here, follow me, I'll take you to the Chosen." He turned and walked into the hospital, leading them past beds of the mildly injured and headed up the stairs. Alex turned to the girl and jostled her.
"We're going to meet a Chosen! Isn't that great. I've seen them but never met them before. How exciting!"






Little-Hands shook her head and turned to General Andreya Caisen's unconscious body. She placed her hands on the vixen's head, and this time without speaking, the process began again.
"I healed you using the fabric of Seeker, but I asked for permission first. Most don't ask, they just do. They take. She feels it all the time, being pulled and torn." She pulled her hands away and the General's eyes began to flutter.




Aman gave a twitch of his lips into a knowing smirk then continued on the road back home.
"You'll see my loyal friend. You will see, but just remember that it is only you who can do this. You are most well suited. Your wild and vicious mind is almost perfect." His tail swished as he looked to the sky where the sun kissed the horizon. "We should hurry or we'll be lost in the dark."




Chosen Akela tilted her head to the side as she examined the girl.
"Meredith, you don't feel well do you. You feel something missing inside, dont you? Like you don't even have an inside. Like it's all just a void."
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Re: Everflame: The Shard
« Reply #133 on: August 22, 2011, 06:29:51 PM »
They could hear a consistent thumping noise as Talin bounced inside the cell. Soon he stopped bouncing, and looked serious as he recalled what she said earlier. "You forgot to mention what happens after... oh." His eyes looked down, then the floor shook as he kicked at the door in a mix of sadness and frustration. "Is Fang coming with me, or is he a momento of me that you're going to keep above a fireplace?"
"From suffering I was born, From misery I was conceived. From the plight of Mortals I thrive, From the pits of Hell I rise, beware...... For I live.........."

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Re: Everflame: The Shard
« Reply #134 on: August 23, 2011, 12:46:19 AM »
Entaru nodded with a smile and trotted after his master.  He would do as his master wished of him.  What he was asking was an honor to any subject of the Shard.  Though he had been nearer to it than many others, long term exposure to the Shard was all but forbidden.  Now he was being asked to be in almost direct contact with it at all times. "Aye sir, it is an honor." His tail was wagging back and forth happily under his robes as they traveled back home.



 

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