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Offline Vinny Raccoon

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A day at the park
« on: September 02, 2011, 03:24:07 AM »
Here I live within a mountain town.
Laying on the grass to let hours pass.
In the park I lay with nothing to do.
Filled with grief with language to bare.

Angry I was yelled at top of my lungs.
Aggravated I was at least no ones around.
After I started to simmer down.
I decided it was time to meditate


First I centered my thought on a leaf.
Then I focused my thought on some beef.
Then I strayed to super Mario three.
Then I stopped I had to pee!

So then I went home not a Nome to be found.
"Home sweet home!" Tell tomorrow morn.
For those who read this poem I written.
I hope you enjoyed it more then kitten's


Vinny Raccoon©
Eatch mistake you make act's like a teacher in the end!

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Re: A day at the park
« Reply #1 on: September 04, 2011, 05:16:05 AM »
Pretty nice, kinda looks like you struggled a bit on the last two verses and veered a bit off course hah :3


I hope you will remember me, At least say so to comfort me, You say goodbye so easily, Its now or never, It may seem really pitiful, But life became too beautiful, The pain of love unbearable, It's now or never, Gone Forever.

 

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