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Offline Roxy Wolf

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Re: feaudal area
« Reply #1545 on: April 11, 2012, 08:14:22 PM »
//she's in the group you're in now! but kaya plays her... I'm not sure what her status is, that's why we're waiting...//



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Re: feaudal area
« Reply #1546 on: April 11, 2012, 08:16:44 PM »
(( *cowers in a corner.* S-sorry. I was confused...))
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Re: feaudal area
« Reply #1547 on: April 11, 2012, 08:21:40 PM »
// XP  don't say sorry... you didn't know because I never told you//



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Re: feaudal area
« Reply #1548 on: April 11, 2012, 08:34:05 PM »
(Um... we're probably going to have to put this thing on hold after everyone who's not Wolf posts....)
(And Kaya said that she was quitting... but I think that she just needed a break. She has a lot going on in her life right now, so I'm  totally sure that she will come back.)
(And now... for my post...)
*Cifero was about a mile away from where he and Savel parted when he felt a large tremor in the earth.*
"Looks like Hunter's figured out that I tricked him."
*He looks into the distance from whence he came.*
"Hope that the others are on the moOOF!"
*The crat jumps slightly as something nudges his shoulder. He smiles, turning so that he can stroke his horse's head.*
"You are really something, man..."
*The horse dips his head slightly in greeting, purring as Cifero caresses his head. The crat smiles.*
"You know, we've been through so much together, and I still haven't given you a name..."
*The crat thinks for a second, sifting through his options of what to call the small black stallion. Suddenly, the sun rises, causing the horse's fur to shine slightly. Cifero chuckles a bit.*
"Hmm... How about Aragon?"
*The horse whinnyed quietly, shaking his mane.*
"I suppose that's yes, huh?"
*The young boy locked eyes with his horse, and he knew then that the horse was in agreement with him. He smiles and rubs the horse's muzzle.*
"Alright then, Aragon... let's ride."
*Cifero gets up on Aragon and gently takes hold of the reins.*
"Lead the way, boy..."
*With that, the pair set off, galloping across the land. About five miles in, Cifero suddenly feels tired, and falls asleep in the saddle.*
"Welcome back, BOY..."
*The crat snaps open his eyes to find himself staring at the masked demon, who grinned with pleasure. He glared at the creature.*
"I told you already... I will not kill you. And don't you even TRY to convince me to kill 14 Collossi to bring someone back to life...."
*The demon laughs.* "Well then... perhaps it's time that I added a bit more... incentive."
*Cifero stands up, continuing to glare at the demon." "Incentive?! What the heck are you..."
*The demon takes off his mask, revealing his face for the first time. Cifero stops cold, widening his eyes.*
"What the... no... no, it can't be... You... you died... Mom killed you..."
*The demon smiled evilly, his wolfy face teeming with evil glee.*
"Come now, young Cifero... can't you accept a hug from your uncle?"
(The plot thickens... This man is Cifero's stepuncle, and was killed by Cifero's mother when Dresdon ordered everyone in Cifero's family but Cifero slaughtered.)
(Supposedly...)
« Last Edit: April 12, 2012, 07:20:04 PM by Cifero Windtail »
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Re: feaudal area
« Reply #1549 on: April 11, 2012, 08:46:59 PM »
//CIFERO! change it! I and wolf have other plans for envar in the 3th book... and the 2nd book is the longest!!! so don't pull him out so soon! change it to another demon,  anyone but envis as you know the books names are: 1st: Feudal area. 2nd: Feudal area the demon army/horde (haven't decided yet) 3th: Feudal area the return of Envar. so don't call him forth yet. also, I'm going to bed now
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Re: feaudal area
« Reply #1550 on: April 11, 2012, 08:55:35 PM »
(Alright, It's fixed... sleep well, Roxy..."
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Re: feaudal area
« Reply #1551 on: April 12, 2012, 04:24:22 AM »
//thanks Cifero//



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Re: feaudal area
« Reply #1552 on: April 12, 2012, 04:41:30 AM »
((Wait a second.... This is a book?! I want a copy of this!!! :D))
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Re: feaudal area
« Reply #1553 on: April 12, 2012, 06:12:24 AM »
//it's going to be 3 books, written by me, and everyone will be getting one when they're done//



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« Reply #1554 on: April 12, 2012, 01:19:56 PM »
((Oh my god!!!!!! I love it!!!!))
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« Reply #1555 on: April 12, 2012, 04:14:53 PM »
//but! they won't be done for some time... maybe it'll come a 4th 2.... I donnu yet,  depends on how well the books is going... maybe I'll become an writer... or whatever it's called... but I take studies for computer things...//



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Re: feaudal area
« Reply #1556 on: April 12, 2012, 04:32:34 PM »
//Lets take this to the OOC topic?//

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Re: feaudal area
« Reply #1557 on: April 12, 2012, 05:27:00 PM »
//Roxy, I must say I'm writing several short stories based on what Lumi & Grace did (sci-fantasy) and on my own ideas for the plot here (steampunk), so you're not alone ^.^ And everyone will get a link too :P Also according to the previous statements each demon group is 100-400 demons strong, so approximately 250, not 100.//

Low frequency tremors detected. Estimate: 80 t TNT underground blast.
Approximate location: General Hunter. New data acquired.
Target threat assessment: low, rising.


Grace silently processed everything she heard from the distance. New findings didn't please her--one more potential threat to Lumi was always one too many. She also still wondered about the word said by Lumi:
Civilized. Definition: advanced, merciful, polite, ordered.
Effective essential resource acquisition method devised. Executing.


She, Lorkin and the company of demons finally arrived at the village with a dock. Ignoring Lorkin she pointed at a team of 4 demons.

"You, follow me. 2 by 2 formation. Keep your weapons holstered."

She sniffed loudly, inhaling immense amounts of air and analyzing it's content for certain substances, such as hormones indicating cancer and other diseases she considered incurable with the local medical knowledge and without enough money for a magical healer. Be advanced.

She quickly mapped all housings in the village and plotted the best path, starting from the ones of the sick who had relatives. Be ordered.

She approached the first building. It was a rather big wooden villa. She knocked on the door. It opened, revealing an old, trembling fox.

"Good morning, villager. Can you please give me all your gold, please?" Be polite.

"Why, you thieving bastard, you think you can scare me?" the fox croaked and hit Grace with his heavy cane, making it stick to the instantly formed ice and then break apart. A demon started to unsheathe his sword, but Grace's hand rotated awkwardly to the back and gripped its head, then squeezed, crushing the steel helmet like it was made of paper, then pumped steam through it at enormous pressure making blood and other, soft and hard parts of demon's head erupt, spraying the ground, all within a fraction of a second.

"I'm very sorry for that impoliteness. The command was to keep weapons holstered. I am bound by honor and prime directives to remain civilized."

"Oh... uh..." stuttered the fox, "so you want to trade?" he grinned and rubbed his hands in greed.

"Not by conventional definition," Grace said and paused to evaluate the fox's remaining lifespan and the pain associated with his cancer. Less than half a year, death in agony. Be merciful. "May I see your daughter?"

"How do you know I have a daughter?" he said in surprise. Grace didn't answer. "Alright, since you gave your word. Dala!... Dalavesta!"

"Yes, dad," said a young vixen, "wha--" she cut off as she saw Grace launch a meter-long icicle into the fox's muzzle, killing him instantly and making his lump body hang from the icy spike that nailed him to the inside of the wooden door.

"Good morning, villager. Can you please give me all your gold, please?" said Grace. Dala screamed as she burst into tears. The rest of the household ran to the entrance. Some other villagers who saw the bloodshed and watched curiously gasped in terror and ran to their homes.

Be civilized. Command executed successfully.
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Re: feaudal area
« Reply #1558 on: April 12, 2012, 05:52:15 PM »
*Hunter stoped, with his still bright red glowing eyes and fur*
"HALT! We camp here, and stay here untill i give the order.
And im going out for a spin."
*He turned invisible and started running in the direction Cifero went in, and while sprinting
a deep, demonic, breathing could be heard. Hunter's.*
*Hunter stood still and yelled out loud "Cifero! I am coming for you, little kid!" And the same
voice could be heard*
 
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Re: feaudal area
« Reply #1559 on: April 12, 2012, 08:25:59 PM »
*Cifero stares in shock for a few seconds longer*
"Come now, my young nephew. Take your revenge."
*Cifero drew his knife and went to kill him... but stopped long before he got there.*
"No. I will not."
*His uncle's smile becomes forced.*
"Cifero... kill me now."
"No."
"Kill me."
"No."
"Kill me...."
*The uncle gets a look of anger on his feline face.*
"I already told you that I'm not going..."
"JUST GET IT OVER WITH!!!!"
*Cifero stumbles back as his uncle yells at him...  and notices for the first time a sadness in his eyes.*
"Please... for your mother's sake, kill me..."
*Cifero's gaze softens.*
"You don't want to die, do you?"
*His uncle looks up, tears running down his cheeks.*
"Cifero... I never wanted to do the things I did. But... I had to protect you. I died trying to protect your mother, and I lit the fire to prevent our podies from being discovered. If Dresdon had discovered the truth..."
*The crat cocks his head.*
"What truth?"
*His uncle looks at him sadly.*
"Sahmir.... what truth?"
"The truth about your father."
"My father died..."
"Yes...."
*Sahmir takes off his cloak... revealing a pair of elegant black wings.*
*CROW wings.*
"He did."
*Cifero stares at his supposed uncle speechlessly.*
"Y... you're my father?"
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