Everything is moving right along, I like to see that. I would like to think that I am probably one of the better people to "train" with if you want to do RPs on this forum as I have rules, but will talk it out and try and get you to learn as opposed to just banning the offending player. (I know this sounds bad, but please, it isn't)
Here are some things I'm seeing.
-Most RPs will require that you write a minimum of three lines. I realize that you can't always do that, but really try. If you need more inspiration, think about how your character would feel about the situation, how they react, what they are going to do. As someone that writes all the time, I find it hard to write less than a paragraph about each in every post!
-Most RP leaders will have a plan for the first couple of posts and a general outline for how the rest will unfold. I think I am fairly unique in that I have a plan, but do not expect you to follow. I will present the situation and the players will tell the story. You guys have done that admirably so far. I just want to reinforce that.
-The first rule was no Powerplaying or God-modding, among other things. If you don't know what that is, please feel free to ask. As it pertains to this one...
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To Cifero...
Please do NOT repeat a post like the one you created Dec. 30 ~1:00 GMT -6. Within that post you took control of several characters you were not allowed to take control of (Powerplaying) and performed feats that, in my opinion, were beyond what would be possible for a character of your design (God-Modding). To even go beyond that, you created several characters that I had never mentioned and gave them information that I have no plans for. I must ask you to not repeat something like this again. If you wish to tell your own story in this fashion, I highly suggest that you create an RP and tell it there.
This is your first offense in this RP. It is severe, but the first. Consider this a warning.
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To Kayato...
Am I to assume from your post that you and Cifero planned out an assassination attempt? You planted a bomb that ended the meet? If this is correct, then you have also taken control of a character you were not given permission to control (God-Modding) and changed the original story.
This is your first offense in this RP. It is severe, but the first. Consider this a warning.
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To everyone...
I did not have plans for what has happened, but because it would take a lot of effort to change everything and modify everyone's posts, I will keep it and try to assimilate it into the entire whole. However, I cannot post until Cifero and Kayato PM me, telling me exactly what they have moved the story too. I need as much detail as you two can supply me with so that I can move forward with my post. and attempt to realign.
I apologize for everyone's wait. Hopefully, this will not take longer than 48 hours.
Topic: A Gift Not Given - Battle for Control of The Order (Closed) (Read 7553 times)