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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #45 on: April 07, 2012, 02:28:03 PM »
More writing :P

Innocence gone to waste,
My sense of will, yours to taste
demented conceptions of the best
Lingering pain to never rest

Burn my soul with your stare
Do not what is right or fair
Such words mean nothing to you
and your delusions of virtue

Corruption fornicates inside
Words say promise but always lied
Keep your hands of rusted possession
They mean nothing in bloody recession

Cheat the system
Disturb the rhythm
Only one way to beat them
And that's to join them!

Like a virus, evil spreads
Leave us without any heads
For our minds are lost and gone
into this deep, dark abaddon
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #46 on: May 08, 2012, 11:47:23 AM »
This is something funny I wrote :P

Read from top to bottom (column 1 first than colomn2) if you want to see a person getting asked "How are you" and not wanting to be asked
Read from left to right (both columns) if you want to see a person not get asked "How are you" and want to get asked.

I don't know,                        if you'd care,
how I am doing,                   I'd want to know,
did you think,                        that I was good,
that I had the answer,         that everything made sense,
because you'd be wrong,     for everything is confused,
I cannot read myself,           this eternal plain means so little,
But I am not good,               I am really nothing,
That is what I know,            So don't love me,
Though I'd ask you,              If you'd ask me,
a very simple question,        how are you?
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #47 on: May 22, 2012, 09:10:01 AM »
We all have our secrets, our hidden desires
fears, hopes and dreams, we're all just liars
What we see and what we know, so intrinsic
So forgive me if I'm a bit pessimistic

We all say what we don't think
Think what we never say
And try to hide from what we are
Try to make the thoughts go away
(But they won't, they're here to stay)

So hide, hide, hide, it's so pointless
Because all it does is cause you so much distress
There is nothing you can do, don't hide it
Must not fight it, must just learn to live with it

We lie, to others, to ourselves
No matter what we do, we'll always lie
The truth kicks us in the heads,
burns us, hurts us, until we die
(Let yourself go, learn to fly)

So accept it, Accept your fate
Accept all the things at stake
and just leave, leave your haunt
Don't give the truth a chance to taunt

Live life, live it to it's fullest
Don't worry about what you really believe
Your true self is fueled by your thought of it
It's fueled by the way you decide to perceive
(Feed it and it will succeed)

Don't hide from yourself
Don't fight yourself
Don't deny yourself
But accept yourself
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #48 on: May 22, 2012, 09:17:51 PM »
With beauty beheld,
a glint in mine eye,
a story perhaps untold,
the random question why.

With dust in every crevice,
a splinter from the sane,
believe be when I say this,
things do not remain.
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #49 on: May 23, 2012, 10:43:26 AM »
It's nice :D Short and sweet :D

We are different, but treated the same,
We just jump through hoops;

Taught to fly,
When we're not birds,
Taught to growl,
When we are mice,
Taught to see,
When we're blind,
Taught to think,
When we are nothing.

Left to believe, we are owned,
Not by person, but by paper,
That a number is only us,
And we are merely a mark.

Seen as inferior, treated dumb,
For the real world;
Convinced we should fly,
when we can't even run.

Failure not an option?
Try, try, try
You are limitless,
You should do everything
Anything
Because you can.

NO! we were lying
All these people are better
you are blind, dumb,
You should of done everything
Anything
but you can't.

Our Bodies, led to the wrong path.
Our hearts, guided through the wrong way.
Our brains, tricked and deceived,
Our Souls, stricken away,

Lost to the minds, in order to conform
We become merely machines,
To be used for more machines,
To grow like machines, work like machines,
To think like machines,
To act like machines.

Why are we given hope?
Taught to sing when we can't talk?
Only for the reality to crush us!
That we can't sing, if we can't talk.

Because the only way,
They believe,
The only way to learn,
To learn the truth,
The truth of everything,
Is to live it.

The truth
Is but
A lie.
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #50 on: May 23, 2012, 02:40:00 PM »
I like that one, mostly because it's true.

Fly over run,
Breaching the barrel,
What have I become,
This internal quarrel.

A race to the soul,
An undying battle,
But what can't I know,
When I am but cattle.

This one is more or less about feeling as though you are being dumbed down by society to the point that you are but a cow in the field of the world, being farmed and bread by corporations to think what you think though you would rather be the bullet that gets shot than the one that does not get used. Preferring to fly and break the boundaries set on you.
Inspired by the above poem by Anoni :P
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #51 on: May 23, 2012, 05:59:11 PM »
Mine are rather utilitarian in nature.

A Cupcake and a Muffin

Cutie Mark of Cinnamon Cream
a Cupcake and a moist Muffin,
in harmony, like in Cinny's dream,
as all the squabbling is for nothing.

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Blood Obsidian

One seeking to raise a hellion
Needs not to look very far
Conquer heart of a demon
Give the darkness to devour

Forged of oddly gleaming ashes
Black like night in bloom
From where earth's cruor gushes
Bright like midday sun

Smith in shining wolves' moon
Feed it burning leeches' feast
Train in mortal battle soon
And you have your deadly beast.

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Curse and Grace

Your flesh will suffer and be baned
But a triumph can still be obtained

Member of dragon kind you must down
Of precious skin under glorious crown

When you cut the beast's rotten core
When it won't have power to kill no more

When its wounds are profound
Until then you will be bound

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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #52 on: May 26, 2012, 11:48:27 AM »
That's a very nice poem! :D
I like the cupcake and the muffin because it's got a bit of a humorous theme that still has actual depth! Well done :D

Leave thy body, hold onto me no longer,
For thou hast had time to feel loving embrace,
Ye rejected life's living promise,
To seek the promise of eternal reward.

Leave thy body, thy will be done,
Rejected ideas, thou's living sanctum,
Be passed onto our lord, our father,
Pray you that you were right.

Leave thy body, find the truth,
Seek to prove your own delusions,
With hope of an existential utopia,
You shall find nothing.

Leave thy body, goodbye my friend,
I have never knew ye, but I knew of,
You have left us and all humanity,
To seek the fake eternal paradise.
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #53 on: May 28, 2012, 03:01:09 PM »
Void
Simply a void, is this what I've become?
Aimless rotations, a hollow pendulum
Swing to and fro, emotion to emotion
Un-free to stop and impede the motion
Stumbling through time as it passes me
All I am is nothing; merely left to be
Falling to folly, unable to avoid
Living my dying life, simply a void.
 
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The world is so much clearer through the blood lens; no black, white or grey. Only red.

Every technique has a weakness - yours, is me!

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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #54 on: June 04, 2012, 10:38:46 AM »
I like that poem, has a nice metaphor of velocity as juxtaposed to the idea of nothing (the void), which for me is an interesting combination, I liked it :P

Been listening to a song that reminds me of this,

Leave the rafts and on the ships as ordered!
Get on the decks and make sure all is boarded!
Load the goods, make sure all is sorted!
We shall sail, our enemies be quartered!

Oh what fun it is to voyage the seas!
Sailin' on the wood of our precious trees!
For we will sail to be what we want to be!
And purge the society, our true enemy!

Burn the ships and give no mercy!
Never let them trick you with curtsy!
Burn the villages, kill all civies!
Let them know of our Treachery!

Oh the fun of the brawl!
Take a minute to take in it all!
Watch them as they feebly crawl!
Why they drown we shall soar!

Come all, you know you want to!
We fight for the ones who are all true!
Never be deceived, they don't have a clue!
So come, all we ever needed was you!
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #55 on: June 04, 2012, 10:49:28 AM »
@anoni
Great poem, I see a poem only as a raw of world (I am also a dyslect) but I like this one.

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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #56 on: June 06, 2012, 07:45:12 PM »
Empty,
My heart's beats, echo throughout me.
Even deaf to it's pure voice
I choose to be blind to avoid being seen,
I choose to be deaf to avoid being heard.

Hollow,
I have been choked in the place I breath free,
I have been stabbed,
Yet forced to keep from bleeding out
Into the bandage I have created from my ashes.

Pure,
As darkness passes over the soul
others imagined for me,
I can rise above everything and be the creator,
Though I can only wait.

Silence,
All I will expect,
All I will give,
All I will be,
My beautiful, pure, empty, hollow silence.

(( There I feel much better :D ))
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #57 on: June 08, 2012, 09:30:17 PM »
The city lights vanished,
As I float, nauseous,
The mountains rise on my left,
The sea pitch on my right.
The non-existent stars
Reflecting off of the wet road,
As I sway helplessly around the corners.


The faint strip of red,
Lighting the distant path,
A man made beauty only to be seen once
As we race slowly through the black,
A brotherhood of every man for himself.
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #58 on: June 11, 2012, 12:24:52 PM »
Those are some really nice poems Razot :D Especially like the one two steps above me, was meaning to reply saying I loved that one xD

Silicon, still synthetic,
Electric pulses, shoot within,
move only in one, interpret only once,
Loaded, Doped, the process will begin.

Current flows throughout creation,
Messages received, machine code generated,
Received from Meta-language,
Higher process translated.

Electric pulses, turned to light,
Flows through time and space,
Same message, in many different directions,
Each packet, organized for the race,

Such a simple process, interpretation of such,
Connecting one mind to consensus,
Allowing our representations, to communicate,
Allowing the creation of global nexus

Something invisible, but yet so clear,
The light emitting off the monitor is us,
When we leave our reality; our world,
Revolving around a universal serial bus

No more, concepts of soul,
We are all one now, the collective,
The hive mind, peak of humanity,
To offer such various, infinite perspective,

The internet, us together as one,
Join us, become the synthetic norm,
No longer held to ties of ourselves,
Just relax, integrate yourself, allowed to conform.

We are no longer individuals,
We are no longer ourselves,
We are no longer anything,
But the electric currents of these realms.



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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #59 on: June 11, 2012, 02:02:41 PM »
Lol, WERE ALL ZOMBIES!!! :D
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