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Poetry Thread
« on: January 19, 2012, 05:47:13 PM »

This is a thread for people to vent there emotions, thoughts, ideas and consciousness through the art of the English language. I did a search for poetry, i did find a poetry slam thread, however, this thread was a competition and was based on the skill of a poet. The Poetry thread is not about skill, judgement or anything. You don't need to be a poet to write a poem here :) I just thought this would be very nice for some people to post some poetry here, for some people to see. Whether it's furry related or not, any topic, any skill, we don't mind :D


I'll start, this poem I wrote specifically for the occasion.


We are ones that stand proud
In the face of a bitter humanity.
We hold ourselves, paws side by side
To output only sincerity


For we are furries,
We embrace our true nature,
Not blinded by conformity,
Or scared by such rapture.


We live these lives
Perhaps in secret,
Those emotions in us
Only ours to interpret.


But here, right now,
We'll stand tall and proud
As we discuss our lives;
We are one of a crowd.


So embrace yourselves!
Paws, tails and scales,
Remain intact
through all of life's trails.


For there's only one thing
The world should see
Us saying, "I'm a furry,
and that's fine with me!"


Please don't be shy :P post any thing kind of poetry you want haha :D
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #1 on: January 19, 2012, 06:12:11 PM »
We have a board specifically for writing (which this has been moved to), and you can keep up a thread for all of your own poetry if you like. It isn't necessary to group it all in one thread. ;)
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #2 on: January 20, 2012, 08:21:02 AM »
We have a board specifically for writing (which this has been moved to), and you can keep up a thread for all of your own poetry if you like. It isn't necessary to group it all in one thread. ;)


haha ok :) sorry, I'm pretty bad with this apparently, made two threads in the wrong place >.> haha
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #3 on: January 23, 2012, 06:51:32 PM »
I'm not a poet or very creative at writing unlike yourself but here are a couple by Robert Burns I like.

I Hae A Wife O' My Ain
 
 I hae a wife o' my ain,
 I'll partake wi' naebody:
 I'll take cuckold frae nane,
 I'll gae cuckold to naebody.
 
 I hae a penny to spend,
 There - thanks to naebody!
 I hae naething to lend,
 I'll borrow frae naebody.
 
 I am naebody's lord,
 I'll be slave to naebody.
 I hae a guid braid sword,
 I'll tak dunts frae naebody.
 
 I'll be merry and free,
 I'll be sad for naebody,
 Naebody cares for me,
 I care for naebody.


On Thanksgiving For a National Victory

Ye hypocrites! are these your pranks?
 To murder men, and give God thanks?
 Desist for shame! Proceed no further:
 God won't accept your thanks for Murther.

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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #4 on: January 23, 2012, 08:52:29 PM »
Very interesting poetry! thanks for sharing :D.
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #5 on: January 23, 2012, 09:03:54 PM »
I think the National Victory poem is particularly poignant.

I wasn't sure if I would need to translate any of it though. :)
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #6 on: January 24, 2012, 12:20:35 AM »
no one helps a soul whom is damned
for i have seen the future
nothing survives the onslaught
animals and man alike shall perish
side by side as was intended
not even mans selfish ways will save him


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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #7 on: January 24, 2012, 02:17:24 AM »
Quite a nice poem, short and sweet and about mans own end and how his evil will only sustain him for very long. I liked it :D
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #8 on: January 24, 2012, 02:39:48 AM »
Most of my poetry comes out in the form of hypothetical song lyrics, but occasionally I'll churn out something more traditional.  Here's one I wrote at a time when I was dealing with some clinical anxiety:

Toast to Me

 People are like toast to me… There are always two sides (and a little around the edges).
I can see the differences, even when they are subtle.
Sometimes the difference is obvious-
One side is dark, and the other light.
If one side is bent in, you can bet the other side is bent out.
Sometimes, the differences are hard to see,
But I can always tell one side from the other.
   And I can understand them both.
I can understand that the dark side has been burned, and the light side is only warm.
And I can enjoy both sides at the same time.
I can tolerate crunchy, and I can tolerate soft.
But no matter how well I can understand it-
No matter how much I can relate,
   I can’t talk to toast.
      I can’t make it understand me.
         And people are like toast to me…
 

And, on a much less depressing note- here's a song I wrote as a way of saying "thanks for being an awesome friend".  I wrote this for someone who- though he didn't know it- really changed my life in a permanent way, and opened me up to the idea that there are people out there who I really can trust.  (I haven't shown him this, because I don't think he'd take it the right way if he knew I wrote a song for him. :S )  Anyway, here it is:

The Rest of The Year

  Smells of Fall and alcohol
Returning to my head
Yes I still remember when
We left the kid for dead

 
Looking back at the years before
I ever knew your name-
I should have known that I’d been growin’
In a world of shame

 
*Summer breathes a heavy sigh
Seasons never say goodbye
One more week, and Fall is here
And so begins the rest of the year

 
Me and Dan- my right hand man-
And Shabby on the road
We stayed amused by the rhythm and blues
And the stories we told

 
Out by the street with something to eat
When the weather was feeling right
Making plans to get together again
On a warm summer night

 
*Retail work could be so strange
The people never seemed to change
The shelves are always low on beer
At the beginning of the rest of the year
 



Post Merge: January 24, 2012, 02:54:32 AM
Oh, sorry, one more- on a somewhat comical note this time.  Here's a song I was inspired to write by a bottle of hot sauce...  (Asterisks are meant to indicate a chorus line)

Shake It Well

*Sh- sh- sh- shake it well (X4)

Contents may have shifted while shippin'
Particles have settled on the move
Shake it up before you get to sippin'
Bottom-up and turn it to the groove

The pulp is in the juice
You've got to set it loose
The chiming of the bell-
You've got to shake it well

*

The peppers in the sauce will have you burnin'
Left to sit they sink into the mix
Before you get that bottle cap a-turnin'
Shake it like you're jonesin' for a fix

You've got no constitution
You're hiding in a shell
Well, I've got the solution-
You've got to shake it well

*

Now you know the secret to the feeling
Pass it on to every fellow man
Who knows how much time our time is stealing
Let's take some time and shake as best we can

That natural desire
can bind you in a spell
If just to feed the fire-
You've got to shake it well

Sh- sh- sh- shake it well
(I'm in a spell)
Sh- sh- sh- shake it well
(Just break the shell)
Sh- sh- sh- shake it well
(Just ring the bell)
Sh- sh- sh- shake it well
(Give 'em hell)

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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #9 on: January 24, 2012, 03:24:51 AM »
Ahh, Excellent poetry :P.

The alliteration with toast is a very interesting one, almost comical in a sense, but heavily dramatic in another, I'd say that your song was very nice and quite uplifting and your comical song was just plain awesome :D

Thanks for sharing XD
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #10 on: January 24, 2012, 03:37:41 AM »
Thanks anoni!  I don't think "alliteration" was quite the word you were looking for, but I knew what you meant. X3
And I'm glad you liked the last one- it's hard to write something that's funny, but not too cheesy.
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #11 on: January 24, 2012, 03:39:24 AM »
I haven't slept for 26 hours haha give me break! XD

I clearly meant Analogy XD

and sometimes having something cheesy is in itself hilariously funny :P
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #12 on: January 24, 2012, 03:49:49 AM »
Lol, you're excused. ^_^   Here's another kinda humorous one, as long as I'm digging into these ancient Word documents.  It's supposed to be a bluesy little number, and it's definitely one of my best:

Back Around

  Well, my lady- she’s a demon
She makes me want to cry
I tell her that I’m leaving
So someone tell me why

 
She comes back around
Oh, she comes on back around

 
I am ready to forget her,
I wanna hit the town!
She comes back around

 
Well, my buddy he’s a pinhead-
Don’t know where to begin-
I always leave the fool for dead
With his whisky, rum, and gin!

 
He comes back around
Oh, he comes on back around

 
Well, I just can’t seem to lose them,
My lady and the clown
They come back around

 
Oh, my habit is a killer
My cigarette disease
It don’t matter if I’m willing
My smokes don’t ever leave!

 
They come back around
They always come on back around

 
Well, whenever they run out
I find some money on the ground
They come back around

 
Well, mistakes come back to get me
I guess I’ve got to pay
I’ve tried to keep them hidden
But they never go away

 
They come back around
They always come on back around

 
Well I promise if you give me
Some time to work it out-
I’ll come back around
 
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« Reply #13 on: January 24, 2012, 04:33:06 AM »
Just a small haiku for how I'm feeling.

Something's off at night
The lights are on, music plays.
It just feels too late.

It's that feeling of "Has time stopped? It feels like 2 am, but it's not."
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Re: Poetry Thread
« Reply #14 on: January 24, 2012, 06:58:24 PM »
Just a small haiku for how I'm feeling.

Something's off at night
The lights are on, music plays.
It just feels too late.

It's that feeling of "Has time stopped? It feels like 2 am, but it's not."

Man, that's how I feel from 8 AM to 8 PM.  Lol, I'm too nocturnal for my own good.
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