Magical Fate (OOC)

[Cifero Windtail]

Alright, I have another character...
1. Name: Craf Kridwoc
2. Age: 16
3. Element: None
4. Species: Feline
5. Description: Wears a deep cowl that hides all of his features, save a pair of bright blue eyes, and is dressed in priest regalia; the fur on his hands and tail show that he is a grey cat with black stripes.
6. Personality: Seems to be a bit insane... yet rather friendly and zen-like. He's mentally stable, that's definite, but sometimes he can be a little... creepy.
7. Skills: Decent swordsman and knivesman
8. Non-Skills: He's no good with guns and the like, and can come off as a bit odd.
9. Preferred weapons: A magic dagger and an odd sword
10. Relationships: Travels with Viola
11. Other: Not much is known about his true past...
And Aldrea, could you be my back-up? Please?

[Aldrea945]

Sure. 
 
Vi, you'll need to clarify that personality.  Is he mentally unstable but outwardly normal?
 
As for power on your other character, I'll do a coin toss between you and Luna.  Sorry about the power part.  I'm going to have to quit being such a wuss...

Post Merge: February 14, 2012, 03:05:57 PMAs of last night, Luna gets the powers.   Thank Vi.  She thought it'd be better not disappointing one or the other.    (*Licks Vi.*

[Shadis]

Welcome back Vi!

[Cifero Windtail]

You're welcome Roxy. And thanks, Wolf.

[Aldrea945]

Who's roxy?   

Post Merge: February 15, 2012, 11:13:36 PMWas that meant for Roxy Wolf?

[Cifero Windtail]

  Aww, derp... that was supposed to say "Thanks, Aldrea."

[Aldrea945]

Oh.  You're welcome.    Thanks for taking the preasure off. 

[Cifero Windtail]

You're welcome, Aldrea. 

[Aldrea945]

A few things need to be said.
 
A) Vi, last time getting muted.  You get muted again, you are booted permanately.  You may not bring in Pheobe.  That's not punishment.  The point of getting muted is to learn you did something wrong.  As a result, it also slows us down and causes problems with mods from time to time.  LAST CHANCE.
 
B ) This is a slower narrative than KoD.  Take your time answering like you have.  This means spell check, grammer check, and trying to help move the action and characters.  It looks wonderful so far.  I'll detail anything that bugs me.  (Note: For those that don't know how to construct a paragraph, please contact me.  It helps everyone to write as you might a book.  You know who I mean.)
 
C) Luna, Leiton, Where are you?  Just because it's slow doesn't mean it's non existant.  I need a message of where you went and who your back up is.
 
Just wanted to update.  I need to know that last one ASAN to keep the RP going.

[Chrono Blackwyng]

Is there a reason why emotes are being used in a serious rp?

[Aldrea945]

Hmm?  Did that happen somewhere in the roleplay?  I'll have to go see.

[Shadis]

It matched Shadis's expression at that moment ( )

[Cifero Windtail]

So where are we right now?

[Aldrea945]

Did you read my warning a few posts down?

[Cifero Windtail]

Yep. Don't worry, I plan on not getting muted again.

So anyway, where are we in the story?

 
Um... I'll just have Craf run the obstacle course, I suppose...