Oh? How so? This is your sheet.
Name: Jackal Cahill
Species: Egyptian Mau
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Story: Orphaned at an early age, Eric grew up on the streets of one of the larger towns of Fursania. He worked for shopkeepers to earn payment for food, and got into more than one scrap with other street kids and gangs. He even fought an insane jackal once... which gain him his nickname, Jackal. Now, at 16 years old, Eric still helps around town, but has been accepted a bit more by the community. But if there's trouble, he will do his best to be right in the thick of it, helping to cease the chaos.
Appearance: Mix This...
With this...
And add this...
And you get Jackal.
Fighting Style: Khonsu's Moon Scarab Technique (Specialized energy and hand-to-hand fighting style)
This is your profile, minus the pictures. I did a bit of research on your "Technique" too. What game is that from?
You've yet to do anything with the energy segment, and it still begs the question of Who taught you. If it's a technique, you need a teacher. Cif, you said you lived on the streets most of your life. With everything you've said, you sound like you're from a wealthy family with access to anything you need and want to fight, not a street rat struggling to get money for food.
I know I set this in Fursania's London, but many of the things you've introduced have caused problems only after the first post, usually by introducing elements that don't make sense. I just want some good explanations. You don't have to take things out, just help make sense of them or fix them. Just tell me where in the world your character is from, how you were trained, and Who/where your parents were in society. You can message me in PM if you want some of it to be secret, but just answer these questions for me.
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