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Offline DarkWolf

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writing a novel and am in need of harsh criticism X3
« on: March 30, 2012, 04:36:16 AM »
I'm writing a novel called The Unknown and would like some feedback about the first chapter so i know if i should keep writing or just give up.
here's the first chapter http://205.196.123.164/kow93twn4hfg/ubbd7u0c68w16mq/the+unknown+chapter+1.pdf
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Re: writing a novel and am in need of harsh criticism X3
« Reply #1 on: March 30, 2012, 06:05:54 AM »
I am an author myself and more than willing to edit a chapter or two if asked... though can I ask you to PM or post it here? I'm having difficulties getting it from that site.
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Re: writing a novel and am in need of harsh criticism X3
« Reply #2 on: March 30, 2012, 09:14:29 AM »
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