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[Colioli4]

"Ai, the crowd is turning upon me. Swell." Jacen thought, as he heard the other furry turning on him. But, at the same time, he saw the annoying furry that had caused all this trouble stand, mumble some excuse, and walk away quickly from the table. "Relax everyone," Jacen said, "the problem has solved itself. Now, we all finish our food, you all head of to whichever classes you have, and then my second problem is solved as well. Get it?"

[Beatnory]

There was a strange atmosphere arround the table where Beat was sitting. It was like the hole world had stopped moving and the only thing happend at the table was still moving.
For some reason Jacen was a bit irritated about something. Probably because of Beatnory's drink. Maby it is the best to leave this table and go to somewhere else.
So he said "I think I go to get a new drink. Maby later". He took his food on and stood up.

(Colio, sorry to ask but you play the bully?)

[Colioli4]

(Yes I do. I thought, well, lets try something new. Always been the 'good guy' and stuff, but now its time for something new. So I try to play a bully in thid roleplay. )

[Beatnory]

(Yes I do. I thought, well, lets try something new. Always been the 'good guy' and stuff, but now its time for something new. So I try to play a bully in thid roleplay. )

[Thank you, It's always nice to try new things.]

[[Sov]]

Hey guys I'm sick right now and so is Otebon, we'll both be back later in the week. Just a heads up.

[Otebon Albrecht]

Alright guys.

Of course, as soon as Jovi says that I'm out for the count, I'm right as rain.

Instead of doing specific responses, I'll write a general one as... you all are improving. Good job everyone.

The story is building nicely and there is little to say about how to construct and move the story forward from this point. From what I've seen, you all have a good grasp that every time you write, you have to contribute in some small way to the action in a minor fashion. Good job everyone. 

My thoughts for improvement are also rather over-said. Watch your grammar and spelling. Things like the below aren't big (in fact, only grammar nazi's like me really read it AND get annoyed by it), but it will help you to become a better writer if you pay attention to mistakes like this.

...you all head of to whichever classes you have...
(Should be "whatever")

It was like the whole world had stopped moving

I think I go to get a new drink. Maby later...
(I think I'm going to go and get a new drink. Maybe later...

As for me... at this point in the RP, I would probably post, but it would be fluff. Just watching and observing. So instead, I'm going to do something that you should be able to do in most RPs. Assuming that anything in parentheses are considered in the OOC thread for this training session.


(Skip me. I got nothing really to say here.)

[Dirtcopter77]

(I don't have anything to say either, my character's too nervous to come into the room while Jacen's eating)

[Colioli4]

(And I can't say anything before Jovi can post again after her illness. Get better soon Jovi! )

[Beatnory]

((I could say something but the last post came from me))

[[Sov]]

I'm ready to post again!

Jovi slammed her fists down onto the table. "Clearly YOU are the problem here. Everyone was eating peacefully until you came over, and scared people away. I said MOVE ON." Jovi said angrily to Jacen. Her nostrils flaring and facial expression showing clear disgust.

[Beatnory]

Before Beat had make his first step to the line he heard a shout behind from him. It was clearly from Jovi but what's happening there.
For a few second he was thinking. Thinking about what he should do. It was a short moment but It feels like it take forever.
but eventually he decided to leave.

[Sigcutio]

The atmosphere suddenly felt tense and uncomfortable. This was not what Sig had come into the cafeteria for. With a blank expression, Sig slouched in his chair as Jovi roared at Jacen. He felt it would make things more awkward if he just ignored the two and started eating his lunch so he simply sat. He noticed other people beginning to leave and was felt slightly relieved that he wasn't the only one who felt the situation had gone out of hand. Hopefully things would settle down....right?

[Otebon Albrecht]

Good posts you two. I can see where your reactions would be thought well of in this type of RP and they are really very well written and would even be expected based on the characters that you've chosen. I have no qualms beyond grammar checks that I'd like to share. You guys are getting good!

Now though, I'd like to be the proverbial "fly in the ointment" and "start something". This way, we can get a little more... harsh... in the interaction.


Otebon had heard enough. He left his little observation position and approached the table so that he ended up behind Jacen.

"Why don't you come with me Jacen," Otebon said softly as he laid a hand on the big guy's shoulder. "It'll be better for everyone involved if you just go and eat your lunch somewhere else."

Otebon's hand grabbed onto Jacen's shirt and pulled lightly to get him moving.

"Come on big guy, let's go."

[Colioli4]

"Oke... That was rather ...unsuspected." Jacen hadn't realized that the mare was in such a bad mood. Monthly period? He... didn't really dare asking. But, he couldn't back out now. That would be a clear sign of weakness. He looked through the cantine. The fight had already drawn a lot of attention. A lot of furries were watching the spectacle at this table. He turned to Jovi again, who was still watching him with an angry glare. And now some other guy, one that had stood watching from a distance during the fight, now came forward and asked him to leave as well. At least this guy didn't yell at him, but leaving the fight would mean a BIG loss of reputation. He turned around and gave the guy a push to get his hands off him. "Thanks mate, but I'd rather stay. I like it here." He turned back to the Jovi. "And you, SHUT.... UP... Or do you want your long face to get screwed up?" Jacen knew he might have taken it to far know, but didn't back down. He readied himself for whatever would come, grining his sharp teeth bare for no other reason than to give himself confidence.

[Sigcutio]

This was getting out of hand. Jacen was handling the situation very poorly and judging by the look on Jovi's face and the way the other person approached him, things were going to get violent. The whole situation was just stupid. All Sig wanted was to eat his lunch in peace and suddenly it turned into a whole fiasco. It was pointless to reason with Jacen, so Sig sat in silence. With an interested gaze in his eyes, he stared out away from all the commotion. At least this way he would not be noticed.