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Re: Trials of Khordom: The Beginning
« Reply #195 on: May 01, 2013, 07:08:40 PM »
"so don't you think that is weird? after all from the way people are acting, it does not seem like you get visitors, holy, unholy, or otherwise very often, so there are three in one day?" she looks at the store and sniffs the air "why can't i go in there?"
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Re: Trials of Khordom: The Beginning
« Reply #196 on: May 01, 2013, 11:30:53 PM »
Vi looked right at Aspen, an annoyed look on her face. "Because I don't want a drunk angel on my hands, ok?"


Jynx thought silently. "Hmmm...." He looked at the others. "I may go to the library later... I think I read something like this..." He looked at Vi and smiled. "Err... good luck..."


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Re: Trials of Khordom: The Beginning
« Reply #197 on: May 02, 2013, 03:04:50 AM »
(Sure.  I've just been a bit unsure what to do during the scene.  Also, I should learn not to use my actual name.  It's confuzzling to my brain.  XD )

Rachel landed lightly on Jynnx's shoulder, opening her wings for balance.  "Can I go?" she said.  "We can use my card for taking the books out.  I just have pay the fine first."

She was light on his shoulder, and her soft, dark, curly hair framed her face just above his eyes.  Unfortunately, her wings ruined the effect.  The double pair made her look more like a demon than someone to be trusted.
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Re: Trials of Khordom: The Beginning
« Reply #198 on: May 02, 2013, 05:41:04 AM »
"what does drunk mean? ohh ohhh i can't wait to see an earth library!" she continues as the group stops walking then runs back to rejoin them "so is this your home?"
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Re: Trials of Khordom: The Beginning
« Reply #199 on: May 03, 2013, 01:06:13 AM »
Jynx smiled at Rachel. "Yeah... seems fine to me."
Vi facepalmed. "SIGH.... No, but we're close," she said." And drunk means... inable to function."
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Re: Trials of Khordom: The Beginning
« Reply #200 on: May 03, 2013, 01:49:32 AM »
"ohhh we have a word for that! dead!"
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Re: Trials of Khordom: The Beginning
« Reply #201 on: May 03, 2013, 02:11:45 AM »
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As he made his way down the street, Jorm began to ponder several things. First and foremost, why did that group have an angel with them? He thought of reporting this to the other generals, however he ran the risk of an interrogation. If the generals interrogated him, they would discover his carefully concealed secret. Since he was born, he had the ability to manipulate his blood into becoming a weapon due to his demonic heritage. He had possibly sensed similar abilities in those individuals he had encountered. "I'll have to keep a close eye on them." he thought.
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Re: Trials of Khordom: The Beginning
« Reply #202 on: May 04, 2013, 12:55:22 AM »
Jynx looked over at Aspen. "So I've been doing research on the town.... mainly of the things that the elders don't want us to know." He winked, then continued. "Anyway, I found mentions of a civilization previous... one that started before... something."
Vi raised an eyebrow. "Something?"
Jynx shrugged. "Well... I haven't found out what it was... but I'm clWAIT..." The crat looked at Aolith. "Did you say something about war?!"
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Re: Trials of Khordom: The Beginning
« Reply #203 on: May 04, 2013, 02:34:56 AM »
His attention snaps up and he looks at Jynx. "Yeah.. It's sorta the only thing I remember right now." He says, shrugging slightly. His ears flick and he looks around. "If it's okay with you, I'd rather not talk about it here." He nods, his grey gaze falling to the ground.
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Re: Trials of Khordom: The Beginning
« Reply #204 on: May 04, 2013, 05:43:11 PM »
Jynx nodded slowly. "Alright... when we get to Vi's house then." He turned to Vi. "How much farther?"
Vi pointed down the street. "About a few blocks that way..."
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Re: Trials of Khordom: The Beginning
« Reply #205 on: May 05, 2013, 03:41:16 PM »
He nods and stays close to the group as they walk, his ears pinned back slightly. Why was only this returning to him now and not anything else? He breathes out a frustrated sigh and shoves his hands into his pockets.
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Re: Trials of Khordom: The Beginning
« Reply #206 on: May 05, 2013, 06:03:00 PM »
Vi walked up to the door of a large, nice-looking house. "Here we are!" she said, smiling. "Now to find the key..." The kangaroo lifted her shirt and stuck her hand in her pouch, searching around. "You know, I should really clean this thing out... it's getting kind of cluttered in... Oh!" Vi withdrew her hand to reveal a keychain with a couple of keys on it. "Here we are," she said, tugging her shirt back down and choosing a small bronze key from the ring. "Just a few seconds..."
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Re: Trials of Khordom: The Beginning
« Reply #207 on: May 06, 2013, 04:07:25 AM »
(*Stares horrifiedly.*  Oh stars, I'm going to imagine that's the cartoony kangaroo version.  There is not other way for me to avoid needing brain bleach.)

Rachel remained perched on Jynx's shoulder,  listening carefully to the conversation but saying nothing.  There really wasn't much to add that wouldn't alarm them, and most of it was from a variety of books she'd gotten.  Instead, she said, "Hey, Vi, Jynx?  Mind if I start toward the library instead?  I want to find something specific."  She flexed her wings slightly, enjoying the feeling.

(As a note, I was thinking she could be... 'persuaded' against them while she splits up.  When they meet again, it would be late to the party.  ;) )
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Re: Trials of Khordom: The Beginning
« Reply #208 on: May 06, 2013, 11:34:15 AM »
as Vi opened the door aspen wandered inside "it-it's beautiful...it reminds me of home a lil bit...rachel wait! i never got to tell you where i'm from!" she grabbed her wrist and pulled her over " see daddy was a fire demon  and mommy was an angel and they had joint custody, and i got kicked out of hell once the angels sent me to their schools and then i got thrown out of heaven for reading this book on hell magik....i have no clue why, i see others read that one all the time, and when i woke up i was sitting in a crater at your school"
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Re: Trials of Khordom: The Beginning
« Reply #209 on: May 06, 2013, 10:36:02 PM »
(*Stares horrifiedly.*  Oh stars, I'm going to imagine that's the cartoony kangaroo version.  There is not other way for me to avoid needing brain bleach.)

Rachel remained perched on Jynx's shoulder,  listening carefully to the conversation but saying nothing.  There really wasn't much to add that wouldn't alarm them, and most of it was from a variety of books she'd gotten.  Instead, she said, "Hey, Vi, Jynx?  Mind if I start toward the library instead?  I want to find something specific."  She flexed her wings slightly, enjoying the feeling.

(As a note, I was thinking she could be... 'persuaded' against them while she splits up.  When they meet again, it would be late to the party.  ;) )


(Her pouch is on her stomach.. and yes, she's cartoony. and seriously, why do all of your characters become villains?!)


Vi sighed and dropped her bookbag near the front, then looked around at her house. "Thanks, Aspen," she said. "I quite like it myself."
Jynx nodded. "Ok... Vi, please keep aspen out of trouble... I'm going to head over shortly..." He nodded at Danny. "Meet you there..."
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