Assassin's Creed; Deliverance (OOC)

[serpington]

i only dropped out because it wasall over the place and no one seamed to know what was going on. and with all the flaws and so little to work with it's hard for me to post properly. if you want i'll try going for a bit longer and see if things pick up.

[FurryJunky]

I knew what was going on, I just did not under stand what You or Rylo where doing. You might of been saving a back story but without one it looked completely random.

[Blackfang1002]

If we can cut what was going on with Rylo and the whole attacking the target then Ill join back in. That part just threw me right off and didn't know what to do.

[kivabunny]

I'm not in charge of this RP, but I have helped several collaborative novels and stories, RP seems to run in a similar manner, in collaborative story writing two of the biggest general rules are
A-if you are running a character (non NPC), PRE-STATE your characters entry, change as necessaary
B-if you intend to skew from the storyline, pre-state your intentions


Not a demand or anything, just a preventative suggestion

[Discord]

I role play with a backstory in clues throughout the rp.. not all at once in the beggining and poof u know who Rylo is and where he comes from.. no I like to put mysterys in your heads and get you all to wonder.... Blackfang.. Get over it and deal with it... itle turn into something that lasts longer than a simple captains death!

[Blackfang1002]

Then write it out better so the other players know what you're doing so we can tag along. This storyline has its own point to end at. You aren't the only one who has a mind for the story. The line will have its twist but an "alien" taking out the captain to shock us all, isn't what we need right now. We are trying to show several things at once. Tohaku's master's participation in the attempted assassination of they ill leaders, so Tohaku's innocence will be centered in the background along with other targets to include a few big name targets. We're also looking for info on the piece of Eden. Whether we find it or a twist within the pages is something else. You can add to that but instead you would rather blindside the set up players. There is a difference between a good writing with a twist and a poorly written strong arm. Now get over it. Lol

[Cifero Windtail]

If we can cut what was going on with Rylo and the whole attacking the target then Ill join back in. That part just threw me right off and didn't know what to do.

That's exactly how I feel about this OOC.


WHAT IN THE NAME OF SAM HILL IS GOING ON?!

[FurryJunky]

We need to vote on this.
Ney: To keep it how it is and let it play out.
Yea: To ignore all that has transpired with serpington and Rylo Evol Revoltee.
 
P.S. Im not saying you two are bad Role Players or anything, its just that we had a main story line set up with witch everyone was aware of and you come out of knowhere ramming into out set up knocking it over... Im sure you can still join the RP, but we should have more planning before one just jumps in with there own thoughs without anyones consent.
Serping and Rylo, If you wanted you two can even set up a time and place where you two meet and team up to better prepare yourselfes.

[Blackfang1002]

Im gonna say 'Yea'. Its a good story that we have put alot of work into. I would atleast like to see it go alittle farther.

[Discord]

Nah to either.. Were Cancelling this role play.

[Blackfang1002]

I believe Dovu created this thread so that'll be his choice.

[kivabunny]

I vote yea, we need to cut out the distractions, and for the record, I was not saying to give away the whole story, just give a general idea of where you enter, when you enter, how you enter, and your reasoning for doing so, you don't even need to directly say it, I only hinted at it, example: where- I did not know where or how we werestarting so I let things flow, when- I obviously stated that I would need to be recruited so before the mission was my general timeframe, how- this was not based off of my characters intentions, but rather the intentions of others, I was to be recruited because I am a (or rather was) a neutral party, and had no reason to help you guys or the templars, my reasoning for entering in this way- this is based off of my characters backstory, that, while it highlights main points, is still extremely vague, (examples: why did the templar kill my parents, where am I from, was my family of any importance, why was I not caught, why are they not looking harder, why is my heart so cold, how did I learn the ingredients for potion making and poison making, after all who would teach a woman these things in medieval times, women were possesions, how did I kill the assasins that worked for the templar and killed my parents,what about the rest of the family? All this is unanswered) there is also the problem of character intentions, give a vague idea of what you plan, how and why you plan that, communication is invaluable, if you don't want everyone knowing, just tell the. Person who runs the RP at the very least, that way he can tell us to modify posts in order to avoid character conflicts

Post Merge: October 17, 2012, 02:04:38 PMAlso try to be mature, you don't call the shots so ordering people around will cause trouble, as well we don't know your character, so it would have likely been assumed, (provided you did obtain the piece of eden), that you were a servant of the templar attempting to carry it to safety, you would have promptly have been A-taken prisoner
Or B- killed. Please do not attempt to say you would not, there are how many of us? Not to mention the templar would be out to get you as well, considering you killed the captian, translation : success = public enemy # 1 and an astronomical price on your corpse.

[Døvu]

The role play is being put on hold for now.

[kivabunny]

Okies, I'm fine with that

Post Merge: October 18, 2012, 01:17:30 PMOkies, I'm fine with that

[shadowgear]

Wow... I missed a lot with my connection down, and i have not even joined yet... Unless this rp is still on hold, i have a way for me to enter.