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Offline HyenaKing

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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #105 on: January 17, 2014, 05:58:43 AM »
Great, but id rather stay our of your convo.
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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #106 on: January 17, 2014, 10:00:13 PM »
Oh Vulpy!  Come over here :)


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I must warm up before Jolly write more!!

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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #107 on: January 17, 2014, 11:00:16 PM »
I'd not do much good because i lost alot of blood yesterday.
Tryin' to kill myself, and all.
But now i'm desiring to stay hrer for a bit longer.
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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #108 on: January 18, 2014, 03:26:49 AM »
*Hugs tightly* You need to stay here alot longer
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Life has a way of making you humble
Day after day it's bringing you to your knees
all's okay, then everything crumbles
And all that you perceive is blowing away

He said I've been watching you dad, ain't that cool
I'm your buckaroo, I wanna be like you
And eat all my food and grow as tall as you are

In touch with the ground
I'm on the hunt I'm after you
Smell like I sound I'm lost in a crowd
and I'm hungry like the wolf
Straddle the line it's discord and rhyme
I howl and I whine I'm after you
my mouth is alive and running inside
and I'm hungry like the wolf

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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #109 on: January 18, 2014, 03:28:20 AM »
You guys, man.

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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #110 on: January 18, 2014, 08:08:28 AM »
What?  Seriously?  D:

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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #111 on: January 18, 2014, 08:09:48 AM »
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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #112 on: January 18, 2014, 08:12:55 AM »
Oh Vulpy!  I had no idea D=

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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #113 on: January 18, 2014, 08:14:05 AM »
You could have no clue.
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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #114 on: January 20, 2014, 06:40:47 AM »
On a dreary night as the snow fell vastly across the land nothing visible but the wall of white and the dull lulling lights of the city in the distance, As the Fox walked bundled up in a heavy coat, paws in his pockets with an Olive green duffle bag hanging off of one shoulder and balaclava covering all but his eyes. His eyes watery from being hit by the flurry of snow attacking his body. The snow packed under his scuffed up brown combat boots. As the path seems to get longer and longer the Fox pulls his light brown paws out of his jacket whipping his delicate dazzling Green cat like eyes gently, no cars in sight only the the lights of the city in slumber.


(I will work on more but so far with do you think?)


The walk seemed to only drag on, the lights not moving closer but further away. The Fox walked on the crunching sound of the snow packing down sent vibrations from his boots to his spine, the cold winds whisper wrapping snow around his body as he shivers. Small dots of red follow the fox as he walks, appearing drop by drop behind him. The Fox continued walking hearing the sound of a vehicle driving he swung around his tail still in front of him as he turned, but there was no vehicle in sight. He turned around slowly to see a wolf in front of him. A puff of steamy breath comes from the wolf ask he speaks "What are you doing out here in this cold" The fox remained silent and nodded. The wolf was wearing a long overcoat with a few holes in it, His pants were thick Olive green and his boots covered in mud. The wolf walked behind the fox and before the fox could turn around he was gone, no footprints left, no sign.
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Life has a way of making you humble
Day after day it's bringing you to your knees
all's okay, then everything crumbles
And all that you perceive is blowing away

He said I've been watching you dad, ain't that cool
I'm your buckaroo, I wanna be like you
And eat all my food and grow as tall as you are

In touch with the ground
I'm on the hunt I'm after you
Smell like I sound I'm lost in a crowd
and I'm hungry like the wolf
Straddle the line it's discord and rhyme
I howl and I whine I'm after you
my mouth is alive and running inside
and I'm hungry like the wolf

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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #115 on: January 20, 2014, 11:20:37 AM »
*bouncing*

"More, more!"

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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #116 on: January 20, 2014, 04:58:49 PM »
Very nice and I am on Trixsie's side with this
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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #117 on: January 20, 2014, 07:35:51 PM »
On a dreary night as the snow fell vastly across the land nothing visible but the wall of white and the dull lulling lights of the city in the distance, As the Fox walked bundled up in a heavy coat, paws in his pockets with an Olive green duffle bag hanging off of one shoulder and balaclava covering all but his eyes. His eyes watery from being hit by the flurry of snow attacking his body. The snow packed under his scuffed up brown combat boots. As the path seems to get longer and longer the Fox pulls his light brown paws out of his jacket whipping his delicate dazzling Green cat like eyes gently, no cars in sight only the the lights of the city in slumber.


(I will work on more but so far with do you think?)


The walk seemed to only drag on, the lights not moving closer but further away. The Fox walked on the crunching sound of the snow packing down sent vibrations from his boots to his spine, the cold winds whisper wrapping snow around his body as he shivers. Small dots of red follow the fox as he walks, appearing drop by drop behind him. The Fox continued walking hearing the sound of a vehicle driving he swung around his tail still in front of him as he turned, but there was no vehicle in sight. He turned around slowly to see a wolf in front of him. A puff of steamy breath comes from the wolf ask he speaks "What are you doing out here in this cold" The fox remained silent and nodded. The wolf was wearing a long overcoat with a few holes in it, His pants were thick Olive green and his boots covered in mud. The wolf walked behind the fox and before the fox could turn around he was gone, no footprints left, no sign.


The fox sighed exhaling a puff of steam. The wolf looked familiar but he could not name the wolf, soon the fox began walking again his steps beginning to get slower. He looked up to see a sign on the road dimly lit saying "INN", the fox walked up to the inn and looked around, no cars, no people, just a building with all the windows busted out as if people wanted to escape, there was only one room with the windows intact. The door was cracked open slightly with the light on. The fox walked in and announced "Is anyone Here" the fox heard nothing and closed the door, The fox walked back into the bathroom and jumped in surprise griping his chest. In the tub was the wolf he saw earlier, He had cuts all over his body blood flowing out of each cut. The Fox quickly put his finger on the wolfs neck checking for a pulse but null there was none. The fox sighed and shook his head looking at the wolfs body seeing a dog tag, he fell to his knees and grab it quickly, looking at it closely, it read "David Goliath......1st Tank Battalion".



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Life has a way of making you humble
Day after day it's bringing you to your knees
all's okay, then everything crumbles
And all that you perceive is blowing away

He said I've been watching you dad, ain't that cool
I'm your buckaroo, I wanna be like you
And eat all my food and grow as tall as you are

In touch with the ground
I'm on the hunt I'm after you
Smell like I sound I'm lost in a crowd
and I'm hungry like the wolf
Straddle the line it's discord and rhyme
I howl and I whine I'm after you
my mouth is alive and running inside
and I'm hungry like the wolf

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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #118 on: January 20, 2014, 07:44:22 PM »
That gave me the shivers... AWESOME
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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #119 on: January 20, 2014, 07:51:48 PM »
i need to add more detail.....hmmmmm.....that is easly fixed in the next part
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Life has a way of making you humble
Day after day it's bringing you to your knees
all's okay, then everything crumbles
And all that you perceive is blowing away

He said I've been watching you dad, ain't that cool
I'm your buckaroo, I wanna be like you
And eat all my food and grow as tall as you are

In touch with the ground
I'm on the hunt I'm after you
Smell like I sound I'm lost in a crowd
and I'm hungry like the wolf
Straddle the line it's discord and rhyme
I howl and I whine I'm after you
my mouth is alive and running inside
and I'm hungry like the wolf

 

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