Some Poems And Maybe A Story

[Trixsie Vixen]

 


Oh.... Jolly. 


*shiver*


 

[JollyGreenFox]

Darkest thing I've writen in a long time


*Hugs*

[Tim Siguire]

I like your work, Jolly! Pretty visual... omnioptic, if that's a word.

[JollyGreenFox]

Danke atm im in a parking garage right next to the court 

[Trixsie Vixen]

I hope you get Judge Judy!

[JollyGreenFox]

As the falling tears of angels caresses my cheek
I wonder if i had done the wrong thing
The angelic voices blow by me pushing the leaves in the trees
Green like envy the leaves fall one by one
(It feels unfinished but idk)

[Tim Siguire]

It does seem short.... you could leave it like that or add another line, maybe reference something, anything.
One tip, you don't have to use %%, just use (size=##pt) (/size) >> Example

[JollyGreenFox]

Idk how it did that....a font attack maybe

[Trixsie Vixen]

I like it very much.  If it says what you hoped, then it's not short, it's just perfect

[Tim Siguire]

Sometimes short is better. And maybe easier.
The poem is good though

[JollyGreenFox]

eh lol

[JollyGreenFox]

Sitting alone in the shadows makes a man wonder if someone is hiding in the shadows
Creaking and cracking all around, shows swirling and body shuddering.
as the shadows approach, nails long and sharp crawling up my arms and legs
Cutting into my skin like a blade through grass, as i clench up in agony i can hear the shadows begin laughing
Their long finger and long nails wrap around my neck and before long everything goes black

[MaskaTheOtter]

Deep... and I feel like that would give me nightmares

[Tim Siguire]

My fear of Shadows has been put to words! YES Jolly, you are good.

[JollyGreenFox]

Danke im kinda creeped out as like where is it coming from ya know?