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Offline MaskaTheOtter

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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #45 on: December 16, 2013, 06:39:26 AM »
Is this what you are looking for *tilts head*:


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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #46 on: December 16, 2013, 06:40:11 AM »
I couldnt find it eather
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Life has a way of making you humble
Day after day it's bringing you to your knees
all's okay, then everything crumbles
And all that you perceive is blowing away

He said I've been watching you dad, ain't that cool
I'm your buckaroo, I wanna be like you
And eat all my food and grow as tall as you are

In touch with the ground
I'm on the hunt I'm after you
Smell like I sound I'm lost in a crowd
and I'm hungry like the wolf
Straddle the line it's discord and rhyme
I howl and I whine I'm after you
my mouth is alive and running inside
and I'm hungry like the wolf

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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #47 on: December 16, 2013, 08:05:05 AM »
THanks Maska 

I'm a terrible tracking fox :(

Amazing post though huh?

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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #48 on: December 16, 2013, 09:54:00 PM »

The Demon is inside, It can not escape
it's claw tears at my flesh
Ripping and Tearing, nothing like a caress
Tears run down my face, Hiding the pain behind a smile
Alone in the dark the Demon claws at my soul more
My soul depletes itself into a realm of black,
a dim light flickering, fading,evanescent.

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Life has a way of making you humble
Day after day it's bringing you to your knees
all's okay, then everything crumbles
And all that you perceive is blowing away

He said I've been watching you dad, ain't that cool
I'm your buckaroo, I wanna be like you
And eat all my food and grow as tall as you are

In touch with the ground
I'm on the hunt I'm after you
Smell like I sound I'm lost in a crowd
and I'm hungry like the wolf
Straddle the line it's discord and rhyme
I howl and I whine I'm after you
my mouth is alive and running inside
and I'm hungry like the wolf

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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #49 on: December 16, 2013, 11:23:53 PM »
Quote from: JollyGreenFox on December 16, 2013, 09:54:00 PM

The Demon is inside, It can not escape
it's claw tears at my flesh
Ripping and Tearing, nothing like a caress
Tears run down my face, Hiding the pain behind a smile
Alone in the dark the Demon claws at my soul more
My soul depletes itself into a realm of black,
a dim light flickering, fading,evanescent.


Yes, Good! *Claps*
Vocabulary!
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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #50 on: December 17, 2013, 12:10:09 AM »
Is that good or bad?
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Life has a way of making you humble
Day after day it's bringing you to your knees
all's okay, then everything crumbles
And all that you perceive is blowing away

He said I've been watching you dad, ain't that cool
I'm your buckaroo, I wanna be like you
And eat all my food and grow as tall as you are

In touch with the ground
I'm on the hunt I'm after you
Smell like I sound I'm lost in a crowd
and I'm hungry like the wolf
Straddle the line it's discord and rhyme
I howl and I whine I'm after you
my mouth is alive and running inside
and I'm hungry like the wolf

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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #51 on: December 17, 2013, 12:13:06 AM »
Beautiful!

Great!
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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #52 on: December 17, 2013, 12:30:14 AM »
Thank you :$
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Life has a way of making you humble
Day after day it's bringing you to your knees
all's okay, then everything crumbles
And all that you perceive is blowing away

He said I've been watching you dad, ain't that cool
I'm your buckaroo, I wanna be like you
And eat all my food and grow as tall as you are

In touch with the ground
I'm on the hunt I'm after you
Smell like I sound I'm lost in a crowd
and I'm hungry like the wolf
Straddle the line it's discord and rhyme
I howl and I whine I'm after you
my mouth is alive and running inside
and I'm hungry like the wolf

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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #53 on: December 17, 2013, 12:31:19 AM »
No need to blush, my friend.
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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #54 on: December 17, 2013, 01:05:58 AM »
Ive never had my vocabulary complemented
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Life has a way of making you humble
Day after day it's bringing you to your knees
all's okay, then everything crumbles
And all that you perceive is blowing away

He said I've been watching you dad, ain't that cool
I'm your buckaroo, I wanna be like you
And eat all my food and grow as tall as you are

In touch with the ground
I'm on the hunt I'm after you
Smell like I sound I'm lost in a crowd
and I'm hungry like the wolf
Straddle the line it's discord and rhyme
I howl and I whine I'm after you
my mouth is alive and running inside
and I'm hungry like the wolf

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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #55 on: December 17, 2013, 01:12:23 AM »
I have had advanced collge students in reading used limited vocabulary.
Friends, that is.
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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #56 on: December 17, 2013, 01:18:57 AM »
Oh...idk if I use them right....I just like how it fit
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Life has a way of making you humble
Day after day it's bringing you to your knees
all's okay, then everything crumbles
And all that you perceive is blowing away

He said I've been watching you dad, ain't that cool
I'm your buckaroo, I wanna be like you
And eat all my food and grow as tall as you are

In touch with the ground
I'm on the hunt I'm after you
Smell like I sound I'm lost in a crowd
and I'm hungry like the wolf
Straddle the line it's discord and rhyme
I howl and I whine I'm after you
my mouth is alive and running inside
and I'm hungry like the wolf

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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #57 on: December 17, 2013, 01:20:58 AM »
Some did not fit, but it's alright.
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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #58 on: December 17, 2013, 01:23:25 AM »
Oh...oh well lol
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Life has a way of making you humble
Day after day it's bringing you to your knees
all's okay, then everything crumbles
And all that you perceive is blowing away

He said I've been watching you dad, ain't that cool
I'm your buckaroo, I wanna be like you
And eat all my food and grow as tall as you are

In touch with the ground
I'm on the hunt I'm after you
Smell like I sound I'm lost in a crowd
and I'm hungry like the wolf
Straddle the line it's discord and rhyme
I howl and I whine I'm after you
my mouth is alive and running inside
and I'm hungry like the wolf

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Re: Some Poems And Maybe A Story
« Reply #59 on: December 17, 2013, 06:37:52 AM »
I think it's wonderful!  My dark brooding poet <3

I saw no errors.  Again, very visceral, raw, creepy.  All the good stuff!

Maybe the demon is a Balrog Jolly?

YOU SHALL NOT PASS up this great writing!  ;)
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