Words. Yay.

[NautilusWolf]

Alone in my sea of desperation,
I gasp for breath.
Drowning alone,
I'm all that's left.
Lost at sea and no land in sight,
To suffer alone,
It is my plight.
I am the lost sailor,
Lost as sea forevermore.

[MaskaTheOtter]

*Hugs tightly* I hope this helps a bit

[NautilusWolf]

May my hands guide you,
With unwavering strength.
I shall carry you,
To any length.
May my breath carry this flag,
Like the many before me.
With intense heat and incoming slugs,
I shall not fail.

[NautilusWolf]

Wash a layer away,
Keep the demons at bay.
Wash a layer away,
Every day.
Wash a layer away,
Cries for help I cannot say.
Wash a layer away,
It's a debt I pay.
For what is unclear,
But I grip my sanity ever so dear.
Live every day in fear,
In fear that they won't hear.
Hold my hand, dear,
So my mind becomes clear.
Cleanse my heart,
Cleanse my soul.
Rip it out,
Pay the toll.
Loss of feeling,
No way of dealing.
Set me free,
From the shackles come to be.
Free my mind,
It would be kind.
Dispel the demons in my head,
That make me dread.
Make my mind one,
So the demons are done.

[Trixsie Vixen]

This is your best work I think.
Very powerful stuff.

[NautilusWolf]

Thank you!!! Many people don't see the underlying pain those of us with OCD can have. They forget, we're people too! We have feelings!

[Grey]

Another fantastic piece. My old English teacher would absolutely adore your work!

[NautilusWolf]

I'm flattered anyone even reads this... Thank you everyone!

[Trixsie Vixen]

Write one about a pirate ninja space vixen!

[NautilusWolf]

I MUST TRY.






I will have to start today, I can already imagine it...

[NautilusWolf]

My most emotional work yet! Rhyme scheme inspired by Metallica's "The Unforgiven." I hope you like it!


You've said enough,
Fed me lies,
You can see the pain in my eyes.
I tried to see,
Vision blurred,
My screams are never heard.
I tried to dream,
But only bleed,
I wish to be freed.
I'm a slave,
Of my mind,
Your words were never kind.
Someone help,
Make me free,
But I guess I've gone crazy.
Lock me up,
Until dawn,
'Til the pain is all gone.
Left alone,
It's just me,
Damned to suffer in agony.
Happiness,
A luxury,
Unavailable for me.
I've had enough,
Let me out,
Please don't make me shout!
You've caused me pain,
Everyday,
So watch me fade away.
Now I'm gone,
You will see,
Who I should really be.
Buried now,
Tried to be strong,
So play me one last song.
Metallica,
Megadeth,
Sing a song from my last breath.
Do not weep,
Do not cry,
Over the grave that where I lie.
If I had stayed,
I would be,
Rotting in lunacy.
Rolling clouds,
Shedding tears,
Perpetuate my fears.
I died my fear,
As I've shown,
Now I've died all alone.
So if you please,
Do go on,
Now that I am gone.
Stand over my grave,
In the rain,
Over me that lies insane.
I am me,
Cori-Ann,
With a shortened life span.
Why'd I go?
I had my youth,
Buried with me lies the truth.
Now I'm gone,
You will see,
Your twisted reality.

[JollyGreenFox]

Beautifully done i can feel the emotion from within the words *Hugs*

[LeoSpice]

keep up the good work.

[Trixsie Vixen]

It makes me want to know more about you

[NautilusWolf]

I spend every restless night,
Dreaming there's an end in sight,
For this misery,
That's come to be.
I cry to myself, no one else.
So few know the pain I know,
And how little of it I show.
Wandering in a sea of pain ever deep,
A pariah I've become, some sort of creep.
The pain is unfathomable.
I need to be freed,
For freedom is a necessity,
To keep me from insanity.
Hear my plea,
Set me free.