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Re: Transformation
« Reply #480 on: October 15, 2007, 10:03:40 PM »
((I think that's everyone, but if not, my apologies, I'll just assume you're already down there.))

He grabs the other flashlight and heads on down, locking the mechanism in place after sliding the heavy cover in place, leaving everyone below in total darkness. He climbed down, rasping, "Ok. Hold on. Give me a second to orient myself and we can get going." Then he turned on the two flashlights, indicating he wanted someone else to take one. "Here, someone take this one."
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Re: Transformation
« Reply #481 on: October 15, 2007, 10:25:24 PM »
((Ok, i haven't been following what Jesse and Crew have been doing. Update anyone?))
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Re: Transformation
« Reply #482 on: October 15, 2007, 10:30:55 PM »
((well...were goin' down a "CAVE"...))



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Re: Transformation
« Reply #483 on: October 15, 2007, 11:12:02 PM »
((Then why did you hug Erek, who's out on the streets? XD))
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Re: Transformation
« Reply #484 on: October 15, 2007, 11:16:06 PM »
((because he broke the Fourth Wall. We're in an underground catacombs.))
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Re: Transformation
« Reply #485 on: October 15, 2007, 11:16:41 PM »
((streets...oh,sowwie....))



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Re: Transformation
« Reply #486 on: October 16, 2007, 03:10:26 AM »
She jumps slightly when Jesse grabs her, mostly because she had been zoned out while looking around. She rubs her eyes when it gets completely dark then blinks a few times when the flashlights are turned on. She decides to take the second flashlight.
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Re: Transformation
« Reply #487 on: October 16, 2007, 03:34:02 AM »
((the catacomb walls are brimming with a number of unsettling things and growths.))

He nods absentmindedly, not realizing she probably can't see him doing it. "Alright...Let's see. For now, let's head this way, it'll head to the University I go too. Perhaps the Prof. can answer some questions. He lives on campus, so that's probably where we'll find him." He starts walking down one narrow hall, his shoulders brushing the sides occasionally, his flashlight pointed on the ground in front of his feet. "It can be a tight squeeze, and I'll warn you when there's a low ceiling or something you'll have to duck for, ok? ....And whatever you do, keep the light on the ground, not on the walls. Trust me."
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Re: Transformation
« Reply #488 on: October 16, 2007, 04:16:15 AM »
((man i wish I could RP like you =v_v= ))

He follows Gil's flashlight, and almost runs into the wall.

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Re: Transformation
« Reply #489 on: October 16, 2007, 11:52:41 AM »
((man i wish I could RP like you =v_v= ))

He follows Gil's flashlight, and almost runs into the wall.

((You know, try writing more than: (abridged version) FLASHLIGHT! FOLLOW! ACK, WALL! Try writing out a little bit. Try describing what he feels, is he scared, is he excited? Does he want to take every chance to get out of here? Describe his reactions, his thoughts, his worries and hopes, if you like. Also, using a dictionary helps. A lot.))
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Re: Transformation
« Reply #490 on: October 16, 2007, 03:42:38 PM »
She didn't know why, but she felt guilty for Erek's sadness. She wished and wished the car would start. But when she looked around her, she saw that there were no active cars, anywhere. A few people sat in their own, try as they might to restart the car. None of them where failing. Unless...Natasha had one final spark of inspiration. There was a little light - maybe it would be enough. Very suddenly, she turned to Erek. "Get out of the car, I have an idea."
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Re: Transformation
« Reply #491 on: October 16, 2007, 07:30:43 PM »
"Okay." She replies and follows them. She makes sure that she keeps the flashlight directed at the ground, worried about what could be on the walls. What could be on the walls that could be so creepy? I don't think I want to know really...I wonder what my parents are doing right now...Is my car still sitting in the ditch?...Are we the only ones who were transformed?...Are we going to have to run from every human we come across?... All these thoughts swarmed through her head as she followed them, but she made sure that she was at least half paying attention so she wouldn't run into anything.
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Re: Transformation
« Reply #492 on: October 16, 2007, 08:02:36 PM »
((man i wish I could RP like you =v_v= ))

He follows Gil's flashlight, and almost runs into the wall.

((You know, try writing more than: (abridged version) FLASHLIGHT! FOLLOW! ACK, WALL! Try writing out a little bit. Try describing what he feels, is he scared, is he excited? Does he want to take every chance to get out of here? Describe his reactions, his thoughts, his worries and hopes, if you like. Also, using a dictionary helps. A lot.))

((i seriously don't have a lot to say until something else happens. i can't predict what people are going to happen. I don't think much ahead. I do what is going on at the moment. but i'll try. i'm more of a story writer. anyway...))


Many of the thoughts running through his head were negative. Some wondering if his family is dead, some of what life would be like.  He couldn't comprehend it.  

"Seriously. Where are we?" Is the only thing he could ask.
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Re: Transformation
« Reply #493 on: October 16, 2007, 08:30:43 PM »
((it's easier to be better. All you have to do is be descriptive. It's just like Kaj says. if you try that, it turns out more full and formed then those mini-posts. I'm a writer too, and I think if you put a little more effort into it it would help the overall quality of your posts. Here, I'll throw you a bone with the growths.))

He led them through a several intersections, then into an antechamber. It was at this point he raised his flashlight to see which entry was the right one. there were 6 passages, all of them old and wor like some ancient edifice. the edges of the walls that had become visible had been covered in grotesque carvings of some dark design. Growing over them, consuming the lichen that encrusted the surface, was a living substance that could be only described as a slimy, semi opaque 'growth'. It seemed like living tissue of some form, since it had pulsing veins running through it.

He was actually quite afraid. That growth, as he remembered it, was only patchy, save for in old town, where it had been flourishing fr the last couple of weeks. So far as he knew, only him and the prof knew about the strange substance. He spoke to himself in a half concerned, half analytical voice, "Hm...it's this far now? Troublesome... I wonder what prof would say..." before turning and addressing the ones following him. He kept his flashlight down as per his usual. "Alright, follow my light....try not to touch the walls from here on out, ok?" He walked forward into one of the passages, then waited for them to follow, wondering what old town's section looked like by now. He shrugged, he'd find out soon enough. The university was in the center of old town anyway.
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Re: Transformation
« Reply #494 on: October 16, 2007, 08:44:36 PM »
She looked up for a second, then quickly regretted doing so and looked back down. The growths looked repulsive to her and she definately wanted to avoid touching the walls now. She was afraid of the growth because she figured something bad would happen if she touched it. She didn't even want to continue on now that she knew what would be surrounding her. She nodded a little but hesistated for a few seconds before following after Gil down one of the passageways, her heart beating slightly faster. I don't like this. I don't like this one bit. She thought to herself, making sure she kept her eyes glued on the ground now.
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