Dear Boy

[LeGaga]

Introduction: So I decided that even though I'm an okay artist my fursonas/characters need a formal introduction just so you know a little bit about them, have considered putting this in the RPing forum but in the end I thought you should hear the story straight from the horses mouth (although this story doesn't have horses ). Feel free to leave Critique/ConstructiveCriticism/HateComments down below. Also this story in partially inspired by the song Dear Boy by Avicii.Now let's begin whall we?

[LeGaga]

Chapter 1:  I see a girl. That girl looks like she doesn't know where to go. She looks like she doesn't know if she's ever felt. That Kitten looks like a rainbow threw up on her. I see a girl. I see me. "JADIS STEPHANIE SERBERT GET DOWNSTAIRS BEFORE YOUR BUS LEAVES." My Mum, despite all that you've seen from her is anger she's not really that bad she's driven me around since I can't pass a driving test to save my life. So I do as She says albeit somewhat slower than she preferd. She's not really haappy to drive me to my bus stop, but I suppose no one would be If they got up at five and didn't sleep 'till four. Now after the oh so awkwardly angry and silent ride to the the bus itself was oh so different. Not only was the clamor so loud you couldn't hear yourself think but everyone else was in an annoyingly good mood  for some reason, Do kids really get that excited for Friday to come around? Luckily there were two saving graces to the ride. Voel and Jean, two people that you would think I, a straight A student who can't even tell you what a real party looks like would be firends with Voel is a hardcore raver who always has quite a few stories to tell. And then there's Jean who even though she's an ex of mine who works for a modeling industry is suprisingly kind to me.

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Chapter 2 (Voel's P.O.V.):  While the bus ride was loud and exciting the school itself is just the opposite so boring a quiet but during lunch I decided to ask Jean a question that she desperately hoped no one would ask her. "So Jean." I said. "Why do you take the bus if you can drive?" I could tell my enquiry made her uncomfortable but don't think of me as the bad guy I just wanted her to be honest with herself. I never got an answer, but I can't say I was expecting to. However when walking to the bus I got a question that would not only shock me, but also change my life forever. Now before I tell you what this question was let me give you some backstory on Jade. Jade has always been a straight A student all the way back to when we first met, she also hated my wild child ways, and trust me she was vocal about it. Jade was never type to go against what people say, And most importantly Jade would never do anything remotely illegal. Ever. So you can under stand why I was suprised when she asked me, "Hey Voel, will take me raving tonight?" So many things rushed through my head then. Would this be a date? Does she even know what a rave is? Is she joking? But amidst all these things running through my head, there was only one thing I could say. "Yeah"

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Chapter 3 (Jade's P.O.V.): That bus ride was suprisingly quiet and it got even worse when we got stuck in traffic. "We're gonna need a plan" I told Voel. "Don't worry about it, just be ready by Midnight. K?" He said . Because I sit betweem Voel and Jean and Jean left before the traffic hit too hard I decided to ask if I could lay down and He said fine but I don't think he knew what he was saying. I put my feet where Jean was and I put my head on his lap. He made an "uh.." sound and lifted his hands up. But after I settled in he put his arm on me. That was such a magical moment that I don't think I'll ever forget. I fell asleep like that, but I don't think he mind. It was a beautiful, dreamless sleep. I don't know what time it was, but after a while Voel woke me up "Jade. Jade wake up" he whispered. I woke up looking straight at his beautiful eyes, they're so beautful they're like... Wait! Why am I thinking about Voel like this he's just a froend! Right? My cheeks must have been so red when I walked out, I was so embarrassed! When I got home I didn't even wait until I got through the doors to start thinking of excuses to tell my mom why I was going to the mall. When she got home I told her Jade was meeting me there and She'll drive me home, of course she wasn't suspicious of me meeting an ex alone. I've never told HER of course.

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Chapter 4 (Voel's P.O.V.) I felt the cool, crisp night air enter my own as I breathe in and feel it leave as I breathe out. I saw Jade's house at the end of the street, it looked bigger than the others. I picked up a few rocks and tossed them at her window, but not hard enough to break it. She opened up her window anf then she half-whispered, half-yelled, "Oh how romantic, I've only seen this in every Rom-Com ever!" I chuckled a bit. "Look do you wanna go or not?" She responded, "Well I want to, but how exactly am I going to get down?" I admittedly hadn't thought of this. "Just jump I'll catch you!" "WHAT! Hell no!" she responded. "Don't worry I promise you won't get hurt" "Well... if you say so." She answered. If only I knew what would happen. So she got out on the window and positioned herself, then she jumped. I did catch her and we fell luckily neither of us got hurt. Her face was less than an inch from my face, and then I leaned in. In that moment I thought of how I've always wanted to do this at least a little bit. I thought of how she's been shy her whole life and most importantly I though of how jealous I was when her and Jean we're together. After that I knew this would be more than just going to a rave as friends.

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Chapter 5 (Jade's P.O.V.): The walk there was great we talked and laughed and we may have kissed again... twice. But I did realize something on the way. "Voel." I said. "How am I gonna get in without being eighteen?"  "Oh! Thanks for reminding me." He handed me an I.D. with my face and someone else's birthdate. "Isn't this illegal?" I Asked. "Well... only if you tell them." He responded. I decided to go along but was a bit anxious when we got there. Luckily we got in without a hitch. It was so beautiful the lights, the music the people all cak together in this schmorgers board of a dance club. I may have been new to this but I don't think Voel realized how starstruck I was, he pulled on me around without thinking. He started to pull me towards the dancefloor, "Oh, no thanks I can't dance very well." "Oh relax, just let the music move you" He responded. So I did, I couldn't tell you if I was good or bad or even how long in was it felt like minutes and hours passing at the same time. And then it hit me, " Voel... I don't ever wanna go back I don't want to go to school just to get some job I don't want. I want to live. Will you go with me, follow me on my journey to chase the sunset to new places?" He was definitely dumbstruck but he could only say one thing. "Yes"

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Conclusion: So that's the end, and even though it wasn't long it was meant to be more of an introduction to Voel and Jade than the romance of the century. Leave any advice you want in comments below. I may do more like this at a later date but you'll mostly see these characters in RPs of mine. So until I see the few of you who cared enough to read a story by a nobody. Au revoir! 

[Ulfur]

*applause*
OK so now I want more.
my only criticism is all of the typos. But otherwise, I liked it.
Good job JadeVoel

[LeGaga]

Well thanks I honestly thought it would be a little cheesy for most people and I'm not entirely sure I I'll do more or not But Ill probably have something written down this time. Still, thanks for the support