the bards back room

[drakewithout]

Exodus,
End of the embrace that has kept me in
Binding me to all my kin
Time is running out

And I shall see
The path
The flash
My god is with me


My will wont be overcome
My hands are tide
The waves will rise
You are defied


Just let me be
The path
The flash
My god is with me


I will run
You will never shape me
I will break before I bend


Just let me be
The path
The flash
My god is with me


Let roar the wind
Mercy’s end
Time is running out
And you wont let me see
I have been entrapped by your sorcery


But I will run
Run~~

[Trixsie Vixen]

Long time fan, first time poster.


*ensures notifications*

[drakewithout]

I see a light
There is a battle I won’t try to fight
the time to die is neigh
 
shuddering
wondering
sundering
 
the cleaving hand of time
the will of the divine
an edge of my mind
end of the line
 
whispering
listening
witnessing
 
to define
draw the line
see the sign
 
flickering
lingering
glimmering
 
the end of the line.

[kalan]

You have a gift my friend

[drakewithout]

(children’s skiping rhyme )

There are five sides to every thing
 And five all things have
One for sailing
One for planting
One for chanting
One for reaping
One for landing

[drakewithout]

In twining time there is no sense
In edges there’s no binding
In false caught notes
And bitter strain
Are ending hopes
And smiling sleep they fane
To wonder whether the wind will wane
And wither will we fly.

[Trixsie Vixen]

I don't know why but I picture WW1 soldier saying reciting this.


Question: did you mean fane as in a temple or feign as in to pretend?

[drakewithout]

feign

my spelling needs work

[Trixsie Vixen]

I guessed so, but you are too sophisticated by half for me to assume!

[drakewithout]

if when faced with an orphan your mouth fills with bile
and when seeing a Syrian you can’t help but revile

If you think guns are a right
and find Hillary trite

if when asked to be civil
you suggest war
or think that you’re not free anymore.

I think you’re full of drivel

(do not read if your a republican)

(

[drakewithout]

a Silurian,
disfigurement is beauty
glorying revenant

(doctor who haiku)

[drakewithout]

Amber fire dancing bright
Breathing in the joy of night
And still my heart is burning

Blight bated breath dose wheeze
Tumbled through decaying leaves
The young dead lost in yearning

Lightning flash and thunder roll
Takes on world it’s constant toll
Her mind glory’s in waking

Her eyes; they burn with strongest sight
Her flawless form brings us to knees
and thus we remain waiting.

[drakewithout]

i am taking poetic requests, name it I'll write it, really.

[drakewithout]

[instructions for reading, do not pause in the verses, but do not rush, emphasize the stress; on the refrain, do not pause at all, speak quickly, and emphasize only the last word of each line]

And affection will not satisfy
The aching in my soul
A dearth of love is not the cause
But still it takes a toll
And though I dream of endless things
Men that do not die
Rowing bowls and a stone that sings
Gemstones without flaws


All my running
Brought me nothing
I keep wanting
Can’t stop dreaming
Why don’t I die?

I cannot put words in my pen
cold labyrinthine prose
the dissonance an unholy din
irony like hated foes
I spill my soul like my seed
Quiet horrid hidden sin
Lies there for any to read
Solace not found within

All my running
Brings me nothing
I keep wanting
Can’t stop dreaming
Why don’t I die?

(I am still working on this comments very appreciated)

seriously, i need some feed back here, insult me if nothing else

[Trixsie Vixen]

TBH it feels like the second half.  Like I'm missing the setup or something...


Sorry vague feedback is vague