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Author Topic: Finally finished River's ref! Can you critique it?  (Read 1727 times)

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Finally finished River's ref! Can you critique it?
« on: July 07, 2015, 04:09:45 AM »
Mrow, I really would love you guys to critique two things about this; River's design, and also my art, if you would! *purrs* You know, just tell me what you like about it, what you think I could improve on... thank you in advance!  :)
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Re: Finally finished River's ref! Can you critique it?
« Reply #1 on: July 07, 2015, 05:55:34 AM »
Too big brush sizes, makes it look "splashy?".
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Re: Finally finished River's ref! Can you critique it?
« Reply #2 on: July 07, 2015, 06:14:09 AM »
I approve of this illustration, although I'd alter the hair to remove the stray strands falling from above-left of the nose. Maybe a bit of outlining to match the rest of the picture?
Experimenting with brushes might yield interesting results. Always good to consider variations you haven't thought of before.
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Re: Finally finished River's ref! Can you critique it?
« Reply #3 on: July 07, 2015, 09:30:48 AM »
If this is a drawing reference, I recommend you do a detail on the markings, showing her back and legs and stuff so people know if there's any runes, scars, tattoos, etc. there. 0ther than that, it's great!
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Re: Finally finished River's ref! Can you critique it?
« Reply #4 on: July 07, 2015, 07:00:11 PM »
Quote from: BillyBobJoeGeorge on July 07, 2015, 09:30:48 AM
If this is a drawing reference, I recommend you do a detail on the markings, showing her back and legs and stuff so people know if there's any runes, scars, tattoos, etc. there. 0ther than that, it's great!

Thank you!
Oh, I already did! Her only markings are the hieroglyphs, and those are shown in a close up next to her!
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Re: Finally finished River's ref! Can you critique it?
« Reply #5 on: July 07, 2015, 07:10:30 PM »
Then cool!
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Re: Finally finished River\'s ref! Can you critique it?
« Reply #6 on: July 07, 2015, 07:11:14 PM »
Quote from: Obey138 (Fluffy) on July 07, 2015, 05:55:34 AM
Too big brush sizes, makes it look "splashy?".
Hmm? Oh, that's just my art style.......

Post Merge: July 07, 2015, 07:12:53 PM
Quote from: HollowOfHaze on July 07, 2015, 06:14:09 AM
I approve of this illustration, although I'd alter the hair to remove the stray strands falling from above-left of the nose. Maybe a bit of outlining to match the rest of the picture?
Experimenting with brushes might yield interesting results. Always good to consider variations you haven't thought of before.
Ah, yes, I see what you mean. Thank you!
« Last Edit: July 07, 2015, 07:12:53 PM by RiverTheKitty, Reason: Merged DoublePost »
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