Everyone starts somewhere, and I'm not much of an art critic, honestly, but I feel it's best to wait until one practices more before doing commission work. Just a personal opinion I go by.
I actually bought a book called "Drawing Furries." It even has starting lessons on drawing people in general, a very complete lesson. I'm excited, now I just need to find some time to start practicing. Then my scribbles might start looking better.
I have the same opinion as well reason I haven't done commission...
If you want Evna I also have a 'drawing furries' book too. I don't use it either... Well never used it and if you like I can give it to you IF you think it may help you out (However I think your art is great it's unique as well)
I'm willing to give it to anyone who needs/wants it.
As for now I'm making a Christmas list... Why is everything expensive ~_~ (mostly art materials I need!) and with my grades I'm sure I'm not going to get much. Ugh **censor** although I'm glad to say I'm bringing them up, so that's good...