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Author Topic: [Search for Beta Reader] Fantasy story  (Read 933 times)

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[Search for Beta Reader] Fantasy story
« on: March 25, 2016, 06:41:14 PM »
Hello there!

I am sorry that I wasn't really active lately.

Well...

I am writing an old story again after I lost it.
I am only starting but I would like to see if anyone would be interested in beta reading for me.

I have about 6 pages on paper which are 8 pages on the computer.

Here's the prologue. Maybe it piques someone's interest.

Prologue

With horror she watched her hands and fingers prolong and turn into furred paws with sharp claws. She could feel her face change as well trying to touch it but failing and rushed up to a mirror standing in one corner of what appeared to be a tent. Her eyes had turned green-yellow and reminded her of those of a dog or wolf. Already her nose and mouth were growing into a small snout covering with fur. Her dark brown short stylish hair fell out replaced by/with a full mane. Her slender body became more muscular and a little taller which made her clothes tear and fall off. Instead of being totally naked though her whole body was coated with dark brown fur and her legs grew longer, her calves obviously breaking leaving her with digitigrade legs. Turning slightly she noticed the big dark brown bushy tail wiggling behind her for the first time. Looking back up her maw was fully formed now filled with long sharp teeth as she bared them in a wolfish grin. Last but not least her ears lengthened moving up her head until they were resembling those of a wolf.

Taking a few slow, insecure steps back – not used to the feeling of her new body yet – she gazed at the wolf on two legs standing in front of her in the mirror with an incredulous expression on her animal face.
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Just contact me!
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Re: [Search for Beta Reader] Fantasy story
« Reply #1 on: March 28, 2016, 01:11:56 PM »
Has anyone contacted you yet? I could help a bit if you'd like!
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Re: [Search for Beta Reader] Fantasy story
« Reply #2 on: March 28, 2016, 03:02:33 PM »
Nope, not yet!
That would be great!
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Re: [Search for Beta Reader] Fantasy story
« Reply #3 on: March 29, 2016, 12:02:53 AM »
Alrighty, feel free to PM me or do a google doc or something, and I can read through things and do some minor editing/word choice if you'd like!
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