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Author Topic: Torn  (Read 9293 times)

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Offline SadDubwool

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Re: Torn
« Reply #210 on: August 15, 2016, 10:02:17 AM »
"Well Hello to you too, Space cowboy"*He said, taking the poison from her words and spitting it back towards her, He pushed his hat up with his vice before saying*"Anyway, what do you need my help with, Alien?"
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Re: Torn
« Reply #211 on: August 15, 2016, 10:20:01 AM »
"Monster." She huffed. "Well you seem to know more about this gen. We don't." She gestures to the fox and feral dragon. "Also we need a place to stay... I'm positive no one is going to hand over money or a room for free. It's Vegas."

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Re: Torn
« Reply #212 on: August 15, 2016, 10:33:21 AM »
"So.... You expect me to pull money out of thin air and magically have enough to buy three rooms?"*He chuckled before sighing*"The only places I can list right now that are big enough to hold three people without needing money are The Soup kitchen or My House..."*He put his hands in his trench coat pockets*
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Re: Torn
« Reply #213 on: August 15, 2016, 10:41:32 AM »
Suddenly, and without warning, shouting arose from the hotel lobby, and Ray stumbled out amid curses from the front desk. The raccoon stared back, confused as to what just happened.

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Re: Torn
« Reply #214 on: August 15, 2016, 10:49:01 AM »
"We didn't ask to be here, Alright? Your the one who greeted us. So I assumed you were going to help, or were you hoping to make friends?" She scoffed, her ears began to flick, to the sounds of shouting at a nearby hotel.

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Re: Torn
« Reply #215 on: August 15, 2016, 10:54:14 AM »
"Well, both... but counting the fact no-one seems to appreciate it, I don't really care anymore"*He said, he could hear the yells but thought nothing of it*"Honestly, I've had enough pissy-toned people vaguely insult me today."
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« Reply #216 on: August 15, 2016, 11:09:43 AM »
"I haven't insulted anyone. Especially when I first met you, I was respectful and calm unlike everyone else who was bitching and panicking. I grew annoyed and decided to leave." She sighed. Under her mask which hid her snarling face. She took deep breaths before sitting down silently, holding her head between her knees. Zaida just closed her eyes, gritting her teeth in slight pain. It was silent for a few minutes. "I'm sorry I don't know your name Fox, but if you can please talk to them... because...I can't..." She asked the cyborg in a sudden quiet and soft voice, as she had finally calmed down.

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Re: Torn
« Reply #217 on: August 15, 2016, 11:19:24 AM »
*Michael started walking away, He can't wait to get to his house, today was a long and frustrating one*"I forgot I had a bullet In my leg"*He said under his breath*"I'm burning fuel too.."
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Re: Torn
« Reply #218 on: August 15, 2016, 12:17:39 PM »
Ray after a few minutes of planning, slipped into an alleyway adjacent to the hotel, crouched low and watched the hotel, the micro-supercomputer that essentially was his brain processing all he observed. After a few moments, he pieced it together, just as one of the residents left, a shining key in her paws. Ray's eyes went blank, as his visual-processor began relaying his directive.


Obtain residential premises
Blend into populace
Execute procurement detail protocol

Ray snapped back into focus, and began to stalk the resident. To the unlearned, Ray was simply going the same way as the female; but to the trained eye it was painfully obvious he meant to either kill or steal from her.

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Re: Torn
« Reply #219 on: August 15, 2016, 01:16:26 PM »
The small lion approached the edge of the city and gazed in awe. Never had she seen one so big and look so... weird. Proof that she was far, far from home. She could rest easy for the most part. And so she began exploring the streets.

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Re: Torn
« Reply #220 on: August 15, 2016, 01:37:25 PM »
"So where am I left in this situation?"
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Re: Torn
« Reply #221 on: August 15, 2016, 07:42:49 PM »
(thanks Zaida for at least moving my character along. I hate when stuff happens while i sleep.)


Sierra seemed more distracted by the yelling. She heard what Zaida said and snapped back into reality.
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Re: Torn
« Reply #222 on: August 15, 2016, 10:50:57 PM »
Raz was surprised at how fast this conversation went that he didn't know what to do, and seeing Zaida sit down on the ground, believing she was in more pain, he lowered his head  back down to her and slipped his tongue onto her cheek, retracting it and then nuzzling her some more.
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Re: Torn
« Reply #223 on: August 16, 2016, 10:50:12 AM »
The lion caught sight of the oddball group. Her eyes focused in wonder at the feral dragon while approaching them, but as she drew closer, the bizarre traits of the rest of the group grew more apparent and the more confused she became.

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Re: Torn
« Reply #224 on: August 16, 2016, 02:42:07 PM »
Zaida pet razuel and sighed softly. She picked her head up and turned to see a lion cub approaching them, obviously confused. "Yes?" She asked the feline.

 

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