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Re: Torn
« Reply #30 on: August 11, 2016, 12:45:56 AM »
"You see, where were at now is a....Tear of some sort, somehow people of long gone and unknown eras of history seem to be sucked out into the present, and you guy's are lucky...or unlucky enough to be thrown here."*His hand turned into a vice grip, picking up a strange rock*




"Hell, even inanimate objects can be sucked through"
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Re: Torn
« Reply #31 on: August 11, 2016, 12:50:01 AM »
"WHAT DO YOU MEAN?!"
Nikolai pulled his gun out and pointed it directly at the talking thing.
"TAKE ME BACK HOME YOU PIG!"

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Re: Torn
« Reply #32 on: August 11, 2016, 12:52:51 AM »
"What I mean is that you are not in your time, and won't be unless you make a backwards time machine"


*He looked at the guy who was pointed his gun at him* "Now, stop pointing your...objects...at me and think it over."
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Re: Torn
« Reply #33 on: August 11, 2016, 12:54:00 AM »
Sergei looked over at the Robot, then over to Zaida then over to Nikolai. He sat himself down, his mouth was gaped open and he was tearing up, "But my family.... Back at home..." He got up and grabbed the Robot, "Did we at least win the war!?" The man looked broken.

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Re: Torn
« Reply #34 on: August 11, 2016, 12:58:42 AM »
"Take me back, now!" is Nikolai saying in a rather serious and threathning tone.
"Few minutes ago I was home, now take me back or this "object" will show his purpose"

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Re: Torn
« Reply #35 on: August 11, 2016, 01:09:53 AM »
Raz woke up not too far from the others, groaning as he had a spear and arrows stuck in his side, he hadn't realized this was not his time, nor was he in his cave. There was a soft dust cloud over the area, and Raz's stone dimly lit up his location through the dust, and from a distance, his groaning could be heard
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Re: Torn
« Reply #36 on: August 11, 2016, 01:14:17 AM »
"Yes, you won the war"*He said before looking at Nikolai*"Did you hear me? THERE. IS. NO. WAY."*He said, he was loosing his temper*"And how could I take you back anyway?"
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Re: Torn
« Reply #37 on: August 11, 2016, 01:15:46 AM »
Nikolai smiled but still pointing his gun towards the mysterious robot he asked: "you mean we won the war? We won from the US? When did we do that?"

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Re: Torn
« Reply #38 on: August 11, 2016, 01:16:26 AM »
Sergei let go of the robot, he sat on the ground and took his helmet off. He then sat in silence, "If I'm in the future.... Does that mean everyone I knew is dead? My wife, child, brother, mother and my father.... All of them are dead?"

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Re: Torn
« Reply #39 on: August 11, 2016, 01:21:24 AM »
*He looked a nikolai*"I wasn't talking to you"*He looked at Sergei before sighing*"Listen, It might be hard to grip, but yes... They couldn't of lived this long, but being as far as we are in the future, You probably have generations of grand kids, If that makes you feel better"
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Torn
« Reply #40 on: August 11, 2016, 01:23:50 AM »
Zaida sat back watching the scene. "Huh" 'if this is the past? That means it never happened... Odd.' she sat on a boulder "I can start over. 3062 was a living hell for me, I guess I've retired early then."
« Last Edit: August 11, 2016, 02:51:44 AM by Zaida »

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Re: Torn
« Reply #41 on: August 11, 2016, 01:24:03 AM »
Nikolai fires a warning shot to show he is being serious
"Next time it will be bullseye, Time you answer questions my friend, did we win the war and why am I here? Also where are we you pig?"

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Re: Torn
« Reply #42 on: August 11, 2016, 01:28:57 AM »
Raz struggled to get up, stumbling as he stood up, he tried to walk forward and he stepped into a pothole, and as he fell, his paw landed on a sharp object, and upon impact, he let out a roar in pain and he reared back and tried to force the object out of his paw.
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Re: Torn
« Reply #43 on: August 11, 2016, 01:32:11 AM »
"The USSR Dissolved In 1991, December I believe, Before you could damage American soil"*He sighed before saying*"If I knew ANYTHING on why you're here, I would tell you, Also, you're in the Mojave desert, Nevada"*He  heard the roar before sighing*"Another one.."
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Re: Torn
« Reply #44 on: August 11, 2016, 01:34:00 AM »
Sergei sighed, he then looked at everyone. He watched Nikolai fire his gun and he watched Zaida sit down on the boulder. He then picked up his helmet and moved near Zaida, "So.... Who are you?"

 

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