((I agree. You gotta have the details in there; just saying, 'Fyroh said "Hi. How are you?"' isn't good, this is more like it; 'Fyroh turned, and saw the stranger. He raised a hand in greeting, giving a short smile as he quickly said, "Hey! How've you been?"' That might not be the best example ever, but it gives my point. And Anubis, don't put your normal actions in speech marks.))
Fyroh couldn't help but smirk. "Right, well, money is like... uhh, it gives a value to things. Like, I could go and buy something off someone with money; lets say they had an apple, I could give them some money for it, lets say a few coins- that's what money is, these little coins." He pulled a few coins from his pocket, and held them out in his outstreched hand. "You can use money to get almost anything you want; but to get money, you have to work; that's doing things for someone, like helping to grow food. Or, you can sell things for money, like for example, I could sell my sword to some one, for some money, which I could then use to buy food... you following me?" He realised that he was probably overloading her with information, and quickly slipped the coins back in his pocket.
Kapei felt a little embarrassed, and shuffled back over. After a moment of silence, he finally spoke, "Uh, what's your name?.." He knew he was bad at starting conversations, and cursed himself for it. He constantly broke eye contact to look at the bar, for no particular reason other than avoid staring at the stranger.