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Shattered Glass: A Broken Heart
« on: March 04, 2008, 12:12:32 AM »
A few poems I wrote from a few months back till now, coming from my heart. And I don't even remember who some of 'em are about...Odd...
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Re: Poems From My Random Moods: English Class Assignment
« Reply #1 on: March 07, 2008, 06:00:51 AM »
That's a lot :3
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Would you marry me, would you bury me, would you carry me to the end?

Now it's just too late, and we can't go back, I'm sorry, I can't be perfect.

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Re: Poems From My Random Moods: English Class Assignment
« Reply #2 on: March 07, 2008, 09:00:07 PM »
Rofl, well I'll be waiting! :D
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Would you marry me, would you bury me, would you carry me to the end?

Now it's just too late, and we can't go back, I'm sorry, I can't be perfect.

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Re: Poems From My Random Moods: English Class Assignment
« Reply #3 on: March 08, 2008, 01:00:04 AM »
Hai, arigatou gozaimasu!  :D
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Re: Poems From My Random Moods: English Class Assignment
« Reply #4 on: March 08, 2008, 08:58:55 AM »
hehe, yup. It means "Yes, thank you very much!" :3 some beginner's japanese from a guy who picks up random phrases/words from random languages XD
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I'd rather DIE than go to heaven! >:3

Would you marry me, would you bury me, would you carry me to the end?

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Re: Poems From My Random Moods: English Class Assignment
« Reply #5 on: March 10, 2008, 04:15:27 PM »
I will suck all the poems dry of enjoyment all for muhself! X3
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Re: Poems From My Random Moods: English Class Assignment
« Reply #6 on: March 11, 2008, 02:19:11 PM »
your poems are so cool

i have a friend just like you who is awesome at making peoms like you

i love you work keep it up  :)
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Re: Poems From My Random Moods: English Class Assignment
« Reply #7 on: March 11, 2008, 03:56:29 PM »
Quote from: Broken~Hearted on March 11, 2008, 11:14:47 AM
{color=teal]*laughs* You enjoy them then, huh?[/color]

*stops sucking the enjoyment* hehe, yeah. XD *continues with the sucking*
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Re: Poems From My Random Moods: English Class Assignment
« Reply #8 on: March 14, 2008, 03:43:11 PM »
really good :3 I like how you used your own name in it. That poem pretty much sums up my life  =s
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Re: Poems From My Random Moods: English Class Assignment
« Reply #9 on: March 16, 2008, 10:10:10 AM »
Wow, your lyrics are really pretty  :D You should make it into a song =p YAY!! MORE POEMS!! ^.^ *sucks the enjoyment out of those too* XD
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« Reply #10 on: April 26, 2008, 12:07:10 AM »
great job sis,    :) keep them coming.
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Re: Poems From My Random Moods: English Class Assignment
« Reply #11 on: April 26, 2008, 05:54:17 PM »
i love your poems, keep them comming

i cant wait
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Re: Poems From My Random Moods: English Class Assignment
« Reply #12 on: April 27, 2008, 03:53:27 AM »
my favs(long list) are: hate, love, the pieces, i cry, will i ever, thinking(about you), drowning(something i cannot see), like the birds, and pages. but i love them all

heres my first attempt at poetry
THE NEWS
it hits you like a ton of bricks,
it makes you feel holow inside.
you know that it has to be this way,
but you wish you could change it.
you dont want to go on living this way,
but you must.
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Re: Poems From My Random Moods: English Class Assignment
« Reply #13 on: April 27, 2008, 10:33:52 AM »
Woah! These are brilliant! They clearly express great emotion to the reader whilst remaining simple and understandable. Some of them really moved me. I don't know why, but The Void (Can it be true?) is a favourite of mine.  
You've inspired me to start writing poetry again, although my spontaneous writing needs more work, especially when compared to yours:

Hollow Inside
The world twists and it turns,
Will we ever learn?
There is a rift engulfing all of us,
A void feasting on our loss.
Why? Why today?
Why did my heart break away?
Sometimes I wish I had never been born at all,
So I would never feel the harsh fall:
From having all you desire,
To losing all your fire.
From being full of love,
To feeling their cold shove.
Me and my soul have died,
I feel so hollow inside...
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Re: Poems From My Random Moods: English Class Assignment
« Reply #14 on: April 27, 2008, 12:21:39 PM »
I wrote a poem too *Cough* ahem. To the sound of 'Roses are Red"

I call it Noob

Raptors are Sexy
Lizards are too
If I don't learn to write real poems
I'm gonna feel like a foo

Thank you thanks you.

Seriously you got some real talent. For me to write anything of that caliber it would take months.
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