Shattered Glass: A Broken Heart

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It's becoming harder and harder to choose when your poetry is of such a high standard. Even your weaker pieces are brilliant. You may wish to continue writing on the side when you get older. It would be interesting to see what your writing would be like then...

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 :sparkle: Woah. As well written and packed full of emotion as always...
'Change (Shattered Smile)', 'Needles and Smiles' and 'Cursed' are all instant favourites.

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do you poems come from life experiences? because if you ever need someone to talk to you know how to reach me, i would be glad to help all i can

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DO NOT TALK LIKE THAT!

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(Though some days I think I should... o.0)

you shouldnt think like that

[Dakota]

that might be so, but its still not good to think about that kind of stuff alot

[XXxMaximuMXXx]

nice one!

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Both of your latest ones are great...(I'm running out of words to describe them...stupid English language...If you keep this up I'll have to create a new language just to give praise...)

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Your welcome. I can only hope that my poetry will one day reach your level.

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Perhaps, perhaps not. We cannot say which statements match reality, as we all perceive reality in different ways, each of us having our own personal tastes, each opinion equally important. In a way you could say that no form/type/piece of poetry is better or worse then another, as the self-expression found within the writing forms a different reality depending on your viewpoint and perception of things. Just because we believe that we are reading a post rambling on about personal realities doesn't mean that this perception of reality is correct. It could be that I just insulted everyone in the rudest manner possible but you all refuse to accept what you see, believing that I wouldn't do such a thing. Your reality then becomes whatever your subconcious wishes it to be. In this instance it is a large spew of insane ramblings which may or may not be real...

[...Rambling end...]

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Agreed. Writer's block is a nightmare, regardless of what you're writing; be it poem, fiction or essay...

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  I find those very touching...You always seem to strike a chord within me with your poems...

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  :th_PyongLlora: That's beautiful. There are a few typos, but it is...really moving...I need a tissue...

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  Nice! As for your typos:
"Can't take the constant nos" and
"My mother will always so no"
(My mum has been hard on me lately too...)

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  ...My heart goes out for you. I really...felt...the emotion there...