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Re: Oneshot Collection
« Reply #15 on: September 10, 2008, 07:34:52 PM »
Well, here is one that, once again, is dark and angsty; just the way we like it:
The End of All Things
A memory, glinting in my mind like a single, perfect emerald amongst an endless amount of dull rock. As it shines there, I can almost reach out and touch it, basking in the brilliance of that single ray of light; that one flawless scene.
I see a vast expanse of saphire blue on the horizon, a gentle breeze brings life to the still objects around me. Birds sing beautifully to one another, in harmony with the blades of grass and the trees that swing to and fro in their own syncronised dance: the greatest performance they ever gave out, showing the world how gorgeous nature was. The Sun smiled down upon me, warming my face as the fresh scent of morning flooded my being. Content, I close my eyes and smile, enjoying the moment before opening my eyes once more...

A single deformed hand greets me, just one of many sticking out of the pile of corpses before me, drenched in their own blood and fluids. The sickening scent of death plagues my nostrils as an empty silence deafens my mind. A colorless, murky spread blots out the sky from every direction, identically positioned wherever I looked, engulfing even the horizon. The blackened, scorched Earth is still, without so much as a whisper of wind to break the eerie silence. Time could very well have frozen and it would be impossible to tell the difference.
I slowly step back and here a spine-chilling crunch. I don't dare to look down and continue to mindlessly step back, my eyes unfocused and dialated. My foot slips ever so slightly and I turn around just in time to see the cliff edge I almost walked off. Regaining my senses slightly, I gaze at the expanse down below, seeing nothing but burning rubble as small dots flee to and fro, losing their sanity as everything they know is reduced to naught but charred stone.

A single haunting sound pierces right through me, echoing throughout the murky sky. Looking up, I feel a tear run down my cheek as I finally do what I must and reach out towards humanity: "The End of All Things is upon you! There is no time for retribution, no time to atone for your evil!...Begone..."
I bite my lip as I close my mouth once more, satisfied that my message has reached mankind. With red eyes and a sob, I unfurl my black wings and descend upon humanity, sowing death and disaster in my wake, against my will.
The Angel of Death's tears impact a single dying plant as the world reaches its end...
« Last Edit: September 10, 2008, 07:53:37 PM by flames »
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

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Re: Oneshot Collection
« Reply #16 on: September 10, 2008, 07:40:37 PM »
Wow... That was amazing brother. All the emotion and description is just magnificent. Well done, once again.

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Re: Oneshot Collection
« Reply #17 on: September 10, 2008, 08:48:31 PM »
Awesome. I really like it! And it rocked me to the core. You've reached my level, Flames dear. And you have made it expand.
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Re: Oneshot Collection
« Reply #18 on: September 23, 2008, 03:57:00 PM »
An Eternal Nightmare
Drip. A lone trickle forges its solitary path down my arm. Drip. The echoing sound of nothingness deafens me as I shut my eyes once more, breathing in the dark vapour that engulfs me entirely. Drip. A flash of crimson is the only colour in this void, a fiery fluid alone amongst the shadows. Drip. There’s an unbearable stench that grips the mind, blank yet full of horribleness. I sigh in relief as I sheathe my blade, letting my blood endlessly drip onto the vast expanse of nothingness. An eternity passes by and I open my eyes, revealing my dulled, soulless orbs to the void. It is time.
The ripple bursts into existence and a lone tear falls, a single sparkling droplet of beauty in this otherwise barren and bleak world. It begins…
Demons appear and spread throughout the old world in human form, slowly gaining strength. I can only watch, once again, as they chase down my love and defile her, torture her, over and over and over again. As always, every cell in my body attempts to move, to aid her, to cry out…but I remain paralysed as they finally end their brutality and throw her corpse at my feet. I weep.

All around me, that same gruesome series of images repeats itself a million times, replaying every slash, every battering; every drop of her precious blood. I watch with empty eyes as she is killed over and over, for all of time.
I don’t know how long I’ve been in this world. It’ll be another millennium before this torture ends and I’m left to the void once more, free to let my anguish flow as a crimson river, to feel the despair in full as I realise that she really is gone…and I could do nothing to save her…
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

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Re: Oneshot Collection
« Reply #19 on: September 25, 2008, 09:51:08 AM »
Another quality entry to your series Flames, very moving. Sorta how Tezztor felt at the camp but a lot better worded and emotional. Very well done. It amazes me the stuff you come up with is better then even some of the most professional writes I've seen (or read if you wanna nitpick)

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Re: Oneshot Collection
« Reply #20 on: October 27, 2008, 05:29:57 PM »
The Black Wind...
(A silent gale, a muted gust of wind...)
A lone heart pumps louder and louder, shattering the deathly peace of rest.
(A slight breeze, a foretelling of more terrible things to come...)
Screams of pain echo into the night sky, fragmenting into indivudual shards of torment; spreading anguish across the land.
(A howl in the distance, a shadow on the horizon: Apprehension...)
An inferno grips the area in its molten claws and laughs, causing the very Earth to tremble in fear.
(A rush, a touch, eternally flowing: The Black Wind calls...)
Death and more death: the calling card of this horde, this plague upon decent life.
(The tides of time flow, aligning with this wind, this gale, this tornado of emotion...)
The horde leaves naught but scorched craters, frozen wastelands and crushed rubble in its path. Soon, our time too will come to an end.

...Silence returns once more, an eerie silence as all thoughts cease and hearts freeze. Their eyes widen, locked into a nameless expression, reflecting the hidden swirling pool of emotion within. Nobody moves. Nobody dares breathe. Nobody blinks, nor shake or even think. Silence. No heartbeats, no noise...only nothingness.
One of the survivours twitches ever so slightly and all that ever is and ever will be is unleashed in that lone moment: hearts beat like thunder, blood rushes out in a cascading crimson waterfall and all but the one who twitched leaps back; all in one fragment of time, a single moment...Time seems to freeze, unable to cope with all that is occurring. Only when it is certain of what happened, what is happening and what will happen does the flow resume with a sigh.
The surviours look on in horror as the twitcher collapses into a wretched and mangled heap on the floor, the remains of what had once been their barrier embedded in his flesh. A large, smoking cannon is lowered and the mech lumbers fowards, shaking the ground with each echoing, unbearable step. The pilot grins maniacally as the mech advances: getting closer and closer to the survivours, the rebels who dared to defy the New Order of the World.
The survivours all step back and cower, quivering in fear...all but one. He stands there defiantly, tail moving slightly in the newborn breeze, eyes focused on the pilot with all the intensity of the Sun.

The pilot frowns at this and glances again, realising who this cocky punk was. With a sneer he stopped the mech and looked down upon the survivours before addressing them all:
"So! This is how your group ends! This is how the once mighty, honourable and idealistic rebels die!? Pathetic!" With that he spat on the scorched ground before continuing: "You people...We offer you a utopia, a chance for all foolish conflicts to end and THIS is how you repay us!? By declaring war!? Hmph! And to think: all of this simply because you would lose your precious 'freedom'...Had you all seen the error of your ways I would have spared all of you and all races would live in harmony...Except for the Anthro of course." He spat in the defiant one's direction, hoping to strike some fear into the fiery Anthro's heart. But no, just as legend had foretold, he remained as defiant and stubborn as ever.
Glaring at him, the pilot continued, injecting more malice into his voice this time: "But now...There is no choice for me left but to erase you from existence in the name of the Lord who rules Time, Shazron-sama! Any last words, vermin?" He spat out again, directing the last sentence to the fiery Anthro.
The Anthro took a single step foward, closing his eyes. A jumble of cries came from the other survivours, begging him not to do anything. He ignored them, getting into a battle-ready stance.
"Ohhohohoho! I was told you were a stubborn fool, but to go against ME? Truly, you deserve to be crushed...Haven't you realised that it was your fate to die here?" The pilot seemed both amused and frustrated with this continued resistance.
Silence. No breeze, no hearts thumping, just...nothing...
Still, not opening his eyes, the Anthro said but one thing before reaching for his blade: "If it is my fate to die...I shall simply laugh!" And with that he opened his crimson eyes, narrowed them into a determined glare and drew his blade with a swift sound that seemed to pierce through the ages.
(The Black Wind howls...)
A sudden sound blasted out of both nowhere and everywhere, striking everyone to the core. It was a gale, a blizzard, a sign of change...it was eternity, it was zero...It was, is and always will be indescribable, unimaginable and incredible to behold.
"Do you hear that?...That's the sound of The Black Wind..." The Anthro suddenly said in an ominously calm voice. He tightened his grip slightly and tensed his muscles slightly as the mech began to move and the pilot yelled at him, but those curses and insults fell on deaf ears. "Hmph. Howl all you wish...Death is nothing to the reaper!" And with that last warcry the fiery Anthro shot fowards, streaking through the air like a fireball, a single glint that was his blade.
And...as a shot was fired from the mech and all was blinded by the flash of light it caused...that glint too became a streak...
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

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Re: Oneshot Collection
« Reply #21 on: November 01, 2008, 07:36:38 PM »
Nice, I like it, though to be honest I wish you would do more flames stories.

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Re: Oneshot Collection
« Reply #22 on: November 01, 2008, 07:47:09 PM »
A Human Void-Preview
"I'm here standing on the edge of the abyss, staring up...at where the full moon should be..." A lone figure, their voice floating on the harsh wind, speaks...
"Blood, crimson blood: flowing in a river through a valley...both born out of hate and despair."
A darkness more vile and detestable than anything of this mortal realm rears its roaring head...
"Emptiness, eternal sorrow...I shall make them feel my lonliness and despair...!"
Nothing and everything, terrible and beautiful; a conflct threatens to tear the world in two...
"Pain, such pain brought by pathetic emotions...I shall start a new age!"
Love lost, rage unleashed: Death and more death shall be the only result...
"Life is worthless without that one person...To die engulfed in misery or be reborn as the future?"
One individual ponders on a decision that could end all life as we know it...
Be afraid, be very afraid...Nothing is eternal, nothing is sacred; there exists only a void where the moon and the heart should be...!

(Tezz, I've been trying to. In any case, reread The Black Wind...who said that it had nothing to do with Flames?)
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

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Re: Oneshot Collection
« Reply #23 on: November 01, 2008, 07:52:10 PM »
Nice new addition


(if It had to do with flames is hard to tell he isnt mentioned at all, at least by name. I cant just assume that anthro could be him)

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Re: Oneshot Collection
« Reply #24 on: November 23, 2008, 07:20:22 PM »
*Yawns* Woah, it's been ages since I last wrote! Well, I had best see what I can scrounge up and throw together...
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A dark shadow stands tall against the setting sun, the light forming a crimson halo around the figure: a hauntingly beautiful yet ominous sight to behold. A slight gust of wind blows, scattering the early autumn leaves to and fro, forming an intricate dance as they roll over one another before they fall, their rustling the only sound to disrupt the tranquil silence. There is a tremor, a change of flow in the air, so slight one could easily mistake it for something they only imagined.
The leaves suddenly become still, even as the wind slowly blows with more force, the breeze becoming stronger, colder, harsher. A flicker is seen near the figure, one so brief it could have easily been a trick of the light and nothing more...
The Sun retreats cautiously under the horizon, the halo around the figure fading at an oddly faster speed. The cloaked figure, face hidden in the darkest of shadow, grips the clothing closer to their body as the wind sends ripples streaming through it in an almost hypnotising manner.

The figure slowly straightens up, gloved fists clenched tight. Their eyes open, shining from within the shadows, absorbing the sights of their surroundings: a great stretch of grassy land, the occasional tree, the land far below the cliff-like edge they stood on and a city down below, in the distance reflecting what little sunlight remained.
Light vanished a few moments later, and a blanket of darkness engulfing the visible world. A howling gale started to form, making its presence known and in that instance, with a sudden blurred movement, the figure vanished from their position. Had there been anyone nearby at the time, they might have noticed a shape falling down towards the land below, a speck of fire-like light beside it...
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

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Re: Oneshot Collection
« Reply #25 on: December 06, 2008, 10:23:17 AM »
Nobody
Monday morning: dreary, dull, and drowning in boring routine after boring routine. People get up, eat, read the paper, go to work, get yelled at and return home glumly with a blank expression. Day in, day out: a cycle everyone seems to follow...that is, except for Nobody.
Dark clouds and dense smog blot out the sky as the putrid smells of the city choke him, this Nobody. Looking down, shuffling through the crowd, never noticed, never cares. Treading on litter, crossing congested roads, not once looking up, not once smiling or talking to someone or doing anything but walk.
He is surrounded by the crowds, engulfed in a sea of routine-obsessed people, yet Nobody remains more alone than Lonliness herself. Time passes, people come and go, doing the same actions, going to the same places...Grey buildings meet the sky, frustrated drivers punch out their horns, tires screech, birds flee and a starving cat raids through a dustbin noisily. Same people, same sights too...Nothing ever changes and nothing ever will. This Nobody knows all to well.
A muffled bang, then silence. Nobody hears not the city sounds, nor sees the disgrace to decent life around him. He never utters a word or changes his expression as his body slowly falls, the dull world speckled red, the choking stench replaced with a very different scent. With a slight thud he lands, still unnoticed, on the dirty pavement, eyes hollow.
Nobody is no more, just another forgotten face on the news.
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

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Re: Oneshot Collection
« Reply #26 on: December 23, 2008, 09:07:01 PM »
Wow... so, barren... Makes me feel so hopeless...
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Re: Oneshot Collection
« Reply #27 on: December 27, 2008, 08:36:37 PM »
Inner Struggle
People call me crazy, insane, a madman, a threat to society...their descriptions vary, but they all react the same when I finally decide to tell them...
Ah, you have no idea what I'm on about, do you? I'll explain in all due time. You see, I often react very differently to most in an emotionally-straining situation. My emotions and sanity go haywire and what should have been a simple disagreement or slight pain becomes a fully-fledged whirlwind of ("almost") multiple personalities, heartbreak, roaring, bleeding, and a tidal wave of sorrow...This is not normal, and it has led to much of the pain I have suffered in life, as I screwup my words and loose everything: Trust, dignity, honour, friends, family...and the love of my life...

Hm? You're starting to back away a bit...*Laughs bitterly* I haven't even started my explanation of why this happens and why everyone thinks I am insane...maybe I am, maybe we all are...*Twisted smile* What is "sane" anyway?
Now...sit down and listen well to my lil' story. It's worthwhile to find out what makes people like me tick after all...

My story begins when I was but a child and a very arrogant, annoying one at that. Known by all my classmates as the "know-it-all" and by adults as such meaningless terms like "gifted", "talented" and "mature". Mature? Yeah right. I was always sure that I was right, so certain of my importance, so uncaring towards others...intelligent enough to gain praise yet not enough to realise the error of my ways.
But then things changed...

The so-called experts say trauma, intense stress and unbearable emotions can change a person should they all come together at once...since then I have experienced many such occurances, but none changed me like that first major shock to my worldview. The impact was incredible. Much of my old personality remained but I gradually lost my old traits, habits and views. I started putting other people first and it got to the point where I became very shy, had a lack of pride in myself, thought all my close friends infinitely better than me and I blamed myself for everything...
I was steadily losing my sanity over the years, but it wasn't until I became a self-loathing wreck that my sanity went out the window. The people I cared most for gave me a reason to hate myself, the one I loved inflicting scar after scar on my soul.

I had took all I could take and now, as an adult, all Hell went loose...

(To be edited/continued later)
« Last Edit: January 20, 2009, 06:06:32 PM by flames, Reason: Added to story »
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Re: Oneshot Collection
« Reply #28 on: December 27, 2008, 09:39:41 PM »
wow.... jeez... sounds so lonely. You really are good Flames honey.
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Re: Oneshot Collection
« Reply #29 on: January 09, 2009, 08:12:23 PM »
Hehe, thanks. :"> (Inner Struggle may be continued at a later date)

Weary...
Thud, thud, thud. My heavy feet fall hard onto the earth with every slow step. Thud, thud, thud. The sound of my heart weakly pumping my remaining blood around my battered and bruised body. Thud, thud, thud. A throbbing series of aches pulsing with a life of their own...
It's been too long.

I've lost count of how long it's been since I first set out, how long since I could just sit back and relax. Time slips out of my worn and scarred paws, dissolving into nothingness, a trick of the light.
I've been walking so long, so far, so much that I no longer remember why I set out in the first place. My once swift and enthusiastic pace reduced to this weary plodding forward, my very bones ready to give up and collapse.
I have been through so much: battles on a grand scale I could never have imagined, ardous and tedious quests that seemed to stretch both Time and Space out before me...so much I have done, yet so little remains. My clothing is torn and ragged, my very flesh limply hanging onto my body. Once-vibrant fur is but a shadow of its former glory, hardened blood and patches of grey now a common sight.
It's been too long.

Exhausted, wounded and out of luck, the thuds slowly stop; my eyes bloodshot and hollow. I've been through more than most could ever even comprehend, let alone withstand. With that thought and what might be my last breath, I sag down, ready to collapse when something suddenly makes my ears twitch. Sound. I ignore it, my body steadily yielding to my weariness. More sound. I pause, my eyes blinkly slightly as I raise my head, a familiar sight on the horizon and, more importantly, a very familiar figure running towards me.
With a sudden rush of energy I get to my feet and run towards that sight, heart beating wildly, breathes frantic, face beaming.
It's been too long.
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

 

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