Some poems

[Vince the Dark]

Okay, so here's a few poems I've written a while back and now decided to post. Don't be too critical about them because I haven't written poems before, but some thoughts about them are always welcome.

Feelings

How can this be?
That these feeling won't stop burning inside me,
Tearing me apart by the

endless sorrow.
Where did they come from?
Why are they here,
Taunting me with such a passion?
Will they ever stop?
Will it ever end?
Feelings that I have come to have,
Of all the people I've come to know.
My friends,
My family,
My light.

Brother

Brother of heart,
Brother by soul.
You have been there for me,
In my hour of need.
Guided me,
Sheltered me,
From all that has come and gone.
From things to come.
You've been my shoulder to cry on,
In pain and sorrow.
And when you're not here with me,
It hurts like never before.
Those huge emotions,
Filling me with agony,
Pain,
And sorrow...
Oh I love you so,
My dear brother...

My Love

I wish I could be there by your side,
Holding you,
Loving you.
I wish that time would go faster,
So that we could finally be together.
It could not come soon enough,
For you are the one my heart belongs to,
It has no other.
So cherish it to your hearts content,
Let the feelings cut down every obstacle.
And one day,
I will be there by your side.

[flames]

You really should write poetry more often, they're beautiful.

[Somebody]

Nice poetry, Ill have to agree with flames and hope you decide to write some more

[Vince the Dark]

Thanks guys. Perhaps I'll get to writing more in the future.

[Vince the Dark]

This one is really special for me, and I put lots of effort into it. Very emotional in my opinion.

Destiny?

Along this lonely road,
A dragon walks the destined hall.
Few tears shed, along the line,
Many more to come in time.
Friends from here and there,
Gather round and see say a prayer,
For this lonely knight in time,
Longing for his mate all time.
Searching hope,
Never found.
Lost all light along the line.
He sits on his throne,
Alone for now.
Wishing light would come along.
Finding him in dark of night,
Longing for what is not found.
But what is this,
This light unseen?
Coming from a distance long,
Set enough to reach in time
A lone figure,
Someone new
Along this empty halls he strides
Falling in the dragons arms
The goldie now is warmly welcomed
In the dragons warm embrace,
Gentle kiss,
Last forever.
Love eternal,
Shall endeavor.

[flames]

I can see why, nii-san, it's just beautiful. :'( A lot of emotion and it all flows together...

[Arke]

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