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The bringer of peace
« on: December 17, 2008, 12:33:54 AM »
This story stars Wolfgang, a futuristic assassin using ancient world technique's to stop corrupt government and offiicials. He uses new world tech such as firearms and bombs but uses ancient world fighting styles and wespons such as scymatars(I'll probably spelt that wrong) and hidden daggers.(I kinda got the idea while playing Assassin's creed) This is his first kill of his career.

Wolfgang jumped from rooftop to rooftop as he scouted out his prime target, the corrupt governer of New York City, he looked at the freedom tower in the distance, it was a beautiful sight. He got back to the task at hand, he jumped onto another building across from the mayor's office. He looked over at the limo as it pulled up to the building.

Down below from Wolf's position a iron grey wolf stepped out of the limo as the rain fell down hard, a flash of lightning lit up the night, the Wolf named Dimitri looked around like he saw something but he shrugged and walked into the building with his security following close behind.

Wolf watched Dimitri walk into the building and he jumped over a few building so he could see the governor better, he made sure that his hidden blade on his left wrist worked and he jumped down from the building and sprinted to the side of the governor's office and he found a back door and he slipped in the back without anyone seeing him. He slipped into the basement of the building and found the fuse box and shot it with his silenced pistol and all of the lights went out.

"Hey what happened to the lights?" Dimitri asked annoyed.

Wolfgang moved through the building like a cat up to the governor's office and he slipped through the door of the office and he snuck up behind the governor's chair and covered his mouth and buried the blade in his neck, muffled cries for help came out of the governor as he was killed in his chair. Wolf slipped out of the office as the lights came back on from the back up generator. He hid in one of the plants next to the office door as he heard screams from the office.

The governors assisstant looked at the lifeless and bloody body that was in the governor's chair, blood was dripping out of the fatal wound on the governor's neck.

"There's as assassin in the building, search this whole building." The assisstant said to the security guards

As Wolf made his dash to the back door he planted C4 explosives all over the building.

Wolf finally made it to the back door and slipped out and he climbed the ladder of the next building next to the governors office and he jumped from building to building until he was five blocks away from the office and he turned to the governor's office building with the detenator in his paw, he looked at the building as he hit the detenator and the building exploded. The glow from the fire of the explosion lit up Wolf's face as he heard fire trucks and police vehicles getting closer and he made his dash to his hideout, not being seen by civilian or anyone.
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Re: The bringer of peace
« Reply #1 on: December 17, 2008, 12:36:39 AM »
Hmm not a bad read at all.

Its spelled Scimitar by the way.

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Re: The bringer of peace
« Reply #2 on: December 17, 2008, 12:39:49 AM »
nice, dark, and slightly brutail, if u want add a bit more about what wolfy is thinking, it will help keep the story moving without being rushed (thats just a sugestion it up to u) nice job tho

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Re: The bringer of peace
« Reply #3 on: December 17, 2008, 04:21:05 PM »
Nice wolf i knew it seemed familar (I play assasins creed last night XD) i like it alot ^w^
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Re: The bringer of peace
« Reply #4 on: December 18, 2008, 12:33:31 AM »
(Thanks everyone)

It was the dead of night as Wolfgang jumped from building to building as he looked around for his next target, a police chief that was secretly helping drugrunners smuggle cocaine into the city from miami. As Wolf got closer to the police building thoughts kept going through his mind.

I hope this one goes better than the last one Wolf thought to himself. His last target was almost a complete failure and he almost got killed, he was hit in the arm and couldn't use his sword. Wolf shook the thought away and he reached the police building, he could see the police chief in his office working on something, it was going to be the last thing he would be working on. Wolf jumped from the building and sprinted the police building, he peered in the window so he could blow it up, the cops in there were innocent and he couldn't harm innocent lives. He moved to the back of the building and found a back enterance, it was lock. Wolf pulled out his lock picking kit and picked the lock until it opened and he slipped in without anyone seeing. All the lights were on so he had to be extra careful moving through the building. He hid behind a large plant and thought things through.

Okay, the chief's office is on the third floor on the west side of the building, this is going to be a pain Wolf thought to himself as he dashed to the staircase without anyone seeing him. He ran up the stairs up to the third floor and opened the door and peered out the door, there was a cop busy with paper work and he was in the line of sight of the chief's office. He quietly snuck up behind him and nerve pinched his shoulder and he was out like a light. He looked over at the door and he walked over to it silently, he had to make this a silent kill.

The chief was busy working on paper work so he didn't notice the assassin knock out the officer on the other side of his door. He looked over at the door and he thought he heard something and went to go investigate, he pulled out his gun and placed his paw on the doorknob and began to twist it slowly.

Wolf felt the knob turn and he jumped to the side of the door and waited for the chief to step out, his hidden blade out and ready.

The chief, a cheetah cautiously stepped out of his office and looked around but didn't see the assassin sneaking up behind him.

Wolf grabbed the chief and put the blade to his neck.

"Your drug smuggling is over Niko." Wolf said as he dragged Niko into the his office and threw him into the chair.

"Who are you, who sent you." Niko said.

"My identity is not important, what is important is what I'm going to do with you." Wolf said as he flashed his blade to Niko.

"You can't." Niko said.

Niko jumped out of his chair and tried to run away but Wolfgang grabbed him by his collar and slamed him into the wall.

"Let you go." Niko said as he struggled.

Wolf smiled evily and buried his blade in Niko's neck and he was killed instantly.

Some of the police officers heard the noise from upstairs and ran to the office to find Niko in his chair dead and no one else was there, the only thing that was out of place except the corpse was a broken window.

Wolf looked at the officers from the building next door and he contacted his boss.

"Target has been taken care of sir." wolf said over his comlink.

"excellent, you will find your reward at your safehouse." his boss said.

Wolf took one more good look and he ran back to his safehouse.
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Re: The bringer of peace
« Reply #5 on: December 18, 2008, 01:41:40 AM »
i thought that was prety good i liked this passage better than the last one no offence, nice job wolfy

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Re: The bringer of peace
« Reply #6 on: December 18, 2008, 04:14:37 PM »
I like it ^w^
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Re: The bringer of peace
« Reply #7 on: December 20, 2008, 11:53:00 PM »
(thanks everyone for the somments)

Wolfgang was on the move as he followed his target, a district attorney that was smuggling Marijuana for a organized crime group. The DA was Wolf's parents attorney before his parents were killed by corrupt police officer, that was the main reason he became an assassin. He jumped from building to building trying to keep up with the car that the DA was in. The DA was on his way to a case, but by the time the car would get to the courthouse, his clients would need a new attorney. Wolf stopped and stood on the corner of a building and waited for the light to turn green, he was instruted to kill the DA at the courthouse, which sucked because he wanted to kill him now. As hew waited for the light to turn green he pulled out a picture of his parents, his dad was a fox and his mother was a white tiger. In the picture Wolf's little brother was in it, he was a white tiger and managed to escape before his parents were killed but Wolf witnessed the killing, he could still hear the screams in his head as his parents were murdered in cold blood. Wolf remembered there killer's face but he couldn't go after him until he had enough kills.

In the Organization of Assassins everytime an assassin got a kill they were given a tattoo of a  sacred animal. Wolf had 5 kills to his name, he had a cobra, lion, phoenix, horse, and dragon.  Each animal tattoo gave him a ranking as well, he was a skilled assassin and he taught new assassins in sword handling and tactics. He was very skilled in sneaking and the silent kill. He saw the light change and he jumped to the next building following the car. The courthouse was only 2 blocks away and he had the opportunity to get his sixth kill there soon.

Wolf got to the courthouse and he jumped from the building and he ran to the back door in the alleyway behind the courthouse. He pulled on the back door but it was locked, he pulled out his flexible optic fiber and got it under the door and looked into it, there was a guard on the other side off the door.

Okay, I could pick the lock and shove the door open hitting the guard and knocking him out Wolf thought to himself as he pulled his optic fiber out from under the door and got out his lock picking kit and he started on the lock. After a few minutes of picking the lock he heard a click, meaning the door was unlocked. He twisted the knob and he gave the door a sharp push, hitting the guard in the back and knocking him out. Wolf slipped through the door and dragged the guards body to a closet and bound and gagged him. Wolf was instructed not to kill any innocents in this assassination so this would be a pretty hard assassination. He crepted through the halls of the courthouse until he cam upon his target, he was in the courtroom getting his paperwork sorted out. Wolf waited for the perfect moment to attack his target. The courtroom was starting to fill up and that is what Wolf wanted, he wanted to show the people in the courtroom a lessomn, if you are corrupt this'll be what will be what will happen.

The DA was busy with his paperwork and talking to his client so he didn't see the assassin looking at him. He looked around at the people behind him and he went back to his paperwork as the trial was beginning.

Wolf saw his opportunity and he sprinted towards the DA and grabbed him and pulled out his hidden blade and stabbed him in the neck. Everyone was watching as the assassin killed the DA.

"This'll happen to you if you work for the wrong people!" Wolf yelled to everyone throwing the DA's dead body onto the floor and holding up his bloody blade.

The guards ran to him and he sheathed his blade and got into his fighting stance. One guard rushed him and Wolf jumped to the side and he grabbed him and threw him into the wall. Soon Wolf took care of every guard and he ran to a window and jumped through it, glass shattered and ripped through his robes and he felt the glass cutting his skin under his fur but that didn't stop him from escaping. He soon heard sirens getting louder as they got closer to the courthouse, he climbed up a ladder as some of the police officer came into the alley.

"Stop him!" one of the police officers yelled.

The officers started to shoot at Wolf, bullets whizzed by Wolf barely missing him. A bullet grazed his tail as he got onto the roof and he started to sprint to the other buildings making his escape. He was soon 3 blocks away from the courthouse and the cops had lost him. He contacted the HQ.

"The target has been eliminated." Wolf said.

"Excellent, report back to base." his boss said.s

Wolf headed off to the base and disappeared into the night like a ghost, until his next assassination.
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Re: The bringer of peace
« Reply #8 on: December 21, 2008, 02:56:27 PM »
very nice wolfy i can't wait for more that was very interesting to read way to go

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Re: The bringer of peace
« Reply #9 on: December 24, 2008, 07:41:15 PM »
(Thanks Uschi)

Wolfgang walked through the halls of the Organization of Assassins building to his first class he would be teaching. swordhandling. Younger, lower ranked assassins stepped out of the way of the higher ranked assassin walked by. Wolfgang walked into the classroom where the assassin students looked over at their instructor for the day. Wolfgang stood in front of the classroom and looked over his class, his face hidden under his hood.

"Hello class, I'm your instructor for the day, and today's lesson will be on swordhandling." Wolfgang said as he pulled out his longsword.

The student shot up in their seat when they heard that they would be learning how to use a sword. Wolfgang assisstant walked in with a rack of swords and Wolfgang told the class to partner up and to get a 2 swords for each group of 2. Wolfgang then led his class outside to the training area and let the students practice their techniques while he watched over them.

Wolfgang saw one of his students, Sergei get knocked down by one of the other students while trying to spar with his partner.

"Sergei, you'll never become an assassin, you're to stupid to learn how to use a sword." said the student who knocked Sergei over.

Wolfgang walked over to the group and he looked at Dimitri in disgust.

"Dimitri, if you think you're so good with a sword you'll spar with me." Wolfgang said pulling out his longsword.

In the Organization of Assassins if the master challenged his student to a sword fight you had to accept or be disgraced.

Dimitri with his cocky attitude accepted the challenge and pulled out his sword and got into fighting stance. Wolfgang got into his fighting stance and got ready for Dimitri. Dimitri rushed Wolfgang and he swung at him, Wolfgang ducked and swept Dimitri's feet with the back side of his sword. Dimitri hit the ground and he looked up at his instructor who was pointing his sword in Dimitri's face while holding him down with his booted foot.

"Dimitri, you're a disgrace." Wolfgang said picking up Dimitri by the scuff of the neck and dragging into the classroom and putting him in a chair. Dimitri looked at his instructor.

"Dimitri, I have never been more ashamed of you." Wolfgang said as the leader of the assassins came into the classroom. Wolfgang bowed his head honorabily and stepped out of the way of the head assassin.

The only time the leader of the assassins came in is when an assassin was oing to be expelled from the Organization of Assassins, or be disiplined. The leader took Dimitri and led him out of the classroom and his chambers, and was whipped

Wolfgang never liked having his students disiplined bacause he was saw potential in his students. He went back outside to the training grounds and he spared with Sergei and his partner, telling them how to counter an attack and the corretct fighting stance. He ws then called for an assassination mission and he told his assissant to take over until he got back and he soon disappeared from the building into the light of the day.
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Re: The bringer of peace
« Reply #10 on: December 24, 2008, 07:52:09 PM »
nice job wolfy i can't wait for more

 

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