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Re: Mischief Knights [PG-13]
« Reply #15 on: January 29, 2009, 08:16:59 AM »
:BUMP: No new updates yet. Episode 2 scene 5 maybe up sometime today or tommorrow depending on rather or not it snows again.
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Re: Mischief Knights [PG-13]
« Reply #16 on: January 30, 2009, 02:38:12 AM »
Alright. I'm thoroughly enjoying seeing the story develop.

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Re: Mischief Knights [PG-13]
« Reply #17 on: February 03, 2009, 08:18:01 PM »
I really hate it when my parents take action (I may actually hate them a little). Mischief Knights will not be updated in till either I have the time to do write for it or in till march or july 2009 depending on how fast I can get a job, back into college, car, and car insurance. I'm taking down my web comic sega power since I WILL NOT be able to draw anything for it ever. My deviantart page will remain up but there may not be any art coming in for a while. (It’ll mostly be random crud like a car or a flower or what ever I'm forced to draw in my future art class at Devry. -_- Also it seems my free host service may be the reason why my forum keeps disableing it's self. So yeah I'm beyond furious right... I don't think I've ever been this mad before it's almost shocking to me.
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Re: Mischief Knights [PG-13]
« Reply #18 on: February 04, 2009, 12:19:44 AM »
Aw... I know how life can get in the way. I do look forward to seeing more of the story.

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Re: Mischief Knights [PG-13]
« Reply #19 on: February 11, 2009, 12:56:05 AM »
To make up for delays I extended scene 5. scene 6 will be up tomorrow. Also give me a couple minutes. I'll have a pic of queeny's wasp form in B/W up in a few minutes. The Color version will be up within an hour.

Scene 5

Queeny’s body became incased in a green orb of light. When the light dimmed Queeny’s body had changed shape. “Wow so what do you call this form?” Asked Sarina as she checked out Queeny’s new body. “It’s called Model Wasp and with this form I can now move at speeds beyond mach 2! My plan will require me to open every single door in this void at mach speed. Once I’ve done that, I’ll know if my theory is correct or not. Explained Queeny, informing Sarina of her plan to solve Witty’s puzzle. “Model Wasp… *cough**cough*megamanzxripoff*cough**cough*! Admit it! Opening all the doors in this void IS your plan isn’t it miss smarty pants!” Said Sarina mocking Queeny’s plan. “What ever! Now stand back furball!” Said Queeny as she kneeled down preparing herself to take off. She flapped her wings down and with a strong gust of wind; Queeny zipped off down the seemingly endless hallway. Queeny checked each door at the speed of sound. Everything from giant walking automated 12 gauged shot guns, giant massive spiders, Bob Doles, Chuck Norris, the A team, Micheal Jackson, Bruce lee, and Keeanu Reeves, to giant teddy bears, rabid clowns, Sword dancing bananas, Godwin from yugioh 5Ds, big bird, Dora the explorer, batman, Po from the teletubeies, and fighter from the sprite web comic “8 bit theater” wielding 2 sword chucks. Queeny avoided all of the traps as she raced through the hallway at over 500 MPH. Unfortunately for Sarina all of the traps went after her.

One hour later after Sarina fought off all the traps, Queeny finally came back after checking every door only to find Sarina exhausted from fighting off all of Witty’s traps. “I guess me getting attacked was part of the PLAN huh!” Said Sarina aggravated and tired. “No. You getting attacked by Witty’s traps, was revenge for ALL the pranks you’ve done to me from last year to today. Maybe you’ll think twice before pranking me from now on huh furball! Said Queeny smiling. “Note to self. Prank Queeny when this is all over” Sarina thought to herself as she began to heal herself glaring at Queeny with an angry face. “What’s wrong furball? You should have known I was going to get payback eventually so why the angry face?” Said Queeny still smiling as she walked past Sarina and towards the front entrance door. “I WAS ATTACKED BY A TELETUBY!!! THE MENTAL SCARS WILL NEVER GO AWAY!!!” Yelled Sarina angry. “Hmm maybe I did go a little too far leaving you to fight them off all by your self. But it’s mostly Witty’s fault since he created this place and placed all those traps himself. Now then since none of the 5,000 doors-” Before Queeny could finish talking Sarina interrupts her saying, “I thought Witty poo said there were over 10,000 doors?” “Yeah he lied there are only 5,000. I counted them all as I opened them. Now let me finish.” Explained Queeny. “~Fine~ just make it short please. Cause I really hate it when people explain stuff.” Said Sarina as she brushed herself off.

“I’ll try to keep it as simple as possible but you BETTER listen okay? *Sarina nods her head* Now then. It came to me when he stated that there were 10,000 doors. Remembering all his pranks, I realized that none of the doors in this hallway were the way out. But I had to fully see if I was correct which leads to why I had to use Model Wasp-” Sarina interrupts Queeny again yelling “MEGAMAN ZX RI-” but Queeny interrupts her yelling “SHUT UP!! Now then after using Wasp Form-” Sarina once again interrupts Queeny saying “~much~ better!” while sitting on a stool, smiling. “Furball!!” Yelled Queeny aggravated. “Sorry!” Said Sarina, pretending to zip her lips shut, still sitting on the stool. “Now then. Thanks to Wasp Form I was able to check every door in this so called endless hallway. Surely enough I was correct. All the doors were traps. But! Knowing Witty Phantom and his lust for mental torture. He must have placed a way to the next level in order to mentally torture us even more.” Explained Queeny. “But where is it?” Asked Sarina. “It’s simple furball. What’s the last door we would ever think of checking?” Asked Queeny as smiled at Sarina for actually listening. Sarina thought a bit before answering Queeny’s question. “The front door? But that’s just the entrance plus the way to the out side is closed off with an aura. Even I can’t break it. Nor can I faze through it.” Said Sarina curious as to where Queeny is going with her theory.

“Exactly which is why we would never think of checking it.” Said Queeny as she turned towards the door. She turned the doorknob and opened the door to reveal the way they came in. Still blocked off by an aura. “When you turn the doorknob to the right and open it. You’ll see the entrance.” Explained Queeny as she closed the door. “But If you turn the doorknob to the left and open it” Explained Queeny as she turned the doorknob to the left and opened the door to reveal a staircase heading up to the next floor. Sarina fell off her stool in shock before standing up and shouting. “ YOU MEAN TO TELL ME THAT’S ALL WE HAD TO DO TO GET OUT OF HERE!!!” Sarina darted up the stairs screaming “Here I come witty ~poo~!” Queeny sighed as she turned back to her normal form and followed Sarina up the stairs to the second floor, and to Witty’s next big puzzle.
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Re: Mischief Knights [PG-13]
« Reply #20 on: February 20, 2009, 09:49:16 AM »
The fight scene between Dantz and witty is coming along nicely. Scene 6 of episode 2 is almost done. about 60% so far. Also as promised here is the concept sheet for Queeny's wasp form. Enjoy it and thank you for continueing to read Mischief Knights!:Happy:

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Re: Mischief Knights [PG-13]
« Reply #21 on: February 22, 2009, 12:22:52 AM »
Darn you DeviantArt. Can't see it because DA's blocked on my end.

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Re: Mischief Knights [PG-13]
« Reply #23 on: February 22, 2009, 09:06:09 PM »
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Re: Mischief Knights [PG-13]
« Reply #24 on: February 23, 2009, 06:34:05 AM »
:Update:
Here's scene 6 of episode 2. Scene 7 should be up soon. So far Episode 2 is about 8 pages long and it's still not finished! O_o; There's just so much going on at once! Anyway this is the best scene I've ever wrote for Mischief Knights so far (or atleast a prosonal favorite). I really think you guys will enjoy it!



Scene 6

Sarina & Queeny arrive at the second floor of Witty’s fun house. The large room in front of them was completely white. The floor looked like a huge chessboard with white and black squares. As they walked into the strange room, Witty Phantom’s voice suddenly filled the air. “This certainly has been enjoyable. But alas I’ve grown a bit bored of Sarina. So I devised a very interesting game just for you Queeny.” Said Witty Phantom as he appeared at the other end of the room. Queeny tries to move only to find out that her and Sarina’s feet have been shackled to the floor. As Queeny tries to break free, a large monitor with a scoreboard descends from the ceiling. A black and white checker designed game show style desk complete with a mini score counter on top of the desk, and a larger score counter on the front of the desk appeared in front of Queeny, Sarina, and Witty Phantom. The words “Welcome to Witty Phantom’s Super Trivia Challenge!” appeared on the score counters and scoreboard as Witty Phantom gave out a hideous semi evil chuckle. “Let the game begin! I can’t wait to see just how smart you REALLY are Queeny!” Said Witty Phantom as he began to laugh hysterically.

Mean while, the real Witty Phantom is standing on a balcony on top of the clock tower in the center of Dawn Park located at the center of Midnight Town, viewing everything that’s happening to Sarina & Queeny through a small floating window in front of him. As he chuckles to himself while watching Sarina & Queeny struggling inside his fun house, a dimensional hole appears behind him. “Well it looks like someone actually found me.” Said Witty Phantom as Dantz walked through the hole. “I knew you had to be hiding somewhere high up to monitor your game. Since the clock tower is tallest building in Midnight Town, finding you was easy.” Said Dantz as he pulled out two large daggers out from behind his back. Both of the daggers had a 13-inch blade with magical runes written on them. Witty holds his wand up. A large rabid red gummy bear appears behind Dantz and tries to smash him with both of its arms, but Dantz jumps to the side avoiding the attack. Witty flys in to the air and points his wand at Dantz, creating a large Venus fly trap behind him, but Dantz opens up a Dimensional hole leaps through it avoiding the fly trap’s attack. A dimensional hole appears above Witty as Dantz dives from it with his daggers heading straight for Witty. Witty moves to the side and shoots five fire balls at Dantz from his wand, but Dantz destroys each fire ball (one at a time) with multiple swings from his daggers as he plummeted into the trees below. He performs a front flip before landing on to the ground only to be surrounded by strange looking living trees. “Hang on just a little while longer Sarina…” Dantz thought to himself as he prepares himself to take on the trees.

Mean while inside Witty Phantom’s Fun House.

Queeny’s Score: 0

Witty Phantom’s Score: 140


“Question number 15. How do Phantom Cats turn invisible?” Asked the large computer screen as Queeny’s desk lit up. Queeny began to think and go over her answer to herself. “You know Queeny, I could tell you-“ before Sarina could finish whispering to Queeny, Witty Phantom interrupts her stating. “Remember if you help Queeny, she’ll lose the game. You don’t want to be stuck her forever do you?” “Fine but there’s no way she’s going to know the answer...” Said Sarina as she laid her head on her desk. “I’ve got it! The answer is, Phantom Cats can turn invisible by bending the particles of light around their bodies!” Stated Queeny with confidence in her answer. The word “Correct” flashed on the little scoreboard on top of Queeny’s desk before displaying the number “10”. “Oh it seems you finally got one right. My, my, you don’t seem very smart at all do you Queeny?” Said Witty Phantom. “These Questions are from 5th grade Alterran text books. Almost everyone should know the answers to these questions.” He continued chuckling as the large monitor displayed the next question. “Question number 16. In what city are the 6 sages based in?” Asked the monitor as Witty Phantom’s desks lit up. “The answer is Mel Dine.” Said Witty. The word “Correct” flashed on the little scoreboard on top of Witty’s desk before displaying the number “150”.

Queeny’s Score: 10

Witty Phantom’s Score: 150


“Question number 17. What kind of sage is Zelbin?” Asked the large monitor as Queeny’s desk lit up. Queeny paused a bit before answering. “The Fire Sage?” Said Queeny uncertain about her answer. The word “Incorrect” flashed on the little scoreboard on top of Queeny’s desk before dropping her score back done to “0”. Witty began to laugh at Queeny’s failure and frustration. “ Zelbin isn’t even a sage! At this rate you’ll be stuck here forever!” Said Witty as he held himself why laughing hysterically. “Alright we get it!” Yelled Queeny aggravated and embarrassed. Queeny began to think to her self “It seems almost every question is going to be Alterra oriented. Sure I may be able to answer some of his questions correctly, but at this rate we’ll never escape this place.” She glanced over at Sarina who seemed to be bored to death of this game. She began to remember the rules for Witty Phantom’s trivia game.

1. To win the game, Queeny must answer 10 questions in a row correctly.

2. If Queeny gets a question wrong her score will drop to 0 and she will have to try again.

3. If Queeny asks Sarina for help she will lose the game.

4. If Queeny loses the game then she and Sarina will be stuck in this room forever.

5. If Witty Phantom gets a question wrong, Queeny will win the game.

6. If Sarina answers ANY of the questions before Queeny does (Regardless of rather or not the answer is correct), then Queeny will lose the game!


“That basterd knows that furball is impatient. Especially after her little out burst earlier in the hallway trap! It’ll only be a matter of time before furball blows it for us!” Queeny thought to her self as the large monitor displayed the next question. “Question number 18. What is the name of the forbidden Light spell?” Asked the large monitor as Witty Phantom’s desk lit up. “Ah it seems it’s my turn. The answer is Ragnarok” Said Witty. The word “Correct” flashed on the little scoreboard on top of his desk before displaying the number “160”.

Queeny’s Score: 0

Witty Phantom’s Score: 160


“If only we could just get some questions that I know the answers to.” Queeny disparately thought to her self while looking down at her scoreboard clinching her fists. At that moment the large monitor displayed the next question. “ What!” Yelled Witty has he stared at the board in complete shock. Sarina looks at the monitor as if she’s never seen that question before. Queeny looks up at the monitor. Although she was confused at what just happened, tears of joy fell from her eyes as she began to smile.

While Witty Phantom and Queeny where answering questions, Dantz is cutting his way through the crowd of living trees near the clock tower at the center of Dawn Park located in the center of Midnight Town. Two branches came from the right side tearing Dantz’s scarf revealing his frail like beautiful face while cutting his right cheek. Two more came from behind him but Dantz back flips onto the branch before turning around and darting up the branch and slicing the living tree’s face off. As the tree turns back to normal, 10 more branches from all sides began to close in on Dantz. “It seems I have no choice. Please forgive me citizens of Midnight Town.” Said Dantz as he struck the ground with his right fist (still holding his two daggers in each hand) creating a red spell circle with magical runes surrounding the outer ring of the circle. “Flash Flare!” Yelled Dantz as a flurry of flames poured out from the spell circle and engulfed all the trees in a sea of flames, burning them all to the ground. Witty (still floating in the air) looked down at Dantz who was standing up from the ground after casting Flash Flare.

Witty held out his wand to cast a spell but Dantz quickly opens up a dimensional hole in front him and leaps through it. As a dimensional hole opens up behind Witty, Dantz leaps out of it and kicks Witty out of the sky into the sea of flames below. But as he's falling, Witty turns towards the flames, points his wand towards the flames, creates a blue spell circle, and casts "Flash Flood!" which causes a massive amount of water to spew out of the spell circle, putting out all of the flames, which causes a large thick mist to surround the park. Witty lands on the ground completely surround by the mist as Dantz creates a dimensional hole below his self and falls through it. At that moment, the sound of two metallic objects clashing together can be heard through out the mist.
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Re: Mischief Knights [PG-13]
« Reply #25 on: March 04, 2009, 07:28:36 AM »
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I fixed all of the typos and changed some of the dialogue for Scene 6 of Episode 2. It sounds much better now. Scene 7 will be up by either Friday or Sunday depending on how things go for me signing up for Online classes at DeVry University. And If nothing unexpected happens.
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Re: Mischief Knights [PG-13]
« Reply #26 on: March 06, 2009, 01:56:53 AM »
Been kinda slow keeping up with this... very busy month.

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Re: Mischief Knights [PG-13]
« Reply #27 on: March 25, 2009, 07:20:55 AM »
Friend, Romans, Country men behold! The rest of Mischief Knights Episode 2, as well as Scene 1 of Mischief Knights Episode 3! *insert holy music* Enjoy P.S Episode 2 ended up being 11 pages long. -_-;


Scene 7

[Inside Witty Phantom’s fun house. Witty is starring in shock at the large monitor; surprised to see a question he does not know. Queeny stares up at the large monitor with newly gained confidence that she and Sarina can escape from Witty’s fun house.]

“Question number 19. At what age did Queeny learn how to fly?” Asked the large computer screen as Queeny’s desk lit up. “But that has nothing to do with Alterra!” Yelled Witty Phantom frustrated. “Something must be happening to the real me. It’s the only other explanation for this sudden turn of event.” He thought to himself as Queeny began to answer the question. “The answer is 4.” Replied Queeny as she turned towards Witty Phantom with a smile on her face after having figured out the flaw in his game. The word “Correct” flashed on the little scoreboard on top of her desk before displaying the number “10”. “I figured out your little trick. As it turns out, you’re nothing but a fraud Witty Phantom. This place is nothing but a product of our imaginations. An Illusion designed to make our thoughts come true. All you were doing up till now was keeping our thoughts under your control. That’s why we couldn’t escape this place before, because you made us believe that we couldn’t escape when in reality we could’ve escaped at anytime.” Explained Queeny As she began to concentrate on Witty Phantom. The chains around her and Sarina’s ankles disappeared and reappeared around Witty Phantom’s ankles, shackling his feet to the floor. “NO!” Yelled Witty Phantom as he tried to get free.

“Now it’s time for you to suffer from your own sick game Witty!” Exclaimed Queeny, as she pointed towards the large monitor. “Question number 20. What is Dantz’s secret identity?” asked the monitor as Witty’s desk let up. Witty Phantom was silent. Then suddenly, he began to laugh hysterically. Queeny and Sarina were creeped out by Witty’s unusual behavior. “Well it seems you truly are a genius Queeny. The answer is Merlin.” Said Witty Phantom as continued to laugh hysterically. The word “Incorrect” flashed on the little scoreboard on top of his desk before dropping his score down to “0”. “You remember the rules to your game Witty. If you get 1 question wrong, I win.” Explained Queeny with an egotistic smirk on her face. “It seems I lost… for now.” Said Witty as he began laugh hysterically again. The large monitor fell from the ceiling and shattered into pieces catching Sarina and Queeny attention. A large black hole suddenly appeared in the center of the room sucking in everything in the room. Sarina and Queeny garbed hold of their desks and held onto them with all their might. As they held on, Witty phantom began to break apart. “~ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha~  Laughed witty phantom as Sarina and Queeny where sucked into the black hole along with the rest of the entire room.

After seeing a bright flash of light, Queeny and Sarina find them selves in what looks like a bathroom. “Where are we? Asked Sarina as she started to look around. Queeny looks to her right and spots a group of urinals. “Argh! We’re in the men’s room!” Exclaimed Queeny grossed out by the unsanitary urinals. “Wow this place is a lot cleaner then most of the men’s bathrooms I’ve been in.” Said Sarina as she looked at the dirty sinks. “I’m not even going to ask. Anyway lets get out of here before some one shows up. We still don’t know what happened to Witty.” Said Queeny as she and Sarina ran towards the exit. The girls found them selves inside The Magic Fountain. The very same bar that Witty Phantom’s fun house was placed in front of. Queeny and Sarina bolted out of the bar only to find that Witty phantom’s funhouse was gone. “It’s over?” said Queeny as she ran towards the spot where the funhouse was. “~Ahh~ Witty poo’s gone. No fare Queeny! You chased him away!” yelled Sarina sad that Witty Phantom is nowhere in sight. “Shut up furball!” Yelled Queeny. “This can’t be over. Why else would he laugh after losing his challenge? There must be another trap set up somewhere. Or maybe he’s plotting his next move.” She thought to her self as she check the spot where the entrance to witty’s funhouse was. “~Dantzy poo~!” shouted Sarina as a police car with Dantz sitting in the passenger seat pulled up beside the bar.

Queeny looked over towards the car only to find Witty Phantom sitting in the backseat handcuffed. “What’s going on Dantz!” Yelled Queeny as she ran up to the passenger side of the car. “How the hell did you catch him!” She demanded as Dantz rolled down the window. “I found the real Witty Phantom hiding on top of the clock tower in Dawn Park. He was controlling all of the pranks, trap, and illusions through a dimensional window. It’s strange while I was fighting him, he stop moving. He seemed depressed about something. He has not spoken a word since I turned him in.” Explained Dantz as Sarina happily tapped on the back window in an attempt to get Witty’s attention. “He’s depressed because we beat him at his own game!” Said Queeny as she looked at witty with a ****y smirk on her face. Sarina studied the back of Witty phantom’s head and noticed something. She giggled before pulling out a camera and taking a picture of him. “I see well since it was you two who finished him off, why don’t you girls take the credit for this one.” Suggested Dantz handing a check to Queeny. “100,000 Alt? That’s all we get after all the hell he put us through.” Said Queeny slightly depressed by the small amount of money. (Note: 100,000 Alt = 1,000 dollars in our currency)

 â€œMy apologies girls but that’s all the Mayor can afford to pay you since most of our money went towards paying the Alchemists, Geomancers, and Machinists to repair the town and Dawn Park.” Explained the Police officer. “My dearest apologies girls. You see during my battle with Witty Phantom. I was forced to burn down all of the trees in Dawn Park.” Explained Witty Phantom. “~Awesome~!” Shouted Sarina Impressed by what Dantz did. Queeny sighed after hearing what happened. “I guess it couldn’t be helped.” Said Queeny as place the check inside a hidden pocket in the inside of her coat. “Come on Furball lets head home.” Said Queeny as she gently pulled Sarina away from the car. “Bye Witty Poo!” Said Sarina waving at the police car as Dantz rolled up the window and the car pulled away from the corner. The Police Car drove off heading down Sin ST before making right turn onto Order AVE as Queeny and Sarina headed back to Lumina Guild. When they arrived, the girls spotted Jack sitting on the front desk with a piece of paper in his mouth.


Scene 8

“What’s this? It better not be a ticket for peeping!” Said Queeny as she snatched the paper out of Jack’s mouth. Jack gasped before responding to Queeny’s harsh assumption. “Queeny I’m hurt, do you really think a good honest pumpkin such as my self would do such a distasteful thing.” He said faking a noble accent. “Jack you’re a terrible liar.” Said Sarina smiling at him. Queeny looked at the paper Jack had in is mouth only to discover it has a check for 10,000 Alt signed by the old lady that gave them the request. She gave a big sigh before walking behind the front desk with a depressed look on her face. “ 10,000 Alt, that’s even less then the police officer gave us.” She said, sitting down onto the chair behind the front desk. (Note: 10,000 Alt = 100 dollars in our currency)

“Why are you depressed? You’re the rich CEO of Aroma Corp’s. Sleeping island branch.” Said Sarina with a confused look on her face. “~Unless~ …you got fired!” She shouts laughing as Queeny jumped up from her chair. “Furball I didn’t get fired. I’m too intelligent to be laid off so easily.” Said Queeny. “Besides, I have my own reasons for putting up with you.” She continued as she sat down onto the chair. “Oh really! If you’re so smart, how come you didn’t notice that Witty Phantom was never caught! “ Said Sarina. “ What are you talking about Furball? Dantz caught him remember.” Asked Queeny feeling that her earlier hunch may have been correct after all.

“Nope! the Witty that was in the backseat of that police car. It was a life size doll of himself, used as a stand in for the real deal.” Explained Sarina as Queeny stood up from her chair “See I use them all the time!” She continued as she pulled out a life size doll of herself along with the photo of Witty’s head from her cloak and showed them both to Queeny. Queeny laughed a little before sitting down. “If you’re telling the truth. Then that means Witty was never here to begin with. From the moment we left the house, we and everyone else was under his illusion. Mistaking that doll for the real deal. He beat us after all, or maybe we did beat him.” Said Queeny as she stood up from the chair and walked back into the room happy to have fought a brilliant opponent.

Mean while the real Witty Phantom was standing on top of a hill watching Midnight Town from a distance. “It seems for the first time in a long time. I’ve been bested by a worthy opponent.” Said Dantz as he gazed at the sky. “But I only wish it would have been your Daughter. Silvia Phantom, the last person to have ever bested me in a game of wits. Oh well it seems I have a new worthy opponent to match wits with. Sayonara Queeny. Till the day when we can once again match wits with one another.” He continued as he walked off into the sunset laughing.


[So in the end Witty Phantom was victorious. Or was it the other way around? ;) But how did Witty know that Sarina is Silvia’s Daughter? And will we every see him again? You may find some of this out in the next episode. Till then stay loyal my dear fans and keep reading Mischief Knights.]


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And now *Drum roll* Mischief Knights Episode 3, Enjoy!


Mischief Knights Episode 3  “A night of horror, Sarina and Queeny V.S The Creature!”

Staring:
Sarina Phantom
Queeny Aroma
Mrs. Frankenstein
Dr. Frankenstein
The Creature
Dr. Jackle
Count Dracula
Dantz



Episode Preview:
A young woman worried about her husband “Dr. Frankenstein” asks Sarina and Queeny If they could spy on him to see what he’s been doing in his Lab. But what they find out is that the doc has been trying to create a powerful monster. Can the girls stop this mad man before they learn what the creature likes to eat the hard way?


Scene 1

[The time is 7:50 pm at Lumina Guild. Queeny is brewing some coffee in the kitchen. After mixing in 14 packs of sugar, and ½ cup of honey, her cell phone rings. Afraid that Sarina will ease drop on her, Queeny heads to her room before answering the call. The aroma from the coffee floats through the house and into Sarina’s room. Sarina is enjoying a RPG video game on her PS3 when she smells the coffee. She turns off the game and walks out the room curious as to where the sweet aroma is coming from. She enters the kitchen to find jack sitting on the counter next to the coffee machine.]

~Mean while inside Queeny’s room~

“Hello… Queeny?” Asked Volin talking to her through the phone. “Hello Volin... ~So~ do you mind telling me how you got this number?” Asked Queeny angry at the thought that Zeck and Bech may have blown her cover. “Zeck gave it to me. I am sorry if I caused you any trouble, but you see I asked them for your number because there are a few things I wish to warn you about.” Said Volin, apologizing for any discomfort he may have caused her. “It’s Furball related isn’t it.” Said Queeny with an annoyed expression on her face. “Yes. There are two things about Sarina that as of lately, have been bothering me. Remember the martial arts tournament held on sleeping island last year?” Asked Volin. “How could I ever forget it? It’s the soul reason why I despise Furball with a passion.” Said Queeny with a bitter tone of voice. “During her 4 month training session before the tournament began, Sarina accidentally learned a forbidden spell. I warned her not to ever cast it or else, and to my surprise she listened and didn’t use it. But after kicking her out, I began to worry that she may cast or may have already cast it despite my warnings. Has she ever cast any highly destructive spells lately?” Ask Volin concerned about everyone else’s safety. “I really don’t know what would be considered over powering to a magician of your caliber. Could you at least describe how deadly this spell is suppose to be?” Asked Queeny, getting a little uncomfortable.

“Its destructive power greatly surpasses that of a nuclear bomb.” Said Volin. “So Furball is a walking nuke… Why does that not surprise me.” Said Queeny. “No she hasn’t used anything that deadly. And the other thing is?” She asked, hoping to prepare for the worst before it happens. “Sarina has a sever case of ADHD. You see whenever Sarina consumes a pacific amount of caffeine; she becomes very hyper active and wild.” Said Volin “Wow Furball has ADHD... That’s defiantly something I don’t already know.” Said Queeny with a sarcastic tone. “I am deeply sorry, but there’s more to it then that. You see if Sarina consumes a large amount of caffeine, she can become very dangerous to everyone and everything around or near her. For example, about 3 years ago, Sarina accidentally poured in too much sugar into her cereal when watching a cartoon show. Not too surprisingly, she ate the cereal anyway. From what I’ve heard from my servants, she dressed up as one of the characters from the show and treated the entire mansion as one big pinball machine. Luckily I was able to get home in time to stop her. So please for everyone’s sake, make sure she doesn’t come in contact with anything that contains a large amount of caffeine.” Said Volin, warning Queeny about Sarina’s problem. “OH GOD!” Yelled Queeny as she just remembered that she lefts her coffee loaded with caffeine sitting on the counter unguarded.

~Mean while inside the kitchen~

“So what is this stuff anyway?” Asked Sarina as she poured some of the coffee into a mug. “You don’t know what coffee is?” Asked Jack. Surprised about Sarina strange question. “No, but it smells great!” Said Sarina as she sniffed her mug. “Coffee is this black thin liquid that helps people stay awake or wake up. Your mom use to drink it all the time.” Explained Jack as Sarina began the sip the Coffee. “FURBALL STOP! DON’T DRINK THAT!” Screamed Queeny as she bolted into the kitchen, but she was too late. Sarina had already drunken half of her mug. “****! Wait maybe it won’t effect furball.” Queeny thought to her self as she watched Sarina carefully. At that Sarina gave out a short but load “my” sound as her ears perked up. “Queeny-I-Don’t-Know-What-Just-Happened-But-I-Feel-Awesome!!!” Screamed Sarina, speaking so fast her words began to slur together while jumping up and down. At that moment the bell at the front desk ranged. “Perfect, just perfect!” sighed Queeny frustrated that they got a request at such a bad time.

To be continued...



Hey do you guys remember what happened in the preveius episodes when ever Sarina ate something sweet?

Spoilers!!!! Highlight to read!!

In episode 0 Scene 1, Sarina ate a peice of cake. The result? In scene 6 of that very Episode she kicked a waitar down the stairs for now reason! Ouch!

and

In Episode 2 Scene 1, Sarina ate a some cereal. The result? She spazes out over her idol and becomes completely unable to help Queeny at all through out the episode.


I think you guys now have an Idea of how this is going to turn out. :wink: Scene 2 of episode 3 will be up next week.
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« Reply #28 on: March 25, 2009, 08:17:06 AM »
Sarina being a walking nuke... oh great. Might as well duck-and-cover while she's around.

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« Reply #29 on: May 04, 2009, 09:42:53 AM »
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Wow I'm REALLY behind schedule now. The rest of Episode 3 and may be all of episode 4 will be up some time this week Reguardless of anything important that I may need to do this week.
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