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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #30 on: March 18, 2009, 01:52:59 PM »
Nyaa =3
Finally I got the time and inspiration to finish this chapter. Thanks for the comments guyz :3
Now, let's see...


Chapter Nine: A New Battle Starts



Keith ran through the forest. He knew that forest like no one. Some minutes later he heard another explosion, louder this time.
I’m getting close. he thought, getting his black sword. He ran for a bit longer, then reached an open space and looked around. He saw a young white and blue wolf fighting against three of the king’s soldiers. The wolf looked at Keith, defending himself from the soldier’s attacks.
"H-help me!" he shouted.
Keith ran to one of the soldiers as a fireball appeared in his paw. The soldier turned to him, but before he could do something, Keith hit him in the stomach with the ball.
"Guh…!" the soldier did, falling.
"Let him go…" Keith ordered, turning to the other two soldiers.
The soldiers turned to Keith.
"You also have powers?" one of them asked "Maybe we should take you to the king too." he continued, grinning.
"You won’t see that happening." Keith continued "Now let him go."
The white wolf looked at Keith, panting slightly.
"Well, you can choose…" the soldier started "You come peacefully and both live… or you both get injured." he explained.
"Or you could let me and that wolf go and pretend nothing happened. That way everyone’s happy." Keith tried.
"Um… no… I don’t think that will happen." he finally said "You’ll both come with us." he continued, pointing his sword at Keith.
Keith sighed and quickly moved his paw from the right side to the left. The soldiers were thrown away by a strong wind. Keith ran towards the wolf and grabbed his arm, not stopping. The wolf was almost dragged behind him.
"Come on. I don’t want to kill them unless it’s necessary" he said "We have to hurry. We’ll lose them in the forest." he continued.
"O-ok." the young wolf replied, running by Keith’s side.
The soldiers slowly got up.
"Heh… we’ll get you…", one of them said, looking at something in his paw.

A while later they stopped. Keith sat, leaning against a tree, panting. The wolf sat too, looking at Keith.
"Thank… you…" he said, panting.
"It’s ok…" Keith replied "Oh, by the way, I’m Keith."
"I’m Comet. Nice to meet you, Keith."
"Nice to meet you too, Comet." Keith said, getting up "Follow me; they don’t know where I live." He continued, and waited for Comet. Comet also got up and followed Keith.
"So… you also use magic?" he asked as they walked.
"Yes, I do." Keith replied "Along with two foxes I love and take care of like they were my children."
A small smile spread across Comet’s face.
"I look forward to meet them." He stated in a soft voice.
Some minutes later they could see Keith’s house.
Comet looked at the house, smiling.
"Wow, it’s really nice." He complimented.
Keith smiled.
"Thanks." He replied.
"Wolf!", Foxx called from inside the house "Keith’s back!"
Wolf came running from their room.
"What? Come on!" he said, grabbing Foxx’s arm and running outside.
Foxx ran by Wolf’s side. Comet looked at them and smiled. Wolf stopped in front of them, with Foxx panting.
"Oh, they’re a couple." Comet said, clearly thinking that Foxx was a girl.
They didn’t notice some shadows nearby.
"Jeeze, Wolf, I can run by -- what did you say?" he suddenly asked, looking at Comet "For your information, I am not a gi…" but he couldn’t finish the sentence.
"NOW!" a voice said. About sixty soldiers jumped from between the trees, making a circle around the foxes and the wolves.
Keith looked around.
"How did you found us?" he asked, completely surprised.
A soldier from before gave some steps forward, grinning.
"That blue wolf even came in handy…", he spoke in a low voice, loud enough for everyone to hear. He showed them a small, flat stone that shined brightly in a soft blue color. Keith looked at the stone.
"That’s…!" then he looked at Comet for some seconds, "Damn! I knew it" he said some seconds later, taking what looked like a blue ladybug from Comet’s back.
"W-what’s that?" Comet asked.
"Some way the King invented to keep track on someone." Keith replied "How could I fall for this…?"
The soldier grinned.
"So… will you come peacefully? Or we have to fight?" he asked in a soft but dangerous voice.
Keith, Comet, Foxx and Wolf were in the middle of the circle. Wolf growled softly.
"They’re too much. It’ll be 15 soldiers to each one of us… this will get ugly…", he told the other three.
"We won’t go with out a fight." Foxx said, grabbing his sword. At the same time, every soldier took his own sword. Foxx gulped.
"Yeah." Wolf supported, getting his own sword. Keith did the same and Comet revealed his 36 inch long and half a foot wide silver sword. The sword had a soft blue glow around it.
"Ready?" Keith asked.
"As I’ll ever be." Foxx replied.
"Yep." Comet said.
Wolf just nodded. A little smile appeared on Keith face.
"Then let’s GO!", he yelled, and the four of them started running against the soldiers.


Hope you like it, it took an awful lot of time to get this done, I wasn't sure on how I should write this xP
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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #31 on: March 18, 2009, 07:14:11 PM »
Very interesting turn of events. ^.=.^
And I see that you're adding at least some of your friends here on the forum into the story as well, nice. :)

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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #32 on: March 18, 2009, 07:39:17 PM »
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! HEHE!!! FOXX!!

I LOVE IT!!!!!  :-[ :-[ :-[ :-[

I can't wait to see what happens

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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #33 on: March 18, 2009, 07:46:03 PM »
Very interesting turn of events. ^.=.^
And I see that you're adding at least some of your friends here on the forum into the story as well, nice. :)

I am. xP
Hopefully, I have everyone I need. I have a... 'rough sketch'... of the story =^.^=
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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #34 on: March 18, 2009, 07:52:30 PM »
That's good. It's always good to have some idea what's going to happen next when you're writing, so that you then can think things through before actually writing it down when you've got it all figured out.

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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #35 on: March 18, 2009, 08:00:21 PM »
Hehe, if you paid attention to the story, you probably noticed a really small spoiler =3
But it was on purpose =^.^=
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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #36 on: March 18, 2009, 08:49:28 PM »
Yeah, I think I noticed. :P I'll leave it to the others to find out it too, though it might have been a bit obvious. Who knows?

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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #37 on: March 23, 2009, 07:57:29 PM »
WOOHOO! Chapter Ten.
5615 words, 641 lines, 391 paragraphs on 13 word pages. Hehe, anyway, since I wasn't on during the weekend (Dang Internet -_-'), I finished this here chapter earlier then I thought, and I must say: even I am surprised with the stuff that happened.
Enough blabing, let's see...


Chapter Ten: A Trap! A Friend Is Lost!




The four furs ran towards the soldiers, and soon the sound of steel hitting steel filled the air, scaring birds away. Foxx fought against two soldiers, taking them down almost at the same time. Wolf ran through the soldiers, hitting their legs as he ran, making them fall. Comet fought with fluid movements, dodging the soldier’s attacks and counter-attacking. Keith grinned as he fought the soldiers, using some magic now and then.
Some minutes later, Foxx was surrounded by soldiers. He looked around.
"Wolf!" Foxx shouted, lifting his left paw "Rain, I summon thee!"
When he finished talking, it started to rain heavily, but only over all the nearby soldiers. Foxx, Wolf, Keith and Comet were dry.
"What do you want to do? Drown us?" one of the soldiers mocked. Foxx grinned and looked at Wolf, nodding "Careful, Comet." he warned.
Wolf looked at Foxx and smiled, lifting his left paw.
"Thunder, come forth!" he shouted, pointing at the wet ground under the soldiers, and a giant thunderbolt hit that place. Keith kept the remaining soldiers away, so they couldn’t hurt Foxx or Wolf. Comet put his paw over his eyes, because of the lighting, and watched as the soldiers screamed in pain while the electricity ran through the water on the ground and their wet bodies, making them fall unconscious. Comet looked at Foxx and Wolf as they lowered their paws, the rain subsiding.
"Wow… you guys…" he started, amazed, and looked at the soldiers "Are they…?"
Wolf shook his head.
"No, they’re just unconscious." He told Comet "We still have some left." He continued, looking at the soldiers that Keith was keeping away.
Foxx walked over to Wolf and Comet.
"Thanks for the help, Wolf." He said, smiling.
Wolf smiled back, getting his sword ready. "It’s ok." Then he ran towards Keith to help him.
Foxx looked as Wolf started fighting again and turned to Comet.
"Coming?" he asked.
"I don’t think we should leave them like this…" Comet commented, looking at the unconscious soldiers and lifting his left paw "Mother Nature, I ask for your aid." He said. Foxx watched in wonder as vines started to grow, wrapping themselves around the soldiers so they couldn’t escape. Comet looked at his work and smirked. "That should keep them in their place."
"Wow…" was the only thing Foxx could say. He shook his head slightly and looked back. "Come on, we have to help them." He said, and started to run towards the soldiers. Comet followed him.
Keith and Wolf were taking soldiers down, not killing them. Foxx and Comet ran through the soldiers, cutting their legs with their swords. They stopped and looked around. There were only some soldiers left, behind the tiger that held the blue stone tightly in his paw, his face showing no emotion.
Keith and Wolf joined Foxx and Comet. Keith looked at the tiger.
"You tried to capture me and Comet… you weren’t able too… now you try to capture my family too… what makes you think that you will succeed?" he asked.
The tiger grinned.
"The king doesn’t want you all…" he replied softly, looking at the stone in his paw "He wants the younger one." With that he looked directly into Foxx’s eyes. Foxx looked into his light blue eyes, not able to look away, feeling something weird trying to take over him.
"What?" Keith said, surprised.
You’re coming with us… Foxx heard inside his head.
"Who said that?" he asked, looking around.
The king can help you defeat the fox that is standing by your side… you know you want to defeat him… the voice continued.
"How do you know that?" Foxx asked again, falling to his knees and wrapping his arms around him. It was true. He did feel slightly angry that Wolf defeated him, but it was only in the beginning… right?
"Foxx! What’s wrong?" he heard Wolf ask.
If you go to the king… you’ll get the power you need… the voice said softly.
"Shut up!" Foxx shouted, taking his paws to his head "I don’t care if…!"
Yes you do… why are you fooling yourself…?
Comet and Keith got on their knees.
"Foxx, what’s wrong?" Keith asked.
"Please… make the voice stop…!" Foxx begged, still looking into the tiger’s eyes, his own eyes filling with tears. He felt so divided… the weird feeling was getting stronger, trying to make him go to the king.
"What voice?" Comet asked.
You don’t want me to stop… you want to come with us… to the king… so you can defeat him…
"F-Foxx?" Wolf called cautiously, kneeling in front of him. Foxx stared deep into Wolf’s eyes, his own eyes changing to a darker tone, the brown in them looking almost black and their green almost disappearing. He lifted his left paw a bit, not breaking the eye contact.
"Wind… I summon thee…" he said in a monotone voice as he moved his paw in a fluent motion, from his right side to the left. A strong wind knocked Wolf, Comet and Keith away, and Foxx got up and walked towards the tiger.
That’s it… come with us…
"Foxx… why are you…?" Keith asked. He got no answer as Foxx stopped by the tiger’s side and turned around to face them.
Wolf growled and got up, his sword ready. He started to run towards the tiger.
"What did you do to him?" he asked, swinging his sword at the tiger. The tiger grinned and didn’t move. When Wolf was about to hit him, Foxx got in front of him, stopping Wolf’s sword and looking directly at him. He made a sudden movement and Wolf was thrown back. As soon as Wolf hit the ground, Foxx pointed his sword at his throat, looking at him with a cold expression.
"Why…?" Wolf asked.
Comet and Keith were watching, speechless.
"Come. You don’t want to do that now, do you?" the tiger asked, placing his paw on Foxx’s shoulder. Foxx looked up at him and nodded.
"You’re right." Foxx replied in his monotone voice and turned his back to Wolf, following the tiger.
"Foxx…!" Wolf said, grabbing Foxx’s paw. Foxx stopped and turned his head slightly, looking coldly at Wolf. Wolf released Foxx’s paw and Foxx started walking behind the tiger. Keith slowly approached Wolf and put a paw over his shoulder, looking at Foxx.
"Foxx, why are you doing this?" he asked. Foxx kept walking.
"One day…" he said, following the tiger. The remaining soldiers followed them into the forest as Wolf’s eyes filled with tears.


I even think that Foxx is acting a bit like a son of a omgabadword???
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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #38 on: March 23, 2009, 08:13:04 PM »
 :shcoked: That's one impressive chapter you have there Foxx.
Very well done!

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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #39 on: March 23, 2009, 08:23:47 PM »
................. ( speechless )  o.O

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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #40 on: March 23, 2009, 08:36:15 PM »
xP
Thanks guys. Hopefully, I'll be posting another chapter soon :3
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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #41 on: March 23, 2009, 09:18:10 PM »
Wow... Pretty good.
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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #42 on: March 24, 2009, 12:22:32 AM »
Lovely job, Foxx. You got a writing talent... A good talent to have.

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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #43 on: April 02, 2009, 06:24:40 PM »
Thank You guys =D
Woot, finished...


Chapter Eleven: Regret? The Start Of A Journey!



Foxx followed the tiger through the forest. The tiger looked at him, grinning.
"Glad you made this choice. Or we would have killed your friends." He said. Foxx looked at him coldly.
"If you hurt them, you will wish you were never born." He replied in a low voice, looking at the tiger by the corner of his eye. The tiger gulped slightly and continued walking.
"How far is the king’s castle, anyway?" Foxx asked.
"If we sleep tonight, we will get there tomorrow by sunset." The tiger replied. Foxx nodded once. You cocky little jerk. The tiger thought to himself.

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Wolf slowly got up and walked into the house, his head facing the floor. Keith gave a step towards him but Comet put a paw over his shoulder and shook his head slightly, a sad look in his face.
"But…" Keith said as Wolf got inside the house.
"You’ll make him feel worse." Comet explained.
"Ok…" Keith murmured, looking at Wolf as he entered the house.
Wolf walked to his room and lay on the bed, crying softly. Why did Foxx suddenly turn his back to them? Foxx’s eyes suddenly appeared in front of Wolf. They looked so… different… so…. cold… And the way he looked at him…
"Why, Foxx…?" Wolf asked, burying his face in the pillow, tears running down his muzzle. Soon he fell asleep. His dreams were filled with memories of him, Foxx and Keith.
Keith slowly walked into the room and looked at Wolf for some moments. He covered him and left the room, closing the door. Before the door completely closed, he glanced at Foxx’s bed.
Why? He thought and turned around. Comet was in the living room, lying on the couch, sleeping.
He must’ve had a tough time. Keith thought. He went to his room to get a warm blanket and covered Comet with. He walked back to his room and lay on his bed, looking at the dark night sky and thinking about what happened.

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Foxx was lying on the soft grass, looking at the sky as the soldiers slept. He felt the tiger looking at him. Some hours later, the tiger fell asleep.
Finally… Foxx thought. He got up and walked through the forest he was about to leave. He walked to a small cliff with a single, big oak tree and sat on one of its branches, looking at the horizon. He looked around and saw a little bird in his nest. A small smile appeared on Foxx’s muzzle and he put his finger near the bird. The bird hopped on his finger and Foxx started petting him softly.
"I wonder if I’m doing the right thing…" Foxx said. The bird tilted his head to one side.
"Chip?"
Foxx petted the bird for a while, thinking about his parents, and what happened after they died. He let out a small sigh and put the bird in his nest again. At the same time, the sun started to rise. Foxx watched as the sun spread its light through the smaller forest bellow and murred softly at the warmth it gave him, his eyes closed. After a while, the young fox hopped off the branch and landed with a soft thump. He admired the sunrise one last time and walked back to the place where the tiger and the soldiers were.
He walked from behind a tree and looked at the tiger.
"Where were you?" he asked.
"None of your business." Foxx replied "Come on now, let’s keep going, I don’t want to spend another night outside."
"You afraid?" the tiger asked with a grin. Foxx turned around quickly and slammed the tiger against a nearby tree, grabbing him by his neck.
"You don’t like me. And I don’t like you. So if you say that again, you’ll lose your head. Literally." He threatened, growling. The tiger gasped and tried to talk. Foxx let the tiger go and turned to the soldiers "Let’s go." He ordered and started walking.

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Wolfgang groaned as the morning sun hit his face. He opened his eyes and looked at his side.
"Morning, F… oh… yeah…" he mumbled. He lay in his bed for a while, thinking. He got up and walked out of his room. He saw Comet sleeping on the couch and Keith was already in the kitchen.
"Morning, Keith." Wolf said, leaning against the kitchen door.
"Hello, Wolf." Keith replied, and looked at the fox "Uh… are you ok?" he asked.
"Yeah." Wolf said and heard some noises in the living room. Wolf looked at Comet and smiled slightly "Morning." He said.
"Morning, Comet." Keith echoed, looking at Comet.
Comet looked at them, trying to keep a yawn in.
"Morning…" he replied, rubbing his eyes.
He got up and walked towards Wolf, extending his paw.
"We didn’t introduce ourselves well yesterday. I’m Comet." he told him, a slight smile on his muzzle. Wolf shook his paw and smiled.
"I’m Wolfgang. You can call me Wolf." He replied then he sat at the table.
"So… that fox was… your brother?" Comet asked, sitting too.
Wolf looked at Comet.
"Well, kind off. Keith saved me when I was still a kit and some time later, he saved Foxx." He explained.
"Oh…" Comet said.
"And now… I really want to get him back…" Wolf continued.
Keith laid a plate with food in front of Wolf and Comet then sat with his own plate.
"I knew you might want to do that." He told them "So I got some stuff ready. We just need some more things and we’re ready to go look for Foxx. It may take a while, though. A lot of people don’t know where the king’s castle is… including me." He continued as he ate, looking at Comet "Unless you know…?"
Comet smiled sadly and shook his head.
"Sorry… I don’t know." He said in a low voice.
"Oh… well, it’ll take longer, but we’ll definitely get Foxx back." He assured with a smile. Wolf nodded, smiling slightly. They finished their breakfast some time later.
"Come on; go get all the things you need." Keith said, looking at Wolf. Wolf nodded and went to his room.
Some time later the three furs were ready, wearing long cloaks with hoods.
"Ok, let’s go. We may catch them, they probably stopped for the night and they must be walking. If we run, we may catch them." Keith explained. Comet and Wolf nodded. They covered their heads with the hoods and ran into the forest.
"Foxx… I promise I’ll get you back… no matter what." Wolf thought as they rushed through the trees.
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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #44 on: April 02, 2009, 06:53:46 PM »
Very interesting Foxx, the chapters keep getting better and better as you improve as a writer. Keep it up!

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