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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #15 on: April 04, 2009, 02:24:34 AM »
Richard stood up straight and looked the speaker in the eye, "I'm only here because I was following Foxx. The poor guy had only just left my little shack in the forest, and I didn't want to see a visitor as respectful as him be attacked... What are you doing with him?"

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #16 on: April 04, 2009, 02:43:57 AM »
"Not going to answer? I need to know whose on my side, and he is. Don't worry, there's no way I'm going to hurt him unless he chooses to fight me, he's free to go soon and do as he decides. You should know at least in this world, it's a smart idea to find whom you may be able to trust. What do you think?" Comatose begins to wonder if she should leave now and continue her mission, leaving who ever these creatures are. But part of her mission is to find who these living ones are. She starts to get confused, but holds her stance. "Are you looking for a fight?"

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #17 on: April 04, 2009, 02:52:15 AM »
The last thing he wanted is to see Foxx hurt at this point. For the sake of his friend, he smiled and bowed to Comatose slightly, "I'm Richard Redvale. I'm a ranger and a friend to those in need. Foxx was traveling through the forest and because he was friendly, I invited him in my shack... He's a friend to me now, and I don't want to see him hurt."

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #18 on: April 04, 2009, 02:57:31 AM »
Name: JoXander Swiftclaw
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Strengths: I am blind in both of my eyes. My Physical Abilities are almost that of a full grown adult, and my hearing ability makes up for my disabled sight.
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~I stayed hidden in the trees above, keeping quiet and in the shadows of the canopy, following the conversation that was going on between the group of furs on the forest floor~



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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #19 on: April 04, 2009, 03:10:23 AM »
"Hello Richard. So your not on the dark side, or are you? Either way, I did say I wouldn't hurt him didn't I. Why don't you talk to him, it's his move if he wants a fight right? So far he seems to be a good friend and so I shall be." Comatose now feels yet another presents, above. Now one above one below. The two right infront and the one next to her. She starts to feel anxious and thinks 'What if there all enemies?'

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #20 on: April 04, 2009, 03:53:42 AM »
Riku cracked a smile as he learned their affiliation, he was about to attack when a better idea sprung to mind. Moving back towards the road, he lit a few small fires, controlling them so they didn't spread. He made a line of at least sixty feet wide  and forty feet from the furs. Once he had made a full circle he kept the flames at an ember so as not to rouse suspicion or to attract their attention, once he was another ten feet away, he released his hold on the flames, letting them rise high and devour the foliage and hopefully kill his enemies.


I hope you will remember me, At least say so to comfort me, You say goodbye so easily, Its now or never, It may seem really pitiful, But life became too beautiful, The pain of love unbearable, It's now or never, Gone Forever.

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #21 on: April 04, 2009, 04:09:19 AM »
I noticed the fire rising towards the canopy and jumped down onto the forest floor. I then jolted out of the forest, using all of my functional senses to help lead me to the Fur that caused this fire.



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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #22 on: April 04, 2009, 04:16:05 AM »
'No, I knew it, dang.' She thought. "Foxx, I'm going to have to get you out of here." Comatose grabs Foxx and again her cloak makes wings and brings him fast and far. "I'm so sorry for bring you into all this." Then goes back. Her thoughts come in 'What about the others, I know there capable, but should I help or leave them and let the dark flames have even have the possibility of them consuming. Well if they're enemies I guess they'll live to fight another day.' She goes in and grabs both the kitsune and Richard tight and brings them just barely out of the fire. Then goes back and wonders about the presents she felt in the trees, but it's gone. *Growl*  She yells ready to spring on the starter of the fire. "You evil follower of darkness..." Then fire begins to engulf her...

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #23 on: April 04, 2009, 04:20:11 AM »
Riku saw a figure approaching and acted as though he was trying to put out the fire "you there, boy! You're just in time! Help me put out this blaze...Ah it's no use, we'd better get out of here! now before we get burnt to a crisp" he waited for the figure to catch up with him before he set off towards the outside of the forest, the flames rising and getting hotter behind him. Noticing the Woman in the sky he pointed to her "you! how dare you accuse me of following the darkness! I'm trying to put the blasted flame out!"
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I hope you will remember me, At least say so to comfort me, You say goodbye so easily, Its now or never, It may seem really pitiful, But life became too beautiful, The pain of love unbearable, It's now or never, Gone Forever.

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #24 on: April 04, 2009, 04:28:02 AM »
I continued to run until I heard the word 'boy'. I stopped in my tracks and listened some more until I could distinctly tell from where the voice came from. I began in the direction slowly, then started faster, feeling and avoiding the warm patches of heat coming from the fire.



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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #25 on: April 04, 2009, 11:37:57 AM »
((Thanks for waiting... -_-'))

Foxx looked down and noticed Richard.
"Richard!" he said, surprised, then he turned to Comatose "Don't hurt him, he's a friend, he helped me a while ago." he explained. Foxx stood up quickly as he felt magic being used not far away "We have problems... and big ones!" he said as the flames started devouring the trees around them. He shouts in surprise when Comatose jumps with him and grabs Richard and the kitsune, then watches in shock as Comatose is engulfed by the flames "Ok, ENOUGH!" he yelled, lifting his right paw "Rain! I summon thee!" he shouted to the air. It started to rain heavily. The flames slowly disappeared and Foxx looked around, trying to spot the culprit.
I are a Mewgia 8D Deal with the cute >83

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #26 on: April 04, 2009, 01:29:58 PM »
((Yea I know, I'm very sorry Foxx... my fault))
~Going back a bit~ "Ok, fine, a friend..." "Problems?" 'No I knew it, dang.'
~Now~ Comatose feels rain hitting, it hurts yet it feels good. She tries to get up but it doesn't go so well. "Stupid fire," She whispers. 'Ok lay here for a few more seconds then try to get up again.' Now she, stands but can't move. She starts to get really frustrated, then looks around. "Foxx? Why did you come back over here? Thanks..."

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #27 on: April 04, 2009, 01:38:14 PM »
((It's ok... I'm kinda used to it @_@. And I manage to post anyway xP))

Foxx went near Comatose and helped her up.
"Are you ok?" he asked, still looking around to see who made the fire.
I are a Mewgia 8D Deal with the cute >83

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #28 on: April 04, 2009, 03:39:09 PM »
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Philly was walking through the forrest when he suddenly saw huge flames rise up somewhere off in the distance, only to be put out by the rain a few minutes later.  He knew that this was the work of magic and wondered if there was a battle goin on.  He turns in the direction of where the fire was and starts off running towards the clearing.
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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #29 on: April 04, 2009, 04:44:18 PM »
Richard rolled over when Comatose dropped him next to the edge of the flame and got to his feet. He looked around stunned and saw a Fox with a blue ear coming towards the clearing. He put out his hand in warning to the Fox and dropped into a cautious stance, looking around for the starter of the flame.

 

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