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Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
« Reply #15 on: September 04, 2009, 04:51:59 PM »
sweet, i'l look up on that, cos this piece is actually for my gcse coursework... and its gotta be crime novel based... so thanks  ^_^
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« Reply #16 on: September 04, 2009, 04:53:29 PM »
No problem. If have any questions or comments or need advice, just ask. :)
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Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
« Reply #17 on: September 08, 2009, 08:12:13 PM »
Someone post in the RP please.
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Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
« Reply #18 on: September 08, 2009, 08:26:36 PM »
sorry spike, its late and i gotta get off... however, to cheer you up i could pm you the begingings of The Commission, A crime novel for you?

((ive been busy all afternoon trying to get this novel for english coursework and histroy homework done  :( .... gah! i shall post tomorrow, or tonight if i can sneak it in, in the time i got left  ;)

edit: i posted! that make ya happy spike? and i'l still pm u teh first chapter of the crime novel if you want  ^_^
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« Reply #19 on: September 08, 2009, 08:45:06 PM »
yeah man tha'd be great if you could. Thanks a lot! :D
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Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
« Reply #20 on: September 09, 2009, 06:32:12 AM »
Is it just me? Or does anyone think that it's a little strange that Kistrev was close enough to see the detail of the bomb, but while
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police cars where hurled like toys into the dock
(and they were further away than he was) he was just tossed around and sent
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« Reply #21 on: September 09, 2009, 01:23:59 PM »
Pure luck that he's alive? XD
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Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
« Reply #22 on: September 09, 2009, 01:25:19 PM »
Makes sense  ^_^

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Bio: Mobsters killed his parents when he was 5; the memory has stayed with him throughout his life, driving him to become the FBI’s youngest ever field agent – at 24. After 3 years fighting crime on assignment in Chicago (during which, he brought his parents’ killers to justice), he comes to New York to break up the infamous Commision.
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Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
« Reply #23 on: September 09, 2009, 01:33:14 PM »
Nice, Jelly, go ahead and post your intro.
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Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
« Reply #24 on: September 09, 2009, 03:13:18 PM »
pure luck saved Kistrev, not all those hit will have been killed... most are like Kistrev, unconscious from the blast.... i wont post until spike posts again to show the amount of time while Kistrev is unconscious....  ^_^ and yay! jelly's joined!

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oooh! plot twist!!!  ^_^
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Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
« Reply #25 on: September 10, 2009, 06:04:52 AM »
What country is Kistrev from?

And can I assume that Frankie disposes of bodies by chopping them up, putting them in garbage bags and tossing them into the harbour? (or a body of water somewhere around New York?)
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« Reply #26 on: September 10, 2009, 03:36:02 PM »
im from slovakia... eastern europe.... sorry, i think i forgot to put that onto my character sheet  ^_^ ... i just wrote immigrant...  :P ...
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« Reply #27 on: September 10, 2009, 08:13:37 PM »
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What country is Kristev from?

And can I assume that Frankie disposes of bodies by chopping them up, putting them in garbage bags and tossing them into the harbour? (or a body of water somewhere around New York?)

Well thing is, the Lombardi's are in garbage disposal meaning all the bodies go to the dump with the city's trash; however, all the the trash is sent out on barges in the harbour before making it to a dry land dump. Perhaps by chance, one or two could have fallen from the boat?
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Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
« Reply #28 on: September 10, 2009, 10:49:55 PM »
that's perfect  ^_^

Isn't it about time for Kistrev to pick up his car? I think Spike'd want to talk to him, whether or not he was injured.
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« Reply #29 on: September 11, 2009, 03:57:48 PM »
im about to go pick up the car...  ^_^
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