The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)

[Ghost 789]

Name: Starao Kzar *
Age: 29
Species: wolf
Status: Bounty hunter
Appearance: Dark blue jacket, blue jeans, white and black striped tennis shoes. Eyes are dark brown, and fur color is gray
Bio: Starao's parents were killed by Lombardi thugs and swears they will regret it one day. He was sent to an orphanage until he was old enough to get a job. He spent 3 years as a worker for a weapon-making company, and had earned enough to get a house. After he had bought one, he was robbed by another pack of Lombardi thugs, not realizing they were Lombardi, and has decided against joining a gang. He now works as a bounty hunter. Considering he excels in all types of weaponry, it's not a surprise he has a perfect record!

[Armalite_]

Thanks, Ghost. You're free to post.

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Okay, well I hope I wasn't stepping out of my bounds with Falder and all that. Just wanted something intense for my first few posts....

On that note, can I get a recap of what's going on right now? That way I can think of a way to integrate myself.....somehow...

[Armalite_]

Actually I really like your post. I think it'll open up for a very intersting story as it unfolds.

For a story recap, let's see...

Spike was an underboss for the Lombardi's. He recruited Kitt who is a dockworker for the Romano's at the New Jersey docks after Spike murdered the Romano Don's son faering that the Romanos now have a personal vendetta against him. Spike had a man on the inside with the FEDs (named Callum) to help keep info on ther other crime bosses and report to the Lombardi Don (Angelo Lombardi). A hit was set out on Spike by another family and was critically shot and hospitalized. After learning that Spike had survived the initial hit, a bomb had been planted in the hostipal in an attempt to kill him. Spike, belonging to a demolition's squad during WWII was able to locate and disarm it. A cop named Agent Kalen had been on Spike's case for a long time and was close to arresting him (played by Arrant who is no longer in the RP). Spike got away during the bomb scare. After a little while it is learned that Angelo Lombardi suffered a heart attack and Spike is to now lead the Lombardi crime synicate and making him Don. Spike and his crew rob and blow up a Romano pier that was used for weapon's trading from Europe and the States. Hundreds die in the blast and gunfire. This has put heat on Spike and the Lombardis from cops and Romano men. Spike meets Shiro who survived the blast and is currently opertating plans with him. Currely, Callum has gone missing but reports say that he is working as a Romano man two timing Spike. Spike is now trying to find a way to kill him and has chosen Kitt with for the job since Kitt is an illegal immigrant and therefore has no record of exisiting. Spike, Kitt, Shiro, and Spike's goons are at the docks right now.

Post Merge: April 11, 2010, 01:26:28 PMShiro...I don't know if you know this but Spike's last name is Gambino. Spike Gambino is the Don of the Lombardi family. Spike's son (Gambino's son) is 8 years old...

I think you need to edit your post.

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Thankies Spike! *chesire cat grin*   

[Alice The Necrofox]

holy....
dam
okay i'll change it

[Armalite_]

Sorry I haven't posted, guys. I've been having some health issues lately.

Also, Ghost, slow it WAY down. You went through an entire scene/hit in a matter of 2 posts. Be descriptive and thoughtful and try to make try to make your posts relevant to what is happening. What you do in the story does have consequences. Try to remember this is 1946. '46 technology only (i.e metal detectors in airports = NO.)

Please and thank you.

[Ghost 789]

Whoops. Sorry, this is my first serious RP to be honest...
Forgot it was 1946 as well...Sorry...

[Alice The Necrofox]

thats okay, if it is ur first serious

and thats okay u mixed up the date too. We all make mistakes  (heck, look at some of my earlier posts  )

[KittKat chunky~]

Nuuu! Stupid wolf cop is getting in the way of my shooting spree!!! 

it was so hard to resist just shooting him, but obviously that would give me away   

[Armalite_]

hehehe Kitt is met with CHALLENGE! >

[Armalite_]

Ghost, 1946. No glocks and no teleporting from your hideout or anywhere else. Please make a note of it. I don't want to keep reminding you. I understand this is your first serious RP but remember that this is a lot like a book. Characters in books do not just show up and do as they please. This post wasn't too bad but try to add in a few things such as leaving your hide out. There are no such thing as glocks and that shooting people/cars randomly on the streets of New York is kind of abrupt and most likely will attract police, scare pedestrians, and might earn you a death sentece from the Lombardi Don. I dunno.

But good way to get involved with everyone else.

[Alice The Necrofox]

Ghost, i wont shoot you, but lose the glock. You don't want to mess with an angry fox with a sawed off.

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Oooh bloodeh.....

[Armalite_]

hehehe you know it. >