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Re: The Commission
« Reply #195 on: November 04, 2009, 04:58:58 AM »
"Yeah, the first building on your right." Spike said from the backseat. He watched out the window at all the pedestrians under umbrellas that were window shopping along the busy street. "You'll tell me what the cop says right, Kris?" Spike asked.
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #196 on: November 04, 2009, 04:10:09 PM »
Kistrev swung the wheel round, breaking off from the main stream of traffic. "you can count on it Mr.Spike... i'm not ready to go back to europe, and that seems to be what this cop wants..." The headlamps lit up the side of the building they had turned off to as Kistrev turned the keys, engine dying out, the sound of the rain filling the car.... "well keep yourself well Spike.. er, i'l be able to find you here tonight to report back will i?"
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #197 on: November 05, 2009, 01:14:59 AM »
Spike looked out the window of the building then back at Kitt. "Sure will. I'm on the night shift if you know what I mean, check in with the boys, all that." He nodded and opened the door into the pouring rain and stepped out. "Thanks for the ride." He slammed the door shut and walked into the lobby of the building where he was greeted by a wolf who took his jacket. Spike could be seen limping over to the elevator on his cane, pressing the button when he got there.
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #198 on: November 05, 2009, 05:29:06 PM »
"well take good care then Spike... hopefully i'l be seein ya tonight with some good news...."
Kistrev watched as Spike walked into the lobby, before starting up the car, engine revving before reversing back out into the drenching rain... he was gonna go find somthing to eat before meeting Jay..
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #199 on: November 08, 2009, 07:28:11 AM »
"WHAT DO YOU MEAN ALMOST FATAL!?" Spke yelled, slamming a fist against the desk as he was told the news of Angelo Lombardi. The small mouse flinched and shook in fear as he stood before the fox. "He's still alive-" Spike cut the mouse off. "JUST BARELY! He'll be useless!" Spike was on the verge of tears. His good friend and boss was in critcal condition. Spike took the ashtray off his desk and in one fell swing, shattered the mirror on the wall next to him. The mouse ran for cover from the shards of glass. Spike began pulled out the chair and sat down. He put his head in his paws and sat quietly. His ears drooping down. A wolf that was on duty outside peered into the office with a face of shock and confusion as to what all the ruckus was about before pulling away, deciding he best keep out of it.
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #200 on: November 08, 2009, 08:07:00 AM »


Kistrev looked from the note Jay had given him, to the road and pouring rain.... Wednesday night... Sunshine theater... 7:30pm... Looking back to the road he drove through a red light, missing an oncoming car by scant inches... ignoring it he carried on.... checking the cars clock.. ~ 7:35~ well... he hoped Jay didnt mind him being too late.... turning the corner he caught sight of the Sunshine theater, parking out front he walked to the front door of the theater and walked in... 
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #201 on: November 08, 2009, 08:16:36 AM »
The rabbit was nowhere to be seen, a sign was afixed to the doorway to the theter-proper, instructing Kistrev to enter.

Jay himself was up in the projectionist's booth, looking down at the rest of the theater - he had to take precautions in case Spike found out about the meeting and had somehow planned to use the time to take out the FBI agent.

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Re: The Commission
« Reply #202 on: November 08, 2009, 08:28:19 AM »
He Walked amongst the seats, looking around he couldnt see Jay anywhere... "Jay!? M' here as ya asked.."
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #203 on: November 08, 2009, 08:31:21 AM »
"Did you bring a weapon of any kind?" the bunny's voice reverberates through the theater, making it uncertain where the source of the words had come from.

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Re: The Commission
« Reply #204 on: November 08, 2009, 08:34:53 AM »
Kistrev looked aorund the room twice... before pulling out the small revolver and flinging it away into a corner of the cinema.... "who wouldnt?"
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #205 on: November 08, 2009, 09:14:06 AM »
"I'm sorry Kistrev, but you're going to have to trust me; I'm on the side of the law, trying to end the violence, there's no need for weapons here. For now, we talk"

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Re: The Commission
« Reply #206 on: November 08, 2009, 09:19:39 AM »
"unfortunately that may be one of the reasons i dont trust you.... but fine... lets talk..."
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #207 on: November 08, 2009, 09:30:11 AM »
"You don't trust me? I want you to stay in this country, I want you to abide by our laws now that you're here. To be hoonest, I couldn't care less where you came from our how you got here; what I do care about, is the safety of our citizens, and for that we need to bring down the organized crime in this country" the bunny's passionate speech echoed off the walls of the theater, adding extra effect to the powerful words.

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Re: The Commission
« Reply #208 on: November 08, 2009, 09:36:15 AM »
Kistrev  stood, arms folded behind his back, tail swishing nervously side to side... "my second nature is not to trust... sorry... its just for me ive only ever seen the worst side of the law... the side that doesnt want me here... the side that wants me out... the side... that hopefully you arent on..."
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #209 on: November 08, 2009, 09:47:57 AM »
Jay made his way down to the theater floor, walking through into the large, dark theater with the lights from the lobby shining at his back, "I have no intention of getting you sent away unless you cross me, but that shouldn't be you're incentive to help - as I said, I have friends down at immigration, if you help me, you'll have your citizenship"

 

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