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Re: The Commission
« Reply #315 on: January 15, 2010, 04:19:19 PM »
"They are sending someone to get us."
"Urgg!" the stoat said, clutching his leg.
"Lets get that fixed. I just need to call my boys. Did you see who it was?"
"Yeah, but I didn't recognize him. Some Fox guy and a cat."
"Hmm... well my boys will find them whoever they are. I thought we dealt with the competition. That's why all of our boys were guarding the shipment. Dam."
Shiro called his restaurant.
"Tony? This is Shiro."
"Whassup Shiro. You sound ragged."
"Just got out of a bunch of *cough* debris. That shipement that we were informed of just got blown up."
"You mean the one we paid that other gang for?"
"Yeah that one."


(I work for Gambino, and when i was posting before, i said Shiro went and saw some of the Gambino soldiers there, that's why he could have walked into the warehouse with all of them. I am kinda winging it here, trying to come up with an explanation, but i can change it if you guys want.)
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #316 on: January 16, 2010, 07:22:26 AM »
Paul drove back to the piers. The wolf looked around for the one who had called Spike once he go there. He tried his best to evade armed guards and police who were already taping the place off. Reporters were starting to flood the place to get a piece of the action, asking officers and witnesses what had just gone down. Paul shrunk down in the seat hoping their man would see the car parked outside the dockyard before the cops did.

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Re: The Commission
« Reply #317 on: January 17, 2010, 01:20:35 AM »
"There it is. Come on, we gotta get outta here before the cops get inside."
"There is a sewer back there. It comes out over about there."
"How do you know that?" Shiro asked with puzzlement.
"You don't want to know." The Stoat grinned.
They came out of the sewer a block from the car, and came over to it. Anyone who asked about the leg the stoat had, he had just done it.
"You the guy they sent to pick us up?"
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #318 on: January 17, 2010, 06:59:50 AM »
Paul looked at the supposed man left behind. "Get in the car." The wolf ordered. He looked around Shiro at all the attention the scene was attracting. "Hurry up, we ain't got all day." After everyone piled into the car, Paul sped off down the road and back to the compound. He made a turn off the main road and down several back alleys. He constantly checked his rearview mirror. "Who are you guys anyway?" He asked, looking into their eyes in the mirror.
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #319 on: January 17, 2010, 05:02:14 PM »
Kistrev stood outside the doors of the Lombardi compound, waiting for Spike as he splashed through the rainwashed sidewalk.... he slid his flatcap back out of his eyes so he could see Mr.Gambino clearly, the rain dripped from the peak of his cap and from just about everywhere else as well...
"well... we pulled it off..... i suppose theres no reason to shoot me is there?"
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #320 on: January 17, 2010, 05:15:12 PM »
Spike walked up beside Kristrev. He laughed. "No, I suppose there isn't." He walked inside with Kristrev. "Kristrev, we now have enough fire power to take down all the other families." They walked into the building up to a pair of double doors. From behind them there was music, laughter, and loud chatter. Spike opened the doors and all the major players of the Lombardi family were together in one room. Spike walked in, a wolf guard watched Kristrev come in behind Spike and closed the doors behind them.
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #321 on: January 17, 2010, 07:17:33 PM »
At Moretti's Mansion Jericho waits for a phone call from the Don. Another job well done. RING RING The phone rang. "Hello?" Jericho answered "The job is done?" "Yes, the job is done Sir. Not one I blew him up, I sunk the ship down as well." "Good. Your next assignment is on the table. Get it done." The phone hanged up. "One of these days, I'll get you Don" as he walks out to his next assignment.


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Re: The Commission
« Reply #322 on: January 17, 2010, 09:07:13 PM »
Kistrev sighed, following behind Spike through the compund "yes you do Boss.... yes you do..." As they walked through the double doors Kistrev instantly felt out of place in the large room of Lombardi members, in his Romano flatcap and waxed jacket, there was no denying he was a dock worker.... following behind Spike he attempted not to meet anyones eyes or draw too much attention to himself...
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #323 on: January 17, 2010, 10:56:52 PM »
"You should know who I am, I run the joint up over the market. The stoat, I don't know."
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #324 on: January 18, 2010, 01:19:46 AM »
Paul didn't say much as he drove. He didn't say much at all. Spike was waiting back at the compound for their arrival. As Paul drove, he concluded that he wasn't being followed and got back onto the main road. It was pouring rain, and water splashed against the wind shield. He drove through the gates into the compound and around to the back of the main housing building. Frankie was on break, as usual, having a smoke under the dim light next to the rear door. Paul stopped the car in front of Frankie and got out, gesturing for the two in the car to follow. He greeted the smoking tiger with a handshake and walked in through the doors.

Meanwhile, Spike had walked through the party of Lombardi players to the back kitchen. They walked past chefs, janitors, and young kids who were hired and thought they could get away with sitting on the job. They immiediatly got back to work when Spike had walked in. Ensuring Kitt was following close behind, they walked through the kitchen and into the back storage room filled with crates, meat hangers, a small desk and empty wooden chair. The small storage room was deserted. The desk and wall were littered with papers and held a small typewriter that kept track of shipment documents. the person who sat at the desk hadn't been gone for too long as a cup of coffee sat on the edge of the table still steaming. Spike took a seat and gestured for Kitt to take a seat on one of the crates.
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #325 on: January 18, 2010, 04:04:31 PM »
Kitt sat on one of the crates, paws deep in his jacket pockets... he was unsure exactly what was going to happen next, nervously twitching his tail he waited for whatever Spike was waiting for...
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #326 on: January 18, 2010, 08:00:14 PM »
Jericho exists out of the mansion and sees his Catty friend waiting for him at his ride. "Are we ready to go?" asked his feline friend. Why am I paired with this clown? Jericho wondered, then barked at Johnny "Just get in the car". As soon as Jericho got in the car, he opened up the enveloped containing his next mission. As usual, it involves taking someone out. Jericho looked at the details of his new assignment. New competition in the drug trafficking business and they want me to take out a certain group....nothing new. "Johnny! Head down town. We are giving a 'welcome to the neighborhood' party to our new friends"


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Re: The Commission
« Reply #327 on: January 19, 2010, 05:26:38 AM »
The door to the storage room swung open. Paul and the ones he picked up walked inside. Spike lit a cigarette and looked at them from his seat. Paul gave Frankie a nod from inside before closing the door to the storage room. The wolf stood next to the door and crossed his arms. Spike stood up and pulled the cigarette out from his lips. He exhaled smoke in front of Shiro and looked him in the eye. "Well...you must be the ones who called." He said, taking another drag and narrowing his eyes.
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #328 on: January 19, 2010, 05:06:46 PM »
Kitt lit up a nip rollup, blowing smoke out to the side he watched the newcomers with slight disinterest... though.... he did want to find out what was going on here, he had nothing else to do... wasnt like he had a family to go to... he sighed, taking another drag....
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #329 on: January 21, 2010, 04:04:47 AM »
As soon as Jericho and Johnny got to down town, Jericho realized something "That idiot Don forgot to give us the exacted location!" cursing at the Don. "I don't think you should call the boss that." remarked Johnny. "Shut up Johnny! Just let me think!" after awhile Jericho thought of something "Johnny we need a rat"


 

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