End of life OCC thread

[White Wolf Guardian]

I do have to say I'm sort of against Shiro joining. This is particularly because he didn't wait for approval from the other players or even have a placement described yet in the order of posting. I mean, it's also important to know what all of the characters look like, what the world setting is and most importantly a certain amount of description involved in the character and character development, not to be extreme of course in this request. Its just Shiro's character needs to have a more thorough description of what he looks like and what sort of animal is he? He could be what he says in his profile, but it doesn't say that directly. The character overall seems to need more balance and depth, but of course that's just my opinion

[Vee Katame: His Wolfy]

I'd have to agree with White.
In my opinion, the character sheet and the RP post seem too fun RP-ish as well.
But in no way am I intending to hurt anyone's feelings. I just take serious RPs seriously.

[Chrono Blackwyng]

I can't tell if Shiro is a fox, wolf, or even a mammal....

and the face melting seems a bit overpowered since sound basically travels in all directions

[JellyMuffins]

I wouldn't say i'm against him joining per se, but he did forgoe the obligatory crystal scene that everyone goes through when they die apparently... just sayin'...

[Vosur Aekira]

I didn't go through it either.

[Alice The Necrofox]

facemelting is once in a long while. Kinda like Smash ball in Brawl. Most of the time its just sound waves. Plus, the Faceless under may not be dead   
Plus, he was kinda thrown off course. Magic guitar and all...
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as you can tell, this character is literally thrown into the middle of things. This battle he has absolutely no power and just cowers in a corner somewhere. I wouldn't drop a god character into the middle of a epic duel. That would be just rude 

[Vee Katame: His Wolfy]

Yeah, but one thing is...where did your character come from? I mean, we all start off in a dimension (Onea, Folen, Heno, or the nameless dimension) and the only way others come through portals (like you said you did) is by one being opened from another dimension by a Guardian (with the exception of the faceless creatures). I would assume that when you said, "Dimension: The middle one", that you meant you were starting in Folen so you wouldn't need to come through a portal to be there. But of course, my assumption could be wrong. But I'm just sayin'. Not trying to be rude or mean or anything.


Oh, and I believe it's Gabag's turn. Since I think Jay and Asia said they weren't posting, unless Jay wants to post since something was done to help him by Sicklo in Xleena's post.

[JellyMuffins]

I'll get right on that... but in like 50 minutes... gotta get home first...

[Chrono Blackwyng]

I'm combining the posting positions for Chrono and Mask, and also waiting on White to post

[White Wolf Guardian]

But Gabag hasn't posted yet, I thought he was posting this round ?

[Xleena]

Thankyou for the concern on taking our RP seriously, its nice people are getting to grips with it.
If you'd like Shiro, just edit your post so your crystal appears in the middle of the battlefield? xxx

[KittKat chunky~]

hmn... time to see if Kitt can handle some combat 

[Xleena]

Do it.

[White Wolf Guardian]

I'll show what White can do too on my turn, I've put quite a lot of thought into it.

[Vee Katame: His Wolfy]

I usually have a lot of concern for serious RPs I'm in. heh.

And I may have Jaida have a sort of "freak out" moment in my next post. It'll be quite interesting if I go through with it. *grins*